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Name: bigblackdog (Signed) · Date: 05/08/05 15:50 · For: Leave a tender moment alone
AWESOME fic! Please keep updating... I love how you started it out with Harry and Hermione pretending to be going out... And how Dursley lets Harry out of the house in such a way that he is still acting like himself (sorry if that didn't make sense) The whole dentist drill thing is a great touch...

Name: padfoot1321 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/05 18:19 · For: Drills and thrills
I like this story a whole lot

Name: mudblood1200 (Signed) · Date: 05/04/05 6:57 · For: Making a list, checking it twice
Keep Writing! I loved the way you wrote the story and the setting and well....everything! Update really soon! I want to see what Harry says!

Name: SecretKeeper (Signed) · Date: 05/03/05 19:54 · For: Making a list, checking it twice
Fantastic! I'm rather enthralled by your story so far. You've done an excellent job of setting up the plot. I enjoyed the background you've put into it... makes for a much more realistic fic. As of now, I can happily comment that your characters are beautifully In Character- something a vast majority of authors don't take the time to do. I adored all the little tid bits you threw in there as well: from the brief flashback of Dobby's first appearance, to your use of Vernon's job as a catalyst. Very well done. Your descriptions and ability to articulate the scene are amazing. You have a sort of Rowling-esque style about you, which, of course, is brilliant. I was easily able to visualize the environment, as well as picture each character's look/physiognomies. Your ending of chapter two was well-constructed! It was certainly effective in leaving me eager for more! I'm quite excited to see where this goes... so far, my assessment is that you're a very capable writer, and that where ever this story leads, it'll be worth watching.

Name: SiriuslyPadfoot12 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/05 14:40 · For: Making a list, checking it twice
Ooooh! Intriguing. I'm not one for H/Hr (Hr/R meself), but this is looking good. I like it so far. Update soon! ~*~Mischief Managed~*~

Name: CLY (Signed) · Date: 05/03/05 11:10 · For: Making a list, checking it twice
Ooh. I'm intriqued. Update soon. This is believable and well written. Not everyday that you find that in a fanfic. Keep up the good work!

Name: Mystik_Ecko (Anonymous) · Date: 05/03/05 5:48 · For: Making a list, checking it twice
oo..lol..first review..*yay*..lol..although i wonder why it hasn't been reviewed..seriously but it is actually..making sense and it is cool..so far..but update..on chappie 3..shouldn't be too hard now..lol..cheers =)

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