Reviews For In the Infirmary
Reviewer: Sorceress
Date: 01/30/05 16:38
Chapter: In the Infirmary

very cute...

Reviewer: DarkMarkGirl
Date: 01/29/05 20:14
Chapter: In the Infirmary

Not at all OoC. Very sweet. You know the characters well. Keep it up!

Reviewer: Phoebe Cat
Date: 01/22/05 18:15
Chapter: In the Infirmary

I loved this one! It was just perfect. As much as we (shipers) want them to get together, it has to be sweet and natural like this!

Reviewer: RebeccaO
Date: 12/29/04 12:29
Chapter: In the Infirmary

CUTE! It really seemed like "our" Hermoine and Ron too. Good writing.

Reviewer: RebeccaO
Date: 12/29/04 12:28
Chapter: In the Infirmary

CUTE! It really seemed like "our" Hermoine and Ron too. Good writing.

Reviewer: RnHr4ever
Date: 12/07/04 0:32
Chapter: In the Infirmary

This was such a romantic story. Just how I would picture them to come together. Not to overdone, just right. I love these guys!

Reviewer: Veritas
Date: 11/17/04 22:16
Chapter: In the Infirmary

I usually don't like one-shots, but this one was great, one of the best I've ever read. And I thought your little joke about Luna in the intro was great too!

Reviewer: XtinaFelton
Date: 11/16/04 23:03
Chapter: In the Infirmary

That was a really sweet one-shot, and not at all OoC. I absolutely HATE fanfics that go out of character and very out of their way to make it fluffly, and yours, well I loved yours! VERY nice job, PLEASE keep writing!! I enjoy reading because it keeps me writing mine (in pen before I post it hehe) and makes mine that much better.

Reviewer: Reading Redhead
Date: 11/14/04 9:16
Chapter: In the Infirmary

That was an adorable little short, and I think that it was also completely plausible. I can really imagine Hermione making a slip-up like telling Ron she loves him, especially in the state of mind she must have been in. And it's really cute, the way it works out, because the awkwardness isn't overpowering and doesn't last for too long, the way it should be with love. Also, good job for mentioning Harry, and how worried Ron and Hermione were for him--so many romance one-shots seem to forget the existence of other characters.

Reviewer: Merianna
Date: 11/14/04 3:08
Chapter: In the Infirmary

You aro so good at writing Ron/Hermione fics. That was so cute! Fantastic, and very much in character. Don't ever stop writing!

Reviewer: GringottsVault711
Date: 11/14/04 2:36
Chapter: In the Infirmary

Beautifully written, very sweet. Felt I was right there with them ;) Great job!

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