Reviewer: JDR41
Date: 07/26/05 18:22
Chapter: A Boggart, Quidditch and an Announcement

Finally, an update!! I was almost ready to give up on this story, but I love it so much I just couldn't help but check up on it once more and to my surprise ... updated!! And such a good chapter. I'm so excited to see what is going to happen at the dance. :)

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/21/05 13:34
Chapter: A Boggart, Quidditch and an Announcement

yeah im the first to review!!! excellent *as always* .....i loooooooooooooooove this story!!!ive been feeling rather pessimistic about reading/writing fics for a while cuz of hbp, but this one could still be true, and i probly would read it anyway because it is soooooooo awesome!!! FANTASTIC.

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 18:49
Chapter: Roses from No One

WOW!!!! (about not having to re-log in once!) and WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (about this chapter!) oh i dont know if it should be funny or not, but i found it hilarious that harry and ron forgot her birthday!!!! kinda sad for hermione, though. i dont think theres any way that its ron sending the roses.....so i thought it was that chris guy, and i still think that might be it, but then i thought about how draco had remembered her birthday and got her something really nice and seemeed pleased that he made a better impression than her dunce best friends, and then when he said that thing about the corral roses, it confirmed my suspisions!!!!!! .......well, not really, im still thinking that might be there just to throw us off and theres a slight chance that it might be christopher, but my vote is most definetly on draco!! most of the time, i HATE hermione/draco shipping, but its done really tastefully here (if hes the one who sent the flowers) so i would have no problem with that........you should feel honored! .....lol. i am sooooo depressed that the chapters are over!!!! but i am SO GLAD that this is only the beginning of term, and if it took that many chapters to get here, than im pretty sure that this will be one long fic, and that makes my day!!!!!!!!!! you are such a talented writer; i really think that if you chose to pursue writing professionally, youd get published!!!! i would most definately but your book!!!! this is one of my most favorite fics........hope the next chapter gets through the mods soon!!!!!!!!! oh, and again, i looooooove the dreams you make up!! please pretty please could we see more of harrys lessons??? you write them MAGNIFICENTLY........well, you write everything that way, but you get the picture.......:D i cannot express how truly impressed and awed i am.......keep up the AMAZING WORK!!!!!!!! *highest rating ever*

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 18:26
Chapter: Facing your Fears

WOW!!!!!!!!! that mightve been the best one yet!!!!!!!!!! that class was just PERFECT, JUST PERFECT!!!!!!! i am in awe.......that was just awesome!!!!!!!! typical harry to almost miss his first class.......i loooove that hes trying to get them to overcome the fear of the name, and how he compared him to hitler!! and the homework assignment, and just EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!! (i kinda think that grindelwald might have been hitler, or at least working with him, but thats just me :D) its GREAT that everyone likes him....and that last line was AWESOME!!!!!!! alright, i cant stand waiting to read the next chapter any longer, but AAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!! THE NEXT IS THE LAST!!!!!!!! hope the next one gets through the mods quickly.........EXCELLENT job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 18:12
Chapter: The Welcoming Feast

oh, and i just LOOOOOOOOVED that dream!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 18:10
Chapter: The Welcoming Feast

argh!!!!!!!! i am logged in!!!!!!!!!!! ok. im good. just one tiny thing, harry missed the sorting in his third year because of the dementor incident on the train.......sorry for nitpicking, doesnt matter anyway, cuz once again this story ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i thought that snape would stop being a death eater from working for dumbles but now my guess is that he will dissapoint ol baldy again and his family will be tortured/killed and he will turn against him.......whew that was a long sentence.....:-) i loooove the way harrys mind is working, and the way that the students welcomed each professor was PERFECT, especially the catcalls.......lol. i cant WAIT to go read more, but im very sad because i only have two chapters left!!!!! nooooo!!!!!!! ahwell. off to read more!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 17:14
Chapter: Of Lies and Protective Instincts

