Well, I suppose I'll pick this chapter to give my opinion of what i think of the story so far, almost all of your characters were out of character, definetly Lupin and snape... we can definetly tell you don't like him, he's out of character as well. Sirius- I'll not say too much about it. It's actually too luvy duvy...... and you need to work on imagery. Quite the boring story, not much of a plotline you have here eh? just mainly fluff. then this part, considering it's been how long- two months? three at the most?- since lilies rape they would NOT be ready to make love. I would know, I've been a help line support volenteer, these kinds of things haunt you for the rest of your life. She should in reality been imagining snape instead of james there. it would have destroyed her. anywho it's actually not bad considering all of the...other... stories that have attempted james/lily fluff.
Aww. They were so cute together! And then there was voldy.
I love your disclaimer a the top. lol
Is Erin gonna get worse? O_o
Its a very nice story.
awww, so sweet! i love it!
man she has some serious problems i think she needs to take a chill pill
what happened to erin?
my birthday is the 15th of july... and so is ichigo kurisaki from bleach
It was so amazingly beautiful this was an amazing fanfic definently ne of my favs
Omg i cant believe its finished. I loved ur story its unbelievable. ur such a great writer.
Rape is horrible, but I can definitely see why you wrote it. This isn't the first time I've read this story (it is since you edited it), and I think people should realize that even if they don't see how it is important now, it is SO important later. Your story wouldn't make sense unless something like that happened. I think you wrote about it as good as anyone...not too much detail, but enough. (Sorry for the long review...all the people complaining about this chapter were really getting to me!)
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER IT IS WOW!!!!!
this is the first time i read the story but it is WOW I can't wait to see what happens next
And we all know how it ends. -sob sob cry cry-
I love the father daughter, Lily Dumbledore part...that's soooooooooooooooooo sweet.
Haha, I love the "Yes, dear." Part at the end.
Chapter 8 is sooo sweet!
I sooo love it so far!