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Name: lycanthropy (Signed) · Date: 05/19/05 0:05 · For: Let's Talk About...
“Hermione Granger,” Hermione answered with a smile. “I’m Harry’s girlfriend.” - Best line of the chapter!! She says it so automaticaly... makes one wonder... ;-} Lot's of new charaters here... can't wait to see who they all really are!! Another well written chapter by a wonderfully talented author! I am so happy I read your story today. It's truly a real gem! I am definitely adding it to my favorites list and look forward to your updates!!!! Please hurry!!

Name: lycanthropy (Signed) · Date: 05/19/05 0:00 · For: Meet Three-Arm Charlie
NOOOOOO! They were so close to kissing!! And WHAT!!!??? Hermione wants to ask Ron out!!!??? She MUST be trying to gauge Harry's reaction, there is simply NO WAY she fancies Ron (or Don, as Harry so elequently put it - that was so funny!!) Harry's thoughts were brilliantly written. Another 10/10!!

Name: lycanthropy (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 23:50 · For: Cruel Summer
The Tempest was also one of my favorites... Again, your characterizations of Hermione are spot on! We know Harry nevr got out much, so it was really nice to see Hermione as his "guide" in the muggle world. I absolutely adore all your little riddles by the way... Very clever you are!! And just who is this Mr. Moseby I wonder?

Name: lycanthropy (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 23:45 · For: OWLs Without Hats
Whoa!! looks like I got a bit confused in the chapters!! He didn't get the snitch until this one!! Well, i suppose that's why I wasn't sorted into Ravenclaw... I love the little plug of yourself as the author of the books Hermione was reading!! Very nice touch!! I enjoyed the thought process of Harry spending alone time with Hermione, and her alwys being his "partner". The last three paragraphs were wickedly funny! Another instance where I laughed out loud! And then "she grabbed his hand..." Can't wait for more!!

Name: lycanthropy (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 23:37 · For: The saving people thing
I forgot to mention Hermione's "knicker" comment in the last chapter... Brilliant! Great! Wicked! I loved it!! Now on to this chapter... I would have loved to have seen some hint as to Hermione's feelings about Harry holding her so closely on the bike, and a more intimate scene surrounding his early birthday gift... But I guess I can't have it all now can I? Harry's reaction to Dumbledore was spot on, and great that the snitch was enchanted so that it would not only be harder to catch, but that it would seem to have instictively flown back to Hermione before Harry was able to finaly catch it... very symbolic IMHO. I would have also really liked to have seen Hermione's reaction to the hug Harry gave her at the end... after all Harry had NEVER proactively hugged anyone as long as he can remember... Another 10/10!!

Name: lycanthropy (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 23:27 · For: Leave a tender moment alone
Great touch!! Wickedly funny!! To put Harry in Dudley's rediculously large suit for the date was incredibly funny! I laughed out loud on that one! Another brilliant idea from you! I now know I should expect no less! I also love the idea of Hermione on her moped, a great catalyst for them to be alone with their own mode of muggle transportation and forced physical contact! Oh I wish I had thought of that myself!! Let's see what's next!!

Name: lycanthropy (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 23:20 · For: Is it too late to ask Katie Bell?
Another great chapter. So much like Hermione to make a list eh? You've captured her spirit quite well, it shows your deeper understanding of her character... I especialy liked your acronym of "S.P.O.O.N.". It was very original and brought a good dose of humor to the scene. The only criticism I have (and it is only a personal one and definitely not of your authorship or skill), was of Harry's reaction to it. It seemed that he reacted just as Ron would have. Harry has never said anything mockingly or otherwise in regards to S.P.E.W., he has always been too mindful of Hermione's feelings to do such a thing (okay, I'll just hop off my soap box now...). Brilliant chapter! More kisses please! 10/10!!

Name: lycanthropy (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 23:09 · For: Making a list, checking it twice
What a brilliant ending!!! Can't wait to see Harry's reaction to that statement!! Again, I find both your use of humor and mastery of the interchangability of words to be highly enjoyable. You definitley have a knack for story telling... Let's see what's next shall we?

Name: lycanthropy (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 23:03 · For: Drills and thrills
Very well written and told. The pace is quite smooth and flows exceptionaly well. Your use of humor and descriptions of the Dusleys' are spot on. I thought that the use of drills was a brilliant catalyst, and made perfect sense for the plots set-up. Your first chapter was an immensely enjoyable read. Job well done!! You definitley have a strong natural talent for story telling. I look forward to reading more!!

Name: Potter_freak0515 (Signed) · Date: 05/18/05 20:56 · For: Making a list, checking it twice
It's R. L. Moony not R. L. Mooney!!!! You are just like Alfonso Cauron! Why mustr everyone get it wrong?!?!?! *Bursts into tears*

Author's Response: This is now corrected.

Name: SecretKeeper (Signed) · Date: 05/16/05 20:44 · For: Meet Three-Arm Charlie
LOL! Oh, brilliant update! The part where Harry thinks Hermione mine as well have commented on flying to the moon made me laugh aloud! That whole scene was particularly amusing. I- like Harry- was rather thrown when she announced her interest in Ron. But it was enjoyable to see his reaction. Romance, indeed! That was quite the awkward yet imminent moment they shared by the lake, huh? Very well-written! Your ending has left me on the edge of my seat, as well! Who is that girl, and what role will she play? Oh dear... do update before I have a heart attack. ; )

Name: Hermione_Resilda (Signed) · Date: 05/16/05 20:27 · For: Meet Three-Arm Charlie
Hmm, I wonder who the girl is...maybe a love intrest for Harry...? Lol, I noticed you put in, when Harry said...."I hope you and 'DON' are really happy together." I thought that was funny. Did you read my other review, I sent it in like, 30 minutes before!! And you did update fast. Nice riddle, by the way. Well, continue the good work and update soon again!

