Chapter 8 is sooo sweet!
I sooo love it so far!
this story is the best!
i read many many stories from mugglenet fan fics,but this is the best!It's almost like a book!it took my one day to read it!hey,one day,it's much!
and it has 24 chapters!like a BOOK!
you know what you should do?you should make a deal with J.K. and sell this book!and share money with j.k.!I know i would buy it!and it could be translated in many languages and i could buy it in serbian!YES!
go for writing,thats your fortune!
This was a very good story. I loved it! Great job.
That was one of the most beautiful things i have ever read, you have a gift my friend.
wow...i know your done with this story but i just read it and it is absolutely amazing. i enjoy reading your disclaimers at the beginning of every chapter hilarious. keep up the great writing.
well...i did like Erin but now i just don't understand her...people can have really REALLY weak minds...
Just one thing though...i don't think Sirius would call anyone a WHORE!
that just doesn't seem like something the Marauders would do...
AND she is just with Regalus because she knows Sirius hates him, besides she wanted something of Sirius like a baby but she couldn't so she decides to have his brother!
Another thing is...not that i don't like your story is really good...honest...but i noticed that a lot of people like friends that betray Lily and James for some weak and senseless reason?!
Anyway! loving your work!!!
I am going to leave a NICE review at the end of this story...I really love it so far!!
I have only one critique, and it is that Lily doesn't seem like the kind of girl who would rely on her boyfriend to protect her, she seems like she could stand up for herself. Just saying...
well that was an awesome chapter!!!
This story was great, amazing, brilliant, funny, excellent, and a lot of other things too, but I was a bit disappointed that we never found out what happened to Erin and her revenge thing. Oh well, that's just one little thing. GREAT JOB I'm going to check out your oter fics now.
I imagine that Lily is a braver person than this. It works for your fic and everything, but she was in the Order and great at spells. She's also a Gryffindor. I just imagine her being able to do a bit better job at taking care of herself.
This was really sweet. I loved the ending.
um, this is sort of weird...
uh oh, i wonder who it is?
it couldn't possibly be snape, snape, severus snape?
just a random guess.
It's quite an amazing story, and close enough to what I imagine is the truth of the thing. Of course, I never imagined Lily getting raped, but then again, the world works in strange ways. I quite liked how you ended it, the fear of the future and the promises of tomorrow are well shown though we all know what will happen next. Kudos.
That's sooooo sad!!!!!!!
not very great
i hate rape