i looooooooove how harry and james are bonding, especially how insightful james is....it was good that harry knows not to tell him now, and this was a good way of showing why james hasnt found out yet....because he senses harrys dying to tell him something.....that shocked me! and also it was good that dumbles knew this, bcuz i was a little doubtful of him.......and i wonder who the spy is???? wormtail??? i dont know, im stumped.....will snape not getting defense against the dark arts AND potions change things???????? it was great that harry met up with hagrid....i hope they become good friends! :-) i also REALLY love the way you went about how dumbles regained harrys trust, it was really believable and well thought through.....and im glad that they had a party for him.....that was sweet! well, what DONT i like about this????? im hard pressed to find anything.......nope!! i love it all!!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 14:28
Chapter: Diagon Alley

i. hate. log. in. problems. i swear, i was watching the clock, and it took me 5 MINUTES to finally get to review!!!! argh!!!! ok. HAH!!! the teddy bear!! that was hilarious!!! i love how you have some angsty stuff, and then some humor thrown in.......and that dream was REALLY well written, if a bit sad....i never thought id say this, but POOR POOR DRACO!!!!!!!! and OH MY GOD, what a good idea for snape to have a family!!!!!!! awww, they probably died. :-( *wrinkles nose* i sure wouldnt want to have a child with him....lol. i like your description of the muggle store, and it was great that they all got firebolts.....awww man! theres only like 4 chapters left!!!!! noooooooo! i loooove this soooo much.......you are doing such an AMAZING job with this.....am i sounding a little redundant? well, thats because theres im running out of ways to say this ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 13:47
Chapter: Disrupted Lunch

hmmmmmmm i wonder who the girl he fancies is.....(sense the sarcasm) yay for the harry/ginny shippers!!!! i love that his parents are accepting him, and the conversation was great, especially when interrupted by the other maruaders....and all of them are totally in character--sirius freaking, peter being a wortheless coward (HATE HIM), and remus being intelligible--did he figure it out???? i hope so, that would be reeeaaallllyyyy interesting.....oh and harrys thoughts were EXCELLENT!!! i just looove how he was comparing himself to all the other teachers....oh and the viktor krum teaching thing is very creative...especially the part about the wizard olympics, i liked that. ;-) snape was also a good choice for the post.....much as i dont like him, i do sympathize with him A LITTLE BIT and he is good at dada....though his one lesson sucked...you know what i mean, its probable that he would be chosen for the post.......ok im gonna shut off my rant. ANYWAY. i also loooove the thunderbolt, that was very creative as well, and i like how ron was going over the different types of brooms....they all seem to be preparing very well...you know what? once again, i cant find ANYTHING at all wrong with this!! everything is just PERFECT!! GREAT job!!!!! *highest rating ever*

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 12:20
Chapter: The Stag and the Fawn

once again, GREAT chapter!! the next one should be interesting....lets see how harry gets out of talking about their deaths....hehe ;-) (like i said, im weird, i like the explanation parts of stories for some reason) "we have some...differences in our time" um....understatement of the year, harry! (i. hate. wormtail.) thats so cool that after all those years, harry gets to meet his parents.....i almost wish that they wont find a countercurse and he can prevent the horrible things from happening...but then where will wizardkind be......??? i dont know, i guess he really doesnt have a choice.....but once again, i love love LOVE this story........it is one of the best out there!!! AMAZING job!!!!!!!!!! *highest review over 10 possible/10*

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 9:49
Chapter: Friends and Colleagues

ahhhhh!!!!! i cant wait to read more of this, and for the first time, i have to!!! nooooooo!!!!!! i have just enough time before i leave to review this EXCELLENT story........oh i think there might be some romance brewing with hermione and christopher whats-his-name....im a ron/hermione shipper, but it might be nice to see them together....which reminds me, everyone is completely in character, especially when ron and hermione fight....and i really want to write more but i have to go, so BRILLIANT JOB!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 9:20
Chapter: Fathers and Sons

oh WOW!!!!!!!! everyone is COMPLETELY in character here, especially how arthur accepted it and james didnt.....much as i wish that he would accept his own son, it wouldnt be true to jkrs character to do that, so great job, i only hope that eventually he will! ;-) this is just getting better and better as the story goes on......i am soooo glad that i have so many more chapters to read!!! you are sooooooooo awesome!!!! im like addicted to reading this!!!!! GREAT WONDERFUL AMAZING JOB!!!!!!!!!! ocillion/10

