Reviewer: The Foreign Quill
Date: 08/25/05 5:43
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

I have read this about four times now and every single time I cry my eyes out. It's just so beautiful. You can see them , the characters hazing over the computer screen until their pain is rippling into you. This is just one of the best bit s of fanfiction ever. You should defenitely become a writer and have your words bound into a proper book. Absolutely amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Sophia Mack
Date: 08/24/05 1:49
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

Really godd, love it! Just, you made it sound a bit like Lily was in love with all of the Marauders! Otherwise, fantastic!

Reviewer: Garbage
Date: 08/23/05 1:58
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

absolutely fantastic!! i especially loved the way you described sirius, and when lily was wondering if the world stopped when saints die. u did a great job!!!

Reviewer: HeRmYgInS
Date: 08/19/05 12:46
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

That was so awesome!! I read the other one as well! This made me cry...you did such a wonderful job!

Reviewer: Merlynne
Date: 08/17/05 18:16
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

wow. I'm gobsmacked...that was too good for words. Brilliant work, you'rea a great writer. I loved...everything. The way you write, and the way you write the Marauders.

Reviewer: samantha_wester
Date: 08/16/05 12:48
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

That one gave me chills.

Reviewer: Jazzdiddy
Date: 08/16/05 2:27
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

wow.... that was... amazing. you're a fantastic writer!

Reviewer: Saturn Emway
Date: 08/11/05 20:53
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

A strong, wonderful story. It made me think of Peter in two ways at once, which has never really happened before: as both a stumbling, weak boy and a terrible traitor. Actually, the reason for the betrayel seemed to have more eason on your story than it had in the actual books. Top notch.

Reviewer: dumbledore girl
Date: 08/11/05 12:49
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

this was a great story for what it was, not just a hp fanfic. your writing style is flawless-i adored your descriptions of Lily and Remus. constructive comment: a little flowery, a little too poetic for a story about a young girl and four of her guy friends. but still the best fanfic i've read so far. you are a pro.

Reviewer: heartsinger2
Date: 08/07/05 21:48
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

just WOW

Reviewer: LiLy604
Date: 08/07/05 18:04
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

Wow...I don't know what to say! You're writing touches me. It makes me cry, it makes me laugh, whoa! I've never read anything so deep. You're writing is so unique. It really makes me think. The end was sad. I can feel Lily's pain coursing through me. It's like I was there. Excellent story. Wow! 10/10 most definitely.

Reviewer: squishmish
Date: 08/04/05 1:28
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

Whoa....that was awesome. The end made me cry. I loved how you made Peter more...real. Which makes his crime even more heinous. It was amazing how you gave every character a personality, or rather expanded on what we're already given instead of using the usual generic one. I love Marauder fics but it's so hard to find good ones, and yours was the best I've ever read. Super super super good job. =)

Reviewer: My_AvadaKedavra
Date: 08/03/05 4:37
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

That story was really amazing. It was my favourite one that i've read on this site. I think the name of the story is really good. *10*

Reviewer: FannyPrice
Date: 08/03/05 0:07
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

Here is my compliment...reading your writing is prose poetry..which makes no sense logically. but your writing is beautiful, careful, and flowing-appealing to the senses and the heart, better than any perfect rhyme scheme. poignant.

Reviewer: lilyflower3005
Date: 07/31/05 9:14
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

deep. . . i loved it it was so touching. it made me a little teary eyed at the end. i specially love how you portrayed peter as a real person and gave each of the marauders a new light 100/10

Reviewer: FoxyTrot
Date: 07/29/05 18:19
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

Holy Moly...that was beautiful writing. You deserve a publisher! Wow...just, wow... umpteen/10

Reviewer: kaitlyn black
Date: 07/28/05 16:09
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

wow. i know is lame but thats about all i can say. that was AMAZING! you are an excellent writter, which you probally hear ten times a day, but you really are, that was... deep. that probally sounds lame, as well. but really thats tha only way to describe it. they way you go into so much detail on feelings and thoughts. you really capture, the truth. thats the way i would picture things happening. and i also like how you showed lilys realasionship with each marauder in turn. it was brilliant. and it fits perfectly. remus comfoorts her in her times of need. she in turn comforts sirius. and peter.. GRR i hate peter, but their realationship was true to tha book as well. as they didnt know he would betray them. most ppl just forget about peter. leave him out b/c they hate him. or have the other marauders and lily, not like him from the start. but that obviously cant be right since they trusted him to be secret keeper. but now im rambling, and you probally dont care about some of the things vive said, so i'll leave it at this.... excellent story

Reviewer: Artemis of Light
Date: 07/27/05 23:20
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

Wow. That was amazing! It was definately emotional. Needless to say, I enjoyed every part of it. I loved how it was so poetic, filled with metaphors and simales. You also wrapped that up with a very good ending. You're a great writer! Here, take this. *hands you yummy chocolate*

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! And yum...chocolate! Thanks! ^_^

Reviewer: ermine the one
Date: 07/27/05 15:04
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

Aww .. this was lovely!!! What else can I say? A 10. I really love the way that this is in Lily's point of view as it helps the story flow more. I also like the way you describe her relationship with each of James' friends. Excellent!

Reviewer: rockinfaerie
Date: 07/27/05 12:41
Chapter: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning

Absolutely amazing. Thoroughly absorbing, I have to say - I feel so sad now! I loved the way the story evolved through a period of time without you having to say so - pure genius! Take a 10!

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