Reviewer: Teatime
Date: 05/30/05 16:18
Chapter: Part II

I really enjoyed this! It's so fun to read a pastiche of Mary Sue stories. Actually I've only recently become familiar with the term, and I'm glad I have! I never knew there was a name for the obvious wish fulfillment you sometimes come across in fanfic. It /can/ be quite irritating, which is why I mainly stick to the humour fics; they concentrate on making the reader laugh and so naturally there's little room for stunningly perfect characters. And you're right, I'm sure it's all very amusing for the writer but it's incredibly dull to read! Anyway, keep up the good work! I hope to read more from you in the future :o) Do update soon!

Reviewer: d3pr3ss3dNhappy
Date: 05/22/05 14:12
Chapter: Part II

Haha, I laugh at the whole idea. Especially Draco's "I'll get you, sexy, gorgeous girl if it's the last thing I do." Or something like that. And I greatly enjoyed how all the characters were rejecting Cal Pue because of his perfect-ness. And the whole bit about the author modeling "Callam" after himself. Though I'm afraid you gave him a near human characteristic when you had him trip on his shoelaces as he went out the door. Still, I want to warn to be careful, the whole "Mary Sue" joke can get old after awhile, including a bit of plot would help. Like what is the big danger going to be that makes "Cal Pue" the hero?

Reviewer: Laudomia
Date: 05/19/05 21:31
Chapter: Part II

Ah, of course Hermione loves Mary Sue (and her hair and her clothes) even though she's horning in on Harry and Ron. Of course, Draco shows up for some half-witted conversation. Cal's taken on more than he can handle with Luna and Ginny, I fear. Keep going; this is good!

Reviewer: Laudomia
Date: 05/19/05 21:28
Chapter: Part I

Very funny! I particularly liked this line: "Within thirty seconds the two of them were firm friends, which isnít surprising when you have such a wonderful personality like Mary Sue." It never takes her more than that to become the fourth member of the Trio, does it?

Author's Response: "Mary Sues" do afterall have wonderful personalities I wouldn't blame the trio for becoming quick friends :D

Reviewer: d3pr3ss3dNhappy
Date: 04/23/05 15:41
Chapter: Part I

I love the cynisism. Very excellent, I also loved the part about Fiji. This was pretty good!

Reviewer: FriendsOfSnape
Date: 04/22/05 10:39
Chapter: Part I

How very cynical yet humorous. I like it. Mary Sues are so very annoying, but I guess if we're poking fun at them, this'll be good.

Reviewer: Draco Spirit
Date: 04/22/05 5:25
Chapter: Part I

Nice start, keep up the good work!

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