Reviewer: slipstick
Date: 02/04/06 10:23
Chapter: So, Where Were You Planning On Putting That, Exactly?

The situation hurst her so she can't see this for the loving gesture Wood planed. If I were him, I'd grant her wish and withdraw my offer. And may she find her heart's content with the Goyles.

Author's Response: *lol* Yes, she has been a bit stand-offish, but in her defence, she 's had a great deal to think about, and I don't think she's capable of dealing with Oliver's kindness just yet. She'll come around. *hugs*

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 01/24/06 23:18
Chapter: So, Where Were You Planning On Putting That, Exactly?

Oliver is so sweet! Hermione's being a bit of a bitch. Is it ever going to work out? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Veronika
Date: 01/17/06 19:45
Chapter: So, Where Were You Planning On Putting That, Exactly?

I have got to say I love this story. Mostly because oliver is trying to be the good guy here. *sniffles* SOFTEN UP HERMINOE! Of course thats just what I want. I can't wait to read the duel. Woot! Great job wirting! I love it...

Author's Response: Thank you sweetie!

Reviewer: Liza Jayne
Date: 01/16/06 5:23
Chapter: So, Where Were You Planning On Putting That, Exactly?

Ah i love this story. Easily my favourite, for both plot and the way it is written. Love your work - keep its up. I'm checkin for update regularly

Author's Response: Wow, you're favourite? Thank you!!! I'm going to try my very best to have Chapter 5 (Do Not Go Quietly Into The Night) to my beta by the end of the week, and if all goes well, and if there aren't any major re-writes, I should have it posed to the queue here by Tuesday of next week... so hopefully you won't have too long to wait.

Reviewer: his_lil_shortie
Date: 01/09/06 19:08
Chapter: Dragons, Dragons Everywhere, And Not a Drop To Drink

what happened?! ahhh... such a big cliffhanger!! please please PLEASE, update soon, update soon, update SOON! i think it is fitting in perfectly how wood is starting to feel something to hermione and she is relaxing around him and they can have a conversation without being totally and completely awkward! i love it soo much! it's so funny when she kicked him in the last chapter and when she started swearing in this one in the library, and i LOVED the chat between charlie and oliver! very humerous! please update soon, I can't wait!! great writing skills, you're very talented! -dal-

Reviewer: his_lil_shortie
Date: 01/09/06 19:02
Chapter: Dragons, Dragons Everywhere, And Not a Drop To Drink

what happened?! ahhh... such a big cliffhanger!! please please PLEASE, update soon, update soon, update SOON! i think it is fitting in perfectly how wood is starting to feel something to hermione and she is relaxing around him and they can have a conversation without being totally and completely awkward! i love it soo much! it's so funny when she kicked him in the last chapter and when she started swearing in this one in the library, and i LOVED the chat between charlie and oliver! very humerous! please update soon, I can't wait!! great writing skills, you're very talented! -dal-

Author's Response: LOL - Thank you very much! I really appreciate all the specific examples you've given of things that you enjoyed, and things you think I did well - it's very helpful for me to know what I've done right :-) Charlie and Oliver are fun together, aren't they? I have to admit, I loved writing that bit. Poor Charlie, he hasn't been in this story very much, has he?

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 12/30/05 5:40
Chapter: Dragons, Dragons Everywhere, And Not a Drop To Drink

Noooooo! How could you leave us with such a big cliffy?! Please update soon or I might just die (well not really. But I would be upset). It's so cute how Wood is starting to get "feelings" for Hermione! Poor Ron. He's very confused isn't he? Haha loved the bit where she was swearing.

Author's Response: *glomps* I love reading your comments ;p It's very nice how you give specific events, or examples from the story that you like. Thank you!

Reviewer: slipstick
Date: 12/14/05 22:50
Chapter: The Importance of Being Oliver

This is rather like Hermione in Book 6. Maybe the strain of the war blocked her growing emotionaly to where she could see Wood's point of view. Not suprised Ron is the same; he'll never grow up. Realy shocked to find Goyle in on this. We don't even know if Hermioe can cook.

Author's Response: Do you think so? It's nice to hear that I've managed to incorporate the changes in the characters from the newest book. Glad you thought Ron was believable too. (He's so much fun to write) LOL - no, we don't know if Hermione can cook, do we? ^_^

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 12/12/05 1:18
Chapter: The Importance of Being Oliver

Loved it! I got a bit confused though. What was happening with Goyle? Did Ginny know that it was Wood but Hermione still thought that it was Goyle? Oh, I'm so confused. Anyway. Totally loved it. I don't remember if you mentioned it in an earlier chapter, but I didn't realise that Hermione was over 20, I started reading this story a while ago and I kinda forgot some stuff.