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 8:22
Chapter: Interlude

ahh........i really want to read the next chapter, so here's a short one for ya--it was nice that everyone got their jobs, and this chapter ROCKED, but i cant stand not reading anymore, so ill try to leave a longer reveiw next time!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 8:10
Chapter: Job Offer

YEEEESSSSS!!!!!!!!!! i dont know why, but i always love the explanation part in a story, so i cant wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!! (so glad i dont have to) this is really written so so so so so so so so so so so so SO well.......you couldnt have done a better job with this, it ROCKS!!!!! a lot of times, i looooove the concept in a story but i HATE how corny or rushed or something else it is, but this is just PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT!!!!!! pooooooor poor harry.....cant wait to see how james will reat!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 7:47
Chapter: Talking Time

how many times must i say WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is such an excellent story, i dont know where to start!! harry could be a very useful asset to the order, but i doubt that theyd trust him.......i wonder if one or more of them will go exploring at hogwarts....? i cant wait to see more marauder/baby harry action.....this is looking sooooooo good........i hope you know how BRILLIANT your story is!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job on this.....erm, yes, again.....keep up the awesome work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 7:27
Chapter: Reunion

i. love. this. story. you are doing such an AWESOME job with this.....just everything about it.....the concept, the way its written....just EVERYTHING!!!! you are truly a talented writer.....i really cant express how impressed i am with this BRILLIANT story.....i wonder if anyone will find out/if harry will see his minime........??????? i dont know, but i do know that whatever happens, i will LOVE it!!!!!!!!! great job on yet another AMAZING chapter.......i wish that more people had reviewed for you, because you deserve it!!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 7:09
Chapter: Friend or Foe?

ahh!! i cant explain how much i looooooove this story!!!!!!!! i wonder what james's reaction will be.....that is, if he finds out......i hope he does!!! i am soooo glad that i have so many more chapters to read, and i am soooo glad that i came across this story!!! its a shame that there arent many reviews here, because this is one that deserves it!!!!! once again, i want to write more, but it is impossible right now.....because I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT job!! 1010101011010101010/10

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/07/05 6:55
Chapter: Proferre Tempus

i am no latin whiz, but it was great that you looked it up instead of just guessing.....i love when authors do research. once again, this ROCKED!!! oooh harry really needs to let them know that its not his hero complex, that he has to fight him!! oh well.....this is a really great original idea, and i cant WAIT to go read more and see what happens when they go back in time.......creative on baldys part (and yours) lol. anyway, cant write more cuz i am SO intrigued by this.......AMAZING job!!!!!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 07/06/05 19:25
Chapter: As the Years passed

um........WOW???!!! this is the BEST explanation chapter i have EVER read!!!!! i loooooooove how draco turned good, and what he said about his father.....i wonder who the romance is between........? i dont know.....i just LOVE LOVE LOVE everything about it!!!!!!!! its kinda sad that harry got into drugs, but what canya do.....anyway it doesnt matter cuz this is the best!!!!! i cant WAIT to see what happens next....so, i dont think i will!! there is soooo much more that i could say, but i am really eager to see whats coming next, so.......see ya next chapter!

Reviewer: Miss Radcliffe
Date: 06/15/05 14:57
Chapter: Roses from No One

wow, this is a really good story! you should be proud that i sat in front of this screen reading your story for 3 hours instead of doing a 5 paragraph essay that was due the next day! i wasn't sure if you were going to pair up harry and hermione and i was RELIEVED when harry described his crush as a fiery young red head that has a head shorter than him. the plot of the story is so cool and creative. i've never read another story with a plot like this before. you should be so proud. good work! 10/10! update soon!

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