It's exceptionally good. Keep writing!
it was good. really good. and it seems like what would really happen if JK wrote what happened. Please take a look at my fanfic, Harry Potter and the Last Battle for Peace *~10~*
I wish you would write an epiloge(mind my spelling). This was excellent as well. I agree with HPotter7! I hope to see your other stories sometime soon. Remember, don't listen to the bad reviews!
Author's Response: Thank you! If you want to see more of my stories, my one shot, Sixth Year Summer has been accepted and is also in the general section. "Released" sort of was the epilogue...is it on there? Let me check.
Author's Response: Yes it's there. I should put it's the epilogue. That makes it make sense.
Wow! I loved it so far. You are a great writer and you should not listen to that dip who wrote a horrible review! This story is clever and interesting! I got to go so I can read your next chapter!
I thought this chapter was better than the first and the first was excellent. You are an amazing writer, I hope to read your other stories! Once again, 10 out of 10!
I thought that this fan fic was excellent. Who would ever be clever enough to fill in a gap that was so open and left with little information. You are a great writer and one bad review shouldn't hurt you! When I first published my new fanfic, I thought of the worst. 10 out of 10!
Hey again! Too bad this was the last chapter... I liked how you concocted new scenes out of the little information that J.K. gave us. One of my favorite lines was, "But her brain was to clouded with emotions and medicine." That was an awesome sentence! Sorry about the other review (and not a fake sorry, either :~) ) I hate reviewers who review just to tell you they don't like your story. I personally thought it was good; well thought out, but I suppose everyone has their, er... 'own opinions.' Great job! And good luck on any other stories you write! *~Bug~*
Author's Response: Thank you so much...and yes, sadly it is the last chapter, though the completed thing doesn't seem to realize that! Anyway, I wouldn't have minded his/her critisism if it was constructive, I always welcome constructive critisism!
sorry but this seems pointless to me, no wonder you have only 1 review apart from me.
Author's Response: 2, if you count that lovely period you left. It's a missing moment fic, which means it fills in the gaps. And even if it is pointless, I wrote it because I enjoy thinking about what Ron and Hermione might have been doing while Harry was out pondering the Prophecy and Sirius's death and exploring Hermione's emotions. Anyway, I hate it when people who are so obviously not sorry say sorry before they say something. If you were giving constructive critisism, you would be more specific and not have added that "no wonder..." comment. Reviews like yours mean sooooo much to me.
That was awesome! I've never read a story before about what went on in the Hospital Wing. Very unique. Can't wait to read the final chapter! (That is what you said, isn't it? That there would be two chapters?) *~Bug~*
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, the second chapter will be the final chapter.
