Reviews For Too Far Gone
Reviewer: murtagh799
Date: 11/05/07 2:58
Chapter: Christmas Gifts

Well, I suppose I'll pick this chapter to give my opinion of what i think of the story so far, almost all of your characters were out of character, definetly Lupin and snape... we can definetly tell you don't like him, he's out of character as well. Sirius- I'll not say too much about it. It's actually too luvy duvy...... and you need to work on imagery. Quite the boring story, not much of a plotline you have here eh? just mainly fluff. then this part, considering it's been how long- two months? three at the most?- since lilies rape they would NOT be ready to make love. I would know, I've been a help line support volenteer, these kinds of things haunt you for the rest of your life. She should in reality been imagining snape instead of james there. it would have destroyed her. anywho it's actually not bad considering all of the...other... stories that have attempted james/lily fluff.

Reviewer: pinkandgreenqt
Date: 10/30/07 21:13
Chapter: Changes

Aww. They were so cute together! And then there was voldy.

Reviewer: pinkandgreenqt
Date: 10/28/07 19:42
Chapter: N.E.W.T.'s and Secrets Revealed

I love your disclaimer a the top. lol

Reviewer: pinkandgreenqt
Date: 10/28/07 18:22
Chapter: Jealousy

Is Erin gonna get worse? O_o

Reviewer: black sabathings
Date: 10/25/07 23:00
Chapter: Grown-Up

Its a very nice story.

Reviewer: whitefur
Date: 10/24/07 10:39
Chapter: Changes

update!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: All_things_fiction
Date: 10/21/07 4:01
Chapter: Changes

awww, so sweet! i love it!

Reviewer: mugglechicka5565
Date: 10/09/07 18:30
Chapter: "WHY?"

man she has some serious problems i think she needs to take a chill pill

Reviewer: anjan777
Date: 10/04/07 18:02
Chapter: Changes

what happened to erin?

Reviewer: anjan777
Date: 10/04/07 16:56
Chapter: N.E.W.T.'s and Secrets Revealed

my birthday is the 15th of july... and so is ichigo kurisaki from bleach

Reviewer: PrettyPrettyDelacour
Date: 09/22/07 23:03
Chapter: Changes

It was so amazingly beautiful this was an amazing fanfic definently ne of my favs

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 09/22/07 18:29
Chapter: Changes

Omg i cant believe its finished. I loved ur story its unbelievable. ur such a great writer.

Reviewer: Privet Desperation
Date: 09/22/07 16:36
Chapter: Lily's Pain

Rape is horrible, but I can definitely see why you wrote it. This isn't the first time I've read this story (it is since you edited it), and I think people should realize that even if they don't see how it is important now, it is SO important later. Your story wouldn't make sense unless something like that happened. I think you wrote about it as good as anyone...not too much detail, but enough. (Sorry for the long review...all the people complaining about this chapter were really getting to me!)

Reviewer: fanwright19
Date: 09/15/07 16:01
Chapter: Christmas Gifts

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER IT IS WOW!!!!!

Reviewer: fanwright19
Date: 09/15/07 12:11
Chapter: Grown-Up

this is the first time i read the story but it is WOW I can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: worse_than_death
Date: 09/14/07 21:25
Chapter: Changes

And we all know how it ends. -sob sob cry cry-

Reviewer: worse_than_death
Date: 09/14/07 21:17
Chapter: Hearts Joined

I love the father daughter, Lily Dumbledore part...that's soooooooooooooooooo sweet.

Reviewer: worse_than_death
Date: 09/14/07 21:05
Chapter: The Night Before

Haha, I love the "Yes, dear." Part at the end.

Reviewer: worse_than_death
Date: 09/12/07 19:53
Chapter: Time (and love) heal all wounds

Chapter 8 is sooo sweet!

Reviewer: worse_than_death
Date: 09/12/07 19:11
Chapter: Grown-Up

I sooo love it so far!

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