Author's Response: Ah, yes, the elusive Mr. Goyle. He has yet to make an appearence, hasn't he? *lol* Who knows what (if anything) goes on inside his little piggy brain.

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 12/12/05 1:16
Chapter: The Importance of Being Oliver

Loved it! I got a bit confused though. What was happening with Goyle? Did Ginny know that it was Wood but Hermione still thought that it was Goyle? Oh, I'm so confused. Anyway. Totally loved it. I don't remember if you mentioned it in an earlier chapter, but I didn't realise that Hermione was over 20, I started reading this story a while ago and I kinda forgot some stuff.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love reading your reviews. It was a bit confusing, there for a while, was't it? Let's see; Ginny read the contract that Hermione recieved via owl in the first chapter. That was Goyle's contract (Oliver's got lost, if you remember, because his owl was drunk, cortesy of George ;p), so Ginny knew nothing of Oliver's contract, either. Which is why she looked at Harry so strangely when he suddenly came out with Wood's name. Does that help at all? If I ever re-write this, I may try to make that part alittle more straight forward, but it might lose some of it's charm if I make it less like a game of 'follow-the-queen'... ;-)

Reviewer: Liza Jayne
Date: 12/11/05 22:32
Chapter: Prologue

This is definately in the top 10 fan fic's ive ever read! Keep going - i need to read more =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Liza Jayne
Date: 12/11/05 22:32
Chapter: Prologue

This is definately in the top 10 fan fic's ive ever read! Keep going - i need to read more =)

Reviewer: Liza Jayne
Date: 12/11/05 22:31
Chapter: Prologue

This is definately in the top 10 fan fic's ive ever read! Keep going - i need to read more =)

Reviewer: Liza Jayne
Date: 12/11/05 22:31
Chapter: Prologue

This is definately in the top 10 fan fic's ive ever read! Keep going - i need to read more =)

Author's Response: Wow- thank you very much! I'll try and have my update posted to the queue by mid-nest week... *fingers crossed*

Reviewer: Liza_B
Date: 12/11/05 11:10
Chapter: The Importance of Being Oliver

it's adorable!! why doesn't hermione just pick ron tho? arghhh.

Author's Response: Lol- can't let Ron have her all the time! :-)

Reviewer: slipstick
Date: 12/08/05 5:56
Chapter: Something Wicked This Way Came

“Gorgeous? She’s pleasant enough, I suppose." To understand this we need to know if your Hermione is based on the illistrations and text of the books or Emma Watson. But the story is shaping up as a real tear jerker/thriller. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: I've been really horrible by not responding before now - I'm sorry! My vision of Hermione is actually based on the story discriptions, though of course I have a little leeway, as this is now set a few years into the future. I don't see Hermione as being stunningly beautiful, at least not in the conventional sense. *lol* I'm glad you like it so far! I hope you've enjoyed the newest chapters as well - I have to admit, I was alittle nervous about them. ;P

Reviewer: slipstick
Date: 12/08/05 5:18
Chapter: Prologue

HAR! When I started reading Percy's part I thought Hermione was being forced to marry Draco. When you look at it that way, a life with Wood wouldn't be bad. Good plot development. Holds my attention and draws me on to the next bit.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working hard on Chapter 6, and hope to have it to my beta for approval by the end of the week. Hope you get as 'drawn in' to the next part :-)

Reviewer: unseen
Date: 11/30/05 0:44
Chapter: Something Wicked This Way Came

I must say that I'm just as enthralled with this story as I was when I read the first chapter. Really glad to finally get to read the next of the story. I'm hopeing for more chapters! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't believe I haven't responed before now! I'm so sorry :-( Hopefully you've enjoyed the new chapters enough to make up for my horrible forgetfulness!

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 11/27/05 22:12
Chapter: Something Wicked This Way Came

Hey. I really love your story! I usually only read James/Lily Harry/Ginny or Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione but I decided to try something different and you made me really glad that I did. I'm so excited about seeing how this story's going to develop. And if Hermione will accept and everything. Hope you can post the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you're enjoying this so much, especially since it's so different from what you normally read. I hope you've continuued to enjoy it as the newest chapters have come out! I'm going to try to have chapter 6 to my beta by the end of the week, so, depending on the need for corrections and re-writes, I may have it in queue here as early as tuesday of next week... ^_^

Reviewer: Hokey
Date: 08/27/05 9:15
Chapter: Something Wicked This