Reviews For The Ties That Bind
Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 04/06/05 16:27
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

oh my goodness, i just went onto and read the next 2 chapters. they were amazing and it was SO WORTH THE WAIT, i especially loved the end bit of chapter 12 and i thought it would be so funny if sumone heard them, but i cant tell u what to do, even if i did, dont listen cos the way u have done this is just BLOODY BRILLIANT. my mum has been telling me to get off the computer, for, like the last half an hour but i just had to finish reading it. i love it, i expect i will read it all again tomorrow. well done, this is by far your best! i really liked the interview and am happy that jessica and severus are talking again.

Author's Response: Thank you. This has made my recent troubles with the sites worth it. I am very glad you think that the wait was worth it! LOL Thanks again!

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/06/05 15:01
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

Yay the joy the joy! And what is the link for your livejournal? Im so excited to know that the chapters are on their way! Something good to look forward to- thanks much

Author's Response: Hey, if you want, I can actually post chapters 11 and 12 over there tonight. In the meantime, to catch up from what this site's cut-off without me knowing it, go to the link for my website (it's titled, "The Ties That Bind-the Master Character List", then look for the link to "The Ties That Bind". It has all the chapters up there, with the exception of chapters 11 and 12, which will go up on there this weekend.)

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/03/05 12:45
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

Haha yea it really is. But we're very eager readers awaiting the next chapters.. lets hope they come soon!

Author's Response: You guys should check out my live journal. :) I use it only to share news about my fan fic. Probably no one reads it now, but oh well. Anyhow, I've got it back from beta number 2, so final edit is tonight and possibly tomorrow night, so expect it, at the latest, by Wednesday. Both chapters 11 and 12 that is. :)

Author's Response: Chapters 11 and 12 have been submitted to the Mugglenet staff. It's in their hands now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: You know, I just realized this. I really should check my stories from the readers side... It's been cutting my chapters short. You guys have only been reading half chapters at times....unfortunately, I can't fix that until tomorrow at the earliest.......I hate computers right now. Publishing these last two chapters has been a bigger pain, almost a bigger pain than it's worth......

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 04/02/05 4:28
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

he he its hilarious, just us 2 reviewing going: gimme more chapters! ha ha.

Author's Response: Look below. Chapters 11 and 12 have been submitted. It's up to the Mugglenet powers that be now!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/01/05 15:06
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

Haha dont worry Im impatient too! I cant wait for the new chapters.. hopefully any day now right?

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 04/01/05 7:24
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

woo! im sorry, i must sound so impatient. its just that its SO GOOD!

Reviewer: BlackPhoenix6669
Date: 03/27/05 12:30
Chapter: The Beginning

HAppy easter .This story is bloody brilliant... Well im loving this but its taking to long to update :-( !!!!!

Author's Response: Both chapters 11 and 12 are at betas. Got both back from one beta. Waiting on beta number 2. :)

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 03/27/05 4:12
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

its sunday now. :( happy easter btw.

Author's Response: Both chapters 11 and 12 are at beta. I've received both back from one beta already. Just waiting on beta number 2. :)

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 03/23/05 14:24
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

Hopefully the chapters are coming soon - Im very excited!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 03/17/05 10:40
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

omg thank you thank you thank you.

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 03/15/05 12:47
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

plz plz PLZ update. ur killing me here.

Author's Response: I know I haven't updated when I said I would. Some tests came up and pushed me behind. I'm editing chapters 11 and 12 right now. I'm on spring break, so I'm home visitng with fam and friends and not getting a lot of computer time. I am working on Thursday and Friday and will work on it then. I can work on it while I work, so eight hours of editing! Consolation prize for waiting - I'll be publishing two chapters within a couple of days of each other (if not on the same day)!! The only problem is I can't give you a date when they will be published. I'm hoping within the next two weeks (if not sooner).

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 03/06/05 18:29
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

The story is going soo awesome! I cant wait for an update!

Reviewer: Biggs989
Date: 02/28/05 21:25
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

love the story so far. it keeps getting better and better. please dont shorten the chapters too much, cause i like chapters to be long. nothing ticks me off more than for an author to take 2 weeks to post the next chapter and then it take me only 5 minutes to read. so anyway, keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 02/27/05 8:39
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

Haha "the office terror eating a cookie" I thought that was adorable. Another great chapter and I never wouldve guessed that the Bloody Baron would be the one giving advice. Well written, long and packed with new turns as always! Gosh I love your chapters!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/27/05 4:23
Chapter: Choices, Part 1

i liked that one, especially the imact the Bloody Baron had on Jessica. well done

Reviewer: tommywommy
Date: 02/24/05 11:06
Chapter: Starting Somewhere, Part 1

Your story is rele gd but i find it hard because the chapters are so long

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story. I'm sorry about the chapters being really long. I've been trying to make them shorter.

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 02/21/05 19:34
Chapter: Starting Somewhere, Part 1

Great Great Story!! I just started reading last night and just had to go through the whole thing!! Well done!! Your chapters are like 3 times the size of most other writer's and they are soo good. Haha "you little gnome" that was a good one. And I love that Riley and Rohan disagreed over Jessica's "games". I look forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 6:08
Chapter: Starting Somewhere, Part 1

i thought the ending was especially funny, i ove the insult "you little gnome", i laughed outloud at that, and i also loved the convosation where rohan was telling riley (i think it was him) that jessica was playing gaes with him and at the end where they were saying that he lived in reality, slytherins live in fantasy. that was a fantastic chapter and as for the next, is it riddle who talks to jessica? xxx

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 5:22
Chapter: A Whole New Game

that was fantastic! im not sure why, i still want jessica to go wandring and then like take and overdose and when she wakes up all she can say is when they wuesiton her is becasue "he'll get me" or something like that. im sorry, i really like this ficlet i just wanted u to no that, and its just a suggestion, but im sure u already know where its going, and ill be there waiting there for the updates! xxx

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 02/21/05 4:56
Chapter: Loss of Innocence, Part 1

whoa, that was intense, im glad that jesse isnt in tom's bad books, i h8 wot he can do to her, but i want her to do something drastic like get hold of her wand, (but the governers asllow it) or run away or something like that, i know the whole she killiong her father was like that but its like it kinda needs a finale but not an ending, do u understand? dont get me wrong, i think that was one of the beat chapters in this story but its like it needs some sprinkles to the ice-cream. soz im being a bit random, i just wanted to congratulate u, coz its brilliant! i love it so much

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