I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!! I love reading this ship and you wrote it really good. i mean well. whatever. but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.
Author's Response: THANK YOU!!! This is actually one of my favourite ships too (though George/Hermione and Adrian/Hermione are also up there ;P) See, I've updated for you, too. :-) I'm glad you like my writing - it's always really nerve-wracking putting yourself out there creatively, open to everyone's scrutiny and comments, but it always feels so good to hear that someone is enjoying what you've done.
This is awesome! I've seen so many of the marriage law stories not explain the reasoning behind it. The contracts are a good idea, too. Keep it going! It looks good!
Author's Response: I'm glowing from your praise! I'm exstatic to hear that so many people are enjoying my take on the Mariage Law Challenge. I had alot of fun thinking up all of the where's and whyfor's involved to try and make it at least somewhat believable! Chapter one continues to sit in queue, waiting validation, but I hope to have it up any day now...
Will you ever update??? =P
Author's Response: *hangs head sheepishly* I'm sorry to take so long to respond to you! Yes, I will most definately update - Chapter one is sitting in queue as I write (and has been for an ungodly amount of time, but I digress...) and I have almost half of the story written and beta'd... just waiting for the mods here to work their way through the backlog. Hope you continue to read as it gets uploaded - I look forward to hearing what you think!
Well I must say that this is the first Fic i've actually been drawn into since I started skimming through fics here. You've got something good going here. A very interesting idea the contracts. I'll be interested to see if it keeps up. Loved it! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: High praise indeed - thank you! I think you're really going to enjoy the next two chapters (If I can keep them in queue long enough to get validated. Arrgghh!) and I look forward to hearing what you think once they're up! Some very fun plot twists are ahead...
wow your fic is bloody awsome!!! Please right some more mate... friend to friend?
Author's Response: Hey - thanks! It's so cool to know people are enjoying it so much- I wish I could bottle the feeling for days when I have to deal with my boss! I've actually gotten up to chapter five finished, but I'm having a horrible time keeping my stories in queue here - hopefully with all of the repairs they did to the site recently, I'll have them all up in short order! Please continue reading, and let me know what you think - the next chapter's alot of fun!
Wiee Oliver's my favorite character! This is the first fic with him I've read though... I don't fully understand all that Percy said; but basically, Oliver and Hermione are being forced to marry eachother, to stop the incest? I'll be waiting for an update, I want to see where this story's going! Great job!
Author's Response: *waves* Thank you - Oliver's my favorite character as well. Yes, the pureblooded marriage practices have led to some nasty genetic defects, or 'blood-sicknesses', that can manifest themselves both virully or physically. It's also resulting in sterility problems, so unless drastic measures are taken, the Wizarding Community stands to disapear entirely. Magic is also becoming 'watered down', with Muggle born witches and wizards outpreforming their piers on a regular basis. Fun stuff, huh? Hope that helped - and I hope you keep reading!
I think so far you are doing a great job... i can't wait to see more
Author's Response: *gushes* Thank you! More is deffinatley on the way - chapter one is waiting in queue, and two through five are waiting for me to stop being lazy and code them - hopefully you'll let me know what you think once they get out there!
This is good. You can try to make more exciting moments. Something like that. Or else, the story would be just become more and more boring. Keep up the work!
Author's Response: I'm glad you find it so good - though I'm not sure; are you trying to say I need to add more excitement, or just warning me to try and avoid passive narrative? Either way, I appreciate your suggestions, and I will deffinatley keep them in mind!
hey- I really like this story so far, keep it up cause its hella intense
Author's Response: Hey, glad you liked it - The rest will be comming soon ( I just have to get off my lazy but and code it!) let me know what you think!