Reviewer: chrissy_coo_coo
Date: 01/12/08 13:30
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

Still love everything about this story just really want next chappy! Keep on cruzing! You have fabulous skill and i won't complain anymore because you have way more skill than i could ever hope for! Keep writing away!
-chrissy


Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much. I'm sorry for the wait for this next chapter - I've had some difficult events in RL that have kept me away from my keyboard. I'll be back to this story just as soon as I can, though. I miss Oliver :-)

Reviewer: BlackPearl
Date: 01/10/08 21:26
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

UPDATE PLEASE!!!!

Reviewer: chrissy_coo_coo
Date: 12/05/07 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

Update? When? Whats next? Hows relationship going? Krum? Keep up great, fantastic, amazing, wonderful, spontanious writing! Love this story, hate waiting for updates, but you make it worth it, not that i'm saying make the wait longer, just that your an AMAZING WRITER! Still waiting!
-chrissy

Author's Response: Sorry for the wait - I shall try to get back into my game as soon as I can. Thank you so much for your support :-)

Reviewer: Angua_rocks
Date: 11/29/07 15:17
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

update!!! pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!
I love this story so much, it's just brilliant - perfect characterisation and everything!!

jenn

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will update as soon as I can - Hopefully it won't be much longer.

Reviewer: La_Rubinita
Date: 11/27/07 12:02
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

I'm not entirely sure how I found this, but I certainly am glad that I did! Hermione/Oliver is my new-found obsession and this fits in quite nicely. I love your characterizations, and how you've created a side plot and slowly brought it into focus. I must admit, I'm terribly curious as to what the Malfoys are up to. I'd say from their conversation that they're not bent on bringing Voldemort back, but their plans are surely less than admirable... And a little bit of sexual tension never killed anyone (hypothetically speaking, of course). You make it so real - not at all cheesy. Though I almost choked when Ian interrupted was turning out to be a very steamy situation.

This fic is so much fun. I can't wait for an update :)

~Ruby

Author's Response: I'm so glad you found this, too! It's wonderful to hear that someone's enjoying my side plot, as well as the romance I've attempted to create. *grins*

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: jealousofginny
Date: 11/13/07 19:28
Chapter: Dragons, Dragons Everywhere, And Not a Drop To Drink

i love the plot but im kind of confused as to the whole Goyle/ Oliver predicament. I just don't get it. Other than that it is great!!!!!

Author's Response: If I ever re-write this story, one this I know I'm going to have to do is to try and clear up that bit. You're certainly not the only one who's expressed some confusion.

Oliver and Goyle sent there contracts at roughly the same time. Oliver, of course, entrusted his to an inebriated owl, so Goyle's contract is the one that reached the Ministry first, so he's the one that actually holds a Contract on Hermione. When Oliver's contract arrives, it is treated as a challenge to Goyle's contract, and Goyle is given the choice of settling it before the Wizzingamott or through a Wizards Duel.

Hope that helps!

Reviewer: yipeyaya
Date: 11/01/07 19:23
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

i love it...
keep writing =)

Reviewer: Lumos42
Date: 10/25/07 19:39
Chapter: Prologue

So good! The suspense is killing me!

Reviewer: lady_snape
Date: 10/25/07 1:52
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

this is a great story. can't wait until the next chapter comes out. keep up the good work

Reviewer: DMsBloodRose
Date: 10/21/07 17:18
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

amazing!!!!!!!

Reviewer: brownl
Date: 10/21/07 13:57
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

Hey i have just read it again and it keeps getting better. I can't wait to find out what happens next. please hurry with the next chapter!!!!

Reviewer: chrissy_coo_coo
Date: 10/18/07 17:45
Chapter: Prologue

I Love this story! PLEAZ UPDATE! I love your writing but am coming impatient! Pleaz hurry!
-chrissy

Reviewer: chrissy_coo_coo
Date: 10/18/07 17:45
Chapter: Prologue

I Love this story! PLEAZ UPDATE! I love your writing but am coming impatient! Pleaz hurry!
-chrissy

Reviewer: chrissy_coo_coo
Date: 10/18/07 17:43
Chapter: Prologue

PLEAZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE!

Reviewer: twells
Date: 10/06/07 9:29
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

Ok, I have you to thank (blame) for my being hopelessly behind at work, and my children having eaten cereal for every meal the past two days. Absolutely stunning story. I have been obsessively reading since chapter two, and finally completed chapter 16 this morning. Thank you! Now, I know that praise is nice (you deserve it) but you also deserve constructive feedback. At this point I am too guilty over ignoring my family for 48 hours to go back and critically examine any of the chapters. However, I am specifically impressed with your sparing use of dialogue and your ability to construct brilliantly complete settings. Although there are many scenes clearly set in my mind, the vision of Hermione, alone, clutching Neville's book, and the scene at the Granger family home, are both quite vivid. Oh, and thanks for being true to Rowling's original Hermione. I've grown so sick of fanfic that has her swooning and crying at the drop of a hat. She is so complex, and I appreciate your respect of her complexity.
So, get writing! I'm waiting for more!

Author's Response: I shall take that blame (thanks) delightedly :-) I can think of no better compliment than to know that I've so completely immersed you in my story - and knowing kids (mine, at least), cereal three times a day is not a bad thing, especially when it means not having to deal with icky vegetables *laughs*

Neville's notebook! I loved that scene when I wrote it - and do you know, I think you may be the first person to comment on it? Thank you so much for such a lovely review!

Reviewer: kutekat528
Date: 10/03/07 19:42
Chapter: Prologue

I just love how you write Oliver- just how I imagine him and quite the gentleman. I have lost way too much sleep over the past several days reading your story and I am just enthralled with it. It keeps getting better and better and I can't wait to see where it leads. I particularly enjoy your ability to paint such perfect scenes and no rush anything; it comes across so realistically.
I hope to see your updates soon! This has quickly become one of my favorite stories of all time on MNFF. Cheers!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really wanted to write a story where they came together naturally,without it seeming overly contrived. I'm really, really glad people are enjoying the slow pace, and aren't upset or impatient with me :-)

Reviewer: brownl
Date: 10/03/07 11:51
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

hey, i really liked this one. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I'm also glad you put in some emotion between oliver and hermione, makes it all the more interesting.

Reviewer: tomfelton lover xo
Date: 09/27/07 20:19
Chapter: Chapter 15 - And Back to Back, They Shall Face Each Other

WAAAAA!!!!!! That was H-O-T
Can NOT wait for the next one!!!! GREAT JOB!!!!

Reviewer: num
Date: 09/27/07 7:50
Chapter: Chapter 10 ~ A Blushing Bridegroom

PMSL!!! LOVED the kiss!!!

Reviewer: num
Date: 09/27/07 4:34
Chapter: Chapter Nine ~ An Uncomfortable Affair

I love the way their relationship's building so gradually.

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