i think her moving on is ok but maybe if there were some reminiscence of missing her family moreso than just automatically movnig on
Wow this has been the best story I read yet I love all of your writing but this is by far my favorite! I loved every part of it and couldnt put it down! I think this story cleared up a lot of thing that it didnt say in the Harry Potter series and the way you wrote it made it really convincing. Even though a lot of people said they didn't like how you wrote snape as a dark character I really liked it, and it went very well with your story line. Again Thank You so much for writing this! :) Definantly adding this to my favorites!
I loved everything about this story so much! You are a great author! You have to write more!!!
oh god it's 3am and i woke up my brother because i laughed so hard at what sirius said at the end!
Oh my goodness I could not believe Erin! I thought she was the good one, apparently not. I am really enjoying this story, great work.
Awww!!! Dat was so sweet!! :):):):):)
Oh My Godric that was beautiful *clapping and cheering* i just hate how the endings for these are always sooooo sad:(
That was a really good chapter. But what happened to Snape? Wasn't he coming back from St. Mungos after Christmas? Oh well, it was extremely good :). I shall spare your life this time.
it was fluffy all right, but it was still good. I don't think I disliked any chapter at all!!!
ok...im liking this more and more.... ;-)
Wow you have real talent!! I really loved this story!! I'm about to cry but it's my own fault! I can't stop reading Lily/James stories even though I know none of them can have happy ending!
