Reviews For Too Far Gone
Reviewer: liliana-rosy-daykin
Date: 05/10/08 7:41
Chapter: Advice from Moony

it was a great chapter

Reviewer: Hilantous
Date: 05/07/08 7:02
Chapter: Changes

Sorry, I didn't read this story earlier. But I must tell you that you are an absolutely fantastic writer! I loved this story!

Reviewer: kysmiley5
Date: 04/12/08 11:28
Chapter: Meeting The Parents

i liked this chapter, i made me smile

Reviewer: kysmiley5
Date: 04/12/08 10:41
Chapter: Starlting Revelations

WHO IS IT????????
oh. i guess i could, like, click the little button that says 'Next' and read the rest of the story, so this review is a bit pointless, but still, your good at suspense :)

Reviewer: Ginny Weasley 26
Date: 04/05/08 9:50
Chapter: The Night Before


Reviewer: fabLily
Date: 03/31/08 21:35
Chapter: Changes

i hate Peter... but otherwise great story!!!!!!

Reviewer: Rachm34
Date: 03/31/08 16:36
Chapter: Changes

omgosh its over. this is like one of the best stories i have ever written. i just wanted to say its wonderful. you are an amazing writer.

i can't believe its finally over. i loved reading it and now im sad its done

Reviewer: Rachm34
Date: 03/31/08 14:01
Chapter: 13: Reality Check & 14: Losing Lily

awww. poor Lily.

this chapter was good.

Reviewer: Rachm34
Date: 03/31/08 13:56
Chapter: Betrayal's and a Maid of Honor

uhohhhh! trouble in paradise. dont trust Erin LIlyyyyyy! dontttt! evil Erin!

man you are such a good writer.

Reviewer: Rachm34
Date: 03/31/08 13:48
Chapter: Christmas Gifts

awwww. i wish i could find a man like the way James is in this story so good.

Reviewer: Rachm34
Date: 03/31/08 12:26
Chapter: Broken Oaths

poor Lily. i just want to say your story is amazing.

Reviewer: Rachm34
Date: 03/31/08 11:52
Chapter: Rehab and Healing Words

aww. i absolutely love how you make James and Lily seem so in love. it makesme really dislike snape in this....

Reviewer: Rachm34
Date: 03/31/08 11:34
Chapter: Lily's Pain

aww. this chapter is so sad :(. i love the relationship James and Lily have in this.

Reviewer: Rachm34
Date: 03/31/08 11:29
Chapter: No Words Spoken

eeeeeeeek. i freaking love how you write. i freaking love this story. my goodness i love how every chapter ends. i love everything about it. HARRY POTTER IS LIFE. but i love Lily//James

Reviewer: Rachm34
Date: 03/31/08 11:13
Chapter: Starlting Revelations

ahmazing. i cannot believe the shivers i got as i read the last part. man. you are a great writer!!

Reviewer: Honorary_Marauderess
Date: 03/25/08 19:23
Chapter: Wedding Plans

i'm slightly confused.. why lily and mrs potter are discussing the wedding dress mrs potter goes “You aren’t a virgin are you?” but doesnt she already know about the whole rape thing...

Reviewer: Dissendio
Date: 03/15/08 9:06
Chapter: Changes

Sorry but I have one criticism. We know that the Longbottoms were tortured after Lily and James died because in Dumbledore's memory in GF, we see the hearing of Bellatrix and the others who drove the Longbottoms to insanity. Mr. Crouch actually says that they tortured them to try to find out the whereabouts of Voldemort so that they could restore him.
Apart from that though I really enjoyed it. Personally I would not think that Snape is that obsessed with Lily. Oh, and there were a couple of "thru"s. But otherwise the grammar was very good.

Reviewer: oddmentandtweak
Date: 03/09/08 22:18
Chapter: Lily's Pain

I just wanted to comment that Snape would never ever have done that to Lily, in light of the events revealed in Hallows. I think even without reading the last book, one would have known that Snape is no one so bold as to attempt that.

Reviewer: alice pheonix
Date: 02/25/08 23:51
Chapter: Changes

I ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT thank you for writing it

Reviewer: HJPX
Date: 02/25/08 7:26
Chapter: Grown-Up far

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