Reviews For Too Far Gone
Reviewer: Lozzie28
Date: 08/12/07 23:55
Chapter: Changes

i loved this story

it really captured what i thought it would of been like for lily and james

Reviewer: Lily Ann Potter
Date: 08/12/07 19:11
Chapter: No Words Spoken

i was smiling all of chapter four. i loved it =]

Reviewer: fors_fortis
Date: 08/11/07 19:11
Chapter: Changes

this story is amazing.

awakening was my favourite part. that room sounds sooo nice.

keep up the good work =]

Reviewer: Hermicat007
Date: 08/02/07 14:42
Chapter: Changes

I absolutely love this story! It is by far my favorite... You have a real gift for writing, don't ever sell your talents short, and keep writing, even if it isn't for Harry Potter Fan Fiction. The detail and twists and turns, some things were for told, but it's the story that left me hungry for more! I got the same rush reading this as I do when I read J.K. Rowling’s Harry Potter novels. It's like I couldn't stop reading and was eager to find out more of everything that happened! I truly love this story, I think the only thing that could have been toned down just a bit was the sexual intimacies... there are times when less is more and if you do something you really enjoy fewer times, it is sweeter each time, but you never really get tired of it. So in other words, small doses is better! But apart from that there weren't any real faults and false readings I didn't like, and everything tied together at the end, I also really liked how you just left it as James and Lily lying in bed in hiding at Godrics Hallow, and you didn't go into the night they got murdered, like so many other stories feel the need to emphasis or mention... or go into it with great detail! I also liked how you spent the time to dedicate your self to every chapter it seemed, which was refreshing, especially since you explained a lot of the things other stories don't like why Harry didn't have any other family, and how Petunia had suddenly sworn off her sister after her parents death, and Dumbledore and how he really sounded like the Dumbledore we have all grown to love in J.K. Rowlings thoughts, and it was just really a terrific story!

Reviewer: lovelilyandjames
Date: 08/01/07 13:10
Chapter: Changes

amazing ! i loved it sooo much!
please write more!

Reviewer: rhhfan8891
Date: 08/01/07 2:59
Chapter: No Words Spoken

very abrupt innit?

Reviewer: emilyyxo1
Date: 07/29/07 20:52
Chapter: Changes

best storyyy

Reviewer: danharder
Date: 07/23/07 20:05
Chapter: Changes

next chapter please:D

Reviewer: danielsgirl
Date: 07/20/07 18:50
Chapter: Changes

Oh My gosh! I absolutly loved the story. I started reading after I finished it. I'll make sure to read your other ones! Congrats on a wonderful story.

Reviewer: AJV
Date: 07/16/07 2:57
Chapter: "WHY?"

Awesome! You're one bloody great storywriter!

Reviewer: Masqer
Date: 07/14/07 18:25
Chapter: Changes

I love how u didnt make them die or tell the story of their death because we grow on the charcters
The Masqer

Reviewer: Masqer
Date: 07/14/07 18:24
Chapter: Changes

I love how u didnt make them die or tell the story of their death because we grow on the charcters
The Masqer

Reviewer: MotherBear
Date: 07/13/07 0:27
Chapter: Broken Oaths

I halfway expected Snape to have been under the Imperious Curse... as much as I dislike the char in the books, rape it not among the things I would have thought him capable of....

Reviewer: ronandhermy4ever
Date: 07/09/07 14:40
Chapter: Grown-Up


Reviewer: ronandhermy4ever
Date: 07/09/07 0:27
Chapter: Morning Sickness

that is soooooo cool

Reviewer: ronandhermy4ever
Date: 07/08/07 23:03
Chapter: "WHY?"

she should have waited for marriage

Reviewer: ronandhermy4ever
Date: 07/08/07 21:39
Chapter: Meeting The Parents

meeting the parents. AWKWARD!

Reviewer: ronandhermy4ever
Date: 07/08/07 21:31
Chapter: Time (and love) heal all wounds

thank goodness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

Reviewer: ronandhermy4ever
Date: 07/08/07 20:42
Chapter: Advice from Moony

that was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
sweet. I love love stories i can't wait to read more. :) :) :)

Reviewer: Ginny_Luvs_Malfoy
Date: 07/02/07 19:52
Chapter: Changes

again i forgot to finsh my review, this story made me cry at some of the sad parts. would you right an epilouge? or atleast more lily/james? you really seem to understand them

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