Reviews For Too Far Gone
Reviewer: MonaBlack
Date: 09/10/07 7:56
Chapter: Changes

this story is the best!
i read many many stories from mugglenet fan fics,but this is the best!It's almost like a book!it took my one day to read it!hey,one day,it's much!
and it has 24 chapters!like a BOOK!
you know what you should do?you should make a deal with J.K. and sell this book!and share money with j.k.!I know i would buy it!and it could be translated in many languages and i could buy it in serbian!YES!
go for writing,thats your fortune!

Reviewer: jamesgurl4eva
Date: 09/09/07 19:00
Chapter: Changes

This was a very good story. I loved it! Great job.

Reviewer: Lils_Loves_Jamsie24
Date: 09/01/07 2:48
Chapter: Changes

That was one of the most beautiful things i have ever read, you have a gift my friend.

Reviewer: grrl77
Date: 08/31/07 13:21
Chapter: Changes

wow...i know your done with this story but i just read it and it is absolutely amazing. i enjoy reading your disclaimers at the beginning of every chapter hilarious. keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: Clarita
Date: 08/29/07 22:08
Chapter: "WHY?"

Hey!
well...i did like Erin but now i just don't understand her...people can have really REALLY weak minds...

Just one thing though...i don't think Sirius would call anyone a WHORE!
that just doesn't seem like something the Marauders would do...

AND she is just with Regalus because she knows Sirius hates him, besides she wanted something of Sirius like a baby but she couldn't so she decides to have his brother!

Another thing is...not that i don't like your story is really good...honest...but i noticed that a lot of people like friends that betray Lily and James for some weak and senseless reason?!
Anyway! loving your work!!!

Reviewer: LoopyLoonyLuna
Date: 08/26/07 20:11
Chapter: Starlting Revelations

I am going to leave a NICE review at the end of this story...I really love it so far!!

I have only one critique, and it is that Lily doesn't seem like the kind of girl who would rely on her boyfriend to protect her, she seems like she could stand up for herself. Just saying...

~Casey

Reviewer: isanna
Date: 08/25/07 7:04
Chapter: Christmas Gifts

well that was an awesome chapter!!!

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/24/07 8:23
Chapter: Changes

This story was great, amazing, brilliant, funny, excellent, and a lot of other things too, but I was a bit disappointed that we never found out what happened to Erin and her revenge thing. Oh well, that's just one little thing. GREAT JOB I'm going to check out your oter fics now.

Reviewer: Charisma_tn
Date: 08/22/07 18:58
Chapter: Starlting Revelations

I imagine that Lily is a braver person than this. It works for your fic and everything, but she was in the Order and great at spells. She's also a Gryffindor. I just imagine her being able to do a bit better job at taking care of herself.

Reviewer: jojo_dolphin2394
Date: 08/20/07 6:34
Chapter: Changes

This was really sweet. I loved the ending.

Reviewer: ella_wyse
Date: 08/18/07 23:35
Chapter: Rehab and Healing Words

um, this is sort of weird...

Reviewer: ella_wyse
Date: 08/18/07 23:12
Chapter: Starlting Revelations

uh oh, i wonder who it is?

it couldn't possibly be snape, snape, severus snape?

just a random guess.

Reviewer: Lily_Ginevra_Potter
Date: 08/17/07 19:37
Chapter: Changes

It's quite an amazing story, and close enough to what I imagine is the truth of the thing. Of course, I never imagined Lily getting raped, but then again, the world works in strange ways. I quite liked how you ended it, the fear of the future and the promises of tomorrow are well shown though we all know what will happen next. Kudos.

Reviewer: JayneGealach
Date: 08/15/07 23:07
Chapter: Changes

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww...................

That's sooooo sad!!!!!!!

Reviewer: draco300
Date: 08/13/07 1:02
Chapter: Rehab and Healing Words

not very great

Reviewer: draco300
Date: 08/13/07 0:56
Chapter: Lily's Pain

i hate rape

Reviewer: draco300
Date: 08/13/07 0:51
Chapter: No Words Spoken

beautiful

Reviewer: draco300
Date: 08/13/07 0:47
Chapter: Advice from Moony

great

Reviewer: Lozzie28
Date: 08/12/07 23:55
Chapter: Changes

i loved this story

it really captured what i thought it would of been like for lily and james

Reviewer: Lily Ann Potter
Date: 08/12/07 19:11
Chapter: No Words Spoken

i was smiling all of chapter four. i loved it =]

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