Name: Hermione_Resilda (Signed) · Date: 05/16/05 19:41 · For: Cruel Summer
I read this whole story today, going chapter after chapter. And when I got to the seventh chapter, I tried to go into the next one, when I realized that there were only seven. I thought that was hilarious. Excellent job. I really like this story. Of course, I love Hary and Hermione being together, I always thought they would end up together. I've always wanted to read a story where it's Hermione that comes to get Harry, like save him. I thought the S.P.O.O.N. thing was really funny. And I was laughing through the whole of the third chapter. Update soon!!

Name: SecretKeeper (Signed) · Date: 05/15/05 15:09 · For: Cruel Summer
Nice job! This chapter seemed more tansitional than anything. That's wonderful on one hand because it helps keep the plot stable and developed. Though, I myself learned the hard way that too many transitional chapters often times leads to a boring story. Don't worry, it's far from boring! Just a warning in advance. I love that each update is just as well-written as the previous one. You've yet to falter in your quality, so whenever I see a new chapter awaiting me, I have no worries about it disappointing me. : ) You've continued to stay true to Harry's character. He's humble, semi-shy and awkward in certain situations, yet certainly not a push-over. I admit, though, that I was getting scared when I read that they were heading into a nightclub. I thought, Oh no... no no no, Harry and Hermione partying in a teenage nightclub? No... But thankfully, you wrote it fairly well. It wasn't too OOC (though I can't really imagine Harry resorting to a large crowd of muggle teens), and you kept it brief. I think it did help show that Hermione has a slightly lighter side, and that they could have a (partially, at least) normal friendship... you know, minus the evil dark wizards and such, lol. So it did accomplish something. Like I've said before, you do a terrific job balancing out the narration. I enjoy the fact that you spend time describing the scenery, etc. I'm just as excited as ever to see where this goes, to please please please write quickly! : )

Author's Response: You're making me blush with all of these great reviews! I don't why Chapter 8 isn't up yet, it's in queue, but I submitted it at the same time as seven. I really hoped they would be up at the same time, but it's not like I pay the good people at MuggleNet to do this or anything. Anyway, I'm glad you like my story and I appreciate the reviews!

Name: a muggle named Caity (Signed) · Date: 05/10/05 22:43 · For: OWLs Without Hats
Hello! I really like your story so far, but hopefully it will pick up a little more in later chapters. Also, will the fact that Harry and Hermione are going to get together happen soon? 10/10 so far, great job!! Oh, yeah, please update really soon!!

Name: SecretKeeper (Signed) · Date: 05/10/05 20:44 · For: OWLs Without Hats
Whew! Amazing story so far! Where do I begin? Well, for starters, I loved the chapter title "Sharp-Dressed Man". Funny, clever, and- best of all- a ZZ Top reference. As far as your plot, I find it's moving along well. Personally, I enjoy subtler fictions such as these. They're far more realistic than the all-too-typical, "Harry and Hermione were Head Boy and Girl and suddenly realized their love for each other one day while studying so they decided to snog and left Ron in the dust," etc. Now, for PR purposes, I admit I've read some entertaining fics that have followed a similar plot. But yours is far better. You've taken the time to set up your scene, which really draws the reader in. Also, it forces the reader to be emotionally invested in your story, therefore making it captivating and enthralling. Your descriptions have been brilliant too! Particularly in the most recent chapter, I loved how you described Harry's flying scene. Your style allowed me to visualize everything, and it flowed perfectly so I could feel as if I were on the broom with him, whipping and turning as he did. Great job. Everyone seems to be In Character as well, which is always a HUGE plus! I didn't spot any canon errors, nor spelling/grammar mistakes. You truly have a knack for story-telling, and you've succeeded in capturing my eye (which is difficult, to say the least)! Very, very nice job. I'll remain on the look-out for more updates, and I do hope they come quickly!!

Name: Inspireroflove9191 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/05 17:12 · For: Drills and thrills
This ttory is really good. I could just imagine the shock Harry gets when he sees Hermione. If it was me I would probably run up to her and now care. Oh well, it doesn't matter, it's your story and it's really good. H/Hr forever! R=10

Name: SiriusStar07 (Signed) · Date: 05/10/05 13:36 · For: Drills and thrills
Can't wiat for more of this story... its a bit slow right now.. i want to know how harry feels, he seems a bit overwhelmed... does he feel anything for her??? UPDATE SOON! anxious to read more

Name: SwordofGryffindor (Signed) · Date: 05/10/05 12:20 · For: OWLs Without Hats
Not a bad story, I personally hope the plot picks up a bit more in later chapters. But as a native Texan I like the fact that Texas gets its own embassy, thus being its own country

Name: Grimme (Signed) · Date: 05/09/05 1:13 · For: Leave a tender moment alone
I love it! Excellent idea for getting them started out! Update soon, please! Awaiting the next chapter with great anticipation!

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