Reviewer: skywalker
Date: 05/06/07 14:41
Chapter: A Boggart, Quidditch and an Announcement

I was wondering about the name Hayden. ;) I have to agree with you.

Great story!!!

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 05/03/07 17:29
Chapter: As the Years passed

ok here it is im desprete to know the pairing (luv the story so far but confussed about shipping) so if i can have it then thank you very mutch!

Reviewer: CheddarTrek
Date: 04/15/07 8:20
Chapter: Turning Points

Great story you've got here! I know I've really enjoyed reading it over the past 2 or 3 days.

You've done great characterizations, first of all. I can easily imagine the kids in canon growing up to become the young adults you've painted here.

I also enjoy reading your Dumbledore, and I'm glad that your fic isn't riddled with distrust for him. Granted, they're being careful with how they handle him (and everyone else), but for the most part it's good to see them trusting each other. I think I agree with Harry about the idea of not changing anything though... Bah. ;)

You've also handled the time travel aspect very well. They're keeping secrets, but the secret keeping isn't the primary plot. That always gets old.

Also, it's a bit hard to imagine that Harry isn't taking the fight more to Voldemort. You've explained that though, by having him realize the dangers of changing the time-line. Kudos.

Kind of hard to see that Ron and Hermione are playing Quidditch and Teaching in their "real" time instead of putting all their energies into the war effort. I wouldn't have thought Harry would join the Aurors so soon either, but it does make some sense. Still, these things aren't vital to the story, so they work out just fine.

Kudos for a great story, and I know I'm not the only one waiting anxiously for an update, so please keep up the awesome work!

Reviewer: Bopbopgirl
Date: 03/21/07 3:18
Chapter: Turning Points

Im really diggin this fic. its awesome. i luv harry's character, kinda lonely and stuff but awesome. keep it up!

Reviewer: sweetbee
Date: 03/19/07 15:06
Chapter: Turning Points

i love the whole ginny and lance but in the other chapter about harry and him having lunch with his parents is alwsome i love the giiny part

Reviewer: Bopbopgirl
Date: 03/01/07 0:45
Chapter: Repercussions

Really awsome story. keep it up

Reviewer: Elf01
Date: 02/27/07 5:38
Chapter: Turning Points

I've really enjoyed the story so far and this chapter was worth the wait.

The story in general

I liked that James didn't trust Harry at first and that Sirus doesn't trust him. It makes it more believable. If you're involved in a war, even if you're a wizard, it's hard to believe that yo'r son (or in Sirus's case, godson) has come back in time. Especially when he has attacked your best friend. It was nice to see Harry build a relationship with his parents, and it would be like Remus to figure out the truth.

Now for chapter

It was surprising that it was Lily, and not James who reacted badly, and it will be interesting to find out how they react when they meet Peter. I don't think that Lily will be able to hold her temper.

Dumbledore's comment made me wonder about the effects of defeating Voldemort in this time, before he can attack Harry. So if Harry defeats Voldemort before returning I hope you do one chapter with Harry in his own time, and one showing how things worked out in the alternate timeline.

As annoyed as I am about the cliffhanger it leaves me wanting to read the next chapter. SO UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: hjpotterfan41
Date: 02/26/07 21:44
Chapter: Turning Points

You are doing a great job. This is really a great story. Keep it coming. Dont make us wait to long.

Reviewer: A_Pink_lady
Date: 02/26/07 13:56
Chapter: Turning Points

No! You cant do that to me! You cant leave such a cliffie!!
I love this story, even though i dont like what dumbledore said about not changing the time, i do see the reason behind it. i think the weasleys would be able to make anyone feel welcome! Lol, Ginny getting called Lance! Poor Draco, someone must have spiked the eggnog meant to be for Harry! ( thats wat i think)
It sounds like its gonna be a great xmas, now all you need is for Lucius to turn up!
I cant wait for an update!

Reviewer: DaddiesGrl1919
Date: 02/25/07 17:31
Chapter: Turning Points

Good chapter! Put the next one up soon! I need to know what's going to happen!

Reviewer: bite
Date: 02/25/07 12:03
Chapter: Turning Points

Good chapter, I had to re read the other chapter to remember what happened.

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 02/25/07 11:42
Chapter: Turning Points

Great chapter!!
However, I was really annoyed but Dumbledore's plan I mean i thought it was time for Harry to have a happy childhood!!
Anyways great writing!!
I can't wait to see what happens next with Draco and everything!!!!!
Cont Soon!!!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/25/07 0:11
Chapter: Disrupted Lunch

huh....interesting ending...I loved the part with the mooing present! If it were'nt midnight, I'd have laughed my but off, only because my friend moos at me all the time...we're weird...

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/24/07 23:56
Chapter: The Stag and the Fawn

awwww, that is like, way too sad! I think I'm gonna cry...I would've cried if I were Harry with those thoughts going through my head...

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/24/07 23:50
Chapter: Friends and Colleagues

oooooh, suspense! I love this story!!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/24/07 23:40
Chapter: Fathers and Sons

aww, Hernione is so cute.....don't know why....but she is...

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/24/07 23:40
Chapter: Fathers and Sons

aww, Hernione is so cute.....don't know why....but she is...

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/24/07 23:29
Chapter: Interlude

eek! that is like, the worst cliffie ever even though it's not much of a cliffie!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/24/07 23:19
Chapter: Job Offer

heehee, I can't wait to see how they react!

Reviewer: WunderWitch
Date: 02/24/07 23:02
Chapter: Talking Time

aww, poor tired babies!

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