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Name: indigoraven (Signed) · Date: 10/23/05 17:30 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
this has been the most emotional heart wrenching story I have read so far, I have read "Constellation of Frustration" many, many times. This was beautiful


Name: Ida Loveless (Signed) · Date: 10/13/05 14:06 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
Wow. *wipes away tear* That was excellent... One of the best fics I've ever read. I really enjoyed the Peter love, he doesn't get enough. How he wants to be like James, Remus and Sirius. Your protrayal of Sirius was brilliant. How he's charming to everyone, but inside he has all these problems. He's a falling star, and I think you captured his character perfectly. It was all amazing (loved the Remus scene's) and you did an excellent job.


Name: pheonixtear (Signed) · Date: 10/01/05 20:48 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
wow. omg. that was brilliant. I am not lying, I have tears in my eyes after I read that last sentence.It is simply amazing how you saw past the covers we tend to put on these characters that we know so little about. In most stories I read sirius is crazy, hyper, and always pranks, fun, and girls. James is always the same as sirius except obsessed with Lily. Remus is the book worm, always staying out of trouble and doing his homework. And Peter is always shunned. always written as the stupid, pathetic tag-along or else excluded from the story all together. I love how you push past all of these masks painted onto these characters and dive into the real them. You portray them so well its amazing. I love how lily has a long for each of them. But i especially love how you can distinguish the different types of love. With peter its more sypathetic love, trying to give him confidence and help him see the truth in himself. With sirius its a helpful, motherly love but still has meaning...i wish i could desribe it better but i cant find words. with remus it is a deep, meaningful but purely platonic love. i like how you can tell how, with james, it is true love. I like how she pushes away all her doubts as she walks down the aisle. i like how she reflects on what peter did in the last moment. of her life. I love the last sentence, she is waiting for her world to stop spinning. I love how you gave each character deeper meaning than anyone else could see. I love how your title weaves itself through the whole story and puts meaning into every word on the page, letting it soak into the readers brain, into their heart. It is so deep, so meaningful, so perfect.


Name: nat089 (Signed) · Date: 10/01/05 0:12 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
Oh gosh. That was just so... chilling. Honestly, I had chills run down my spine when I read the last part. The story was really sad but it was also extremely well-written. It had a very contemplative, poignant feel about it. What I didn't understand (or like) however, was the part about Lily and Sirius. You sort of made them sound as though they had flings with each other... or at least that's what I understood of it. And I didn't exactly appreciate or like that section in the same way or as much as the rest of the story. However, still generally good writing overall.


Name: Dawn Lionheart (Signed) · Date: 09/29/05 6:56 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
This is brilliant. It was so sad, but really good. It's a true 10/10!!


Name: HPFCNina (Signed) · Date: 09/18/05 23:35 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
Wow, WOW!!!! THatwas seriously amazing! I cried!!10/10


Name: harry_potter_star (Signed) · Date: 09/17/05 7:28 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
I think that was a fantastic story, It was absolutely great, it made me cry...but i you dont have to worry about that siriusgirlthru_n_thru (or something like that) Because i think she was just kidding. She didnt want to hurt yor feelings. It really was a great story!!


Name: ginervalily31 (Signed) · Date: 09/11/05 11:06 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
wow really great, not very many authors could put so much feeling into the 'saints die world stops' idea. really good


Name: Liz_n_Elly (Signed) · Date: 09/09/05 18:51 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
Amazing. Absolutly amazing. I am a real critic when it come to really writing a good story and writing it well, but you went beyond that. This is the most wonderful, well-writen story i have read since the Harry Potter books themselves. ~*~Liz_n_Elly~*~


Name: SiriussGirlthru_n_thru (Signed) · Date: 09/08/05 18:16 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
omg i love this fanfic its so moving. except for the part about lily and sirius cuz he's mine. grrrrrrrrr... but other then that 10/10

Author's Response: You know, I really don't care if "Sirius is yours." And the fact that you don't like that part of the story because he's yours is pathetic. I don't care, I really don't. If you have a problem with it, don't read it, and don't review it. It'll save me the misery.


Name: iluvpadfoot15 (Signed) · Date: 09/06/05 21:22 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
i want to cry, that was so beautiful. i wish i could write like that. that was just absolutely beautiful.


Name: Cried4Dumbledore (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 18:07 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
thats a GREAT story, but i don't think Lily and Sirius ever had a thing i give u 10 out of 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Name: bittersweet october (Signed) · Date: 09/05/05 1:17 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
This is the most beautiful thing I've ever read. I'm speechless.


Name: potter pearl (Signed) · Date: 08/31/05 21:01 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
omg that was such a good story! i love it i definantly added that to my favorites


Name: RaeLupinBlack (Signed) · Date: 08/31/05 12:49 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
I love how you depicted each of the Marauders. And I love how wonderfully written it was. -Rae


Name: patronum_girl (Signed) · Date: 08/30/05 22:47 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
Wow. You made me cry, it was so beautifully written!


Name: SummerRain (Signed) · Date: 08/29/05 21:49 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
wow. that is positively amazing. its so deep and thoughtful and so well written. wow!!!


Name: Antipodean Opaleye (Signed) · Date: 08/29/05 2:50 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
You're a brilliant writer, and that's an understatement. Keep writing, and you will go far! Your style is so beautiful.


Name: capox (Signed) · Date: 08/28/05 22:42 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
your story is sooooo freakin cool!!! sad but still cool!!!...its kick butt cool!!!


Name: Aloralee (Signed) · Date: 08/27/05 5:17 · For: When Saints Die, The World Stops Spinning
As a mother of a 11 month old....you're killing me! (but in a good way) Very touching! You're only a teenager?!?!?!?!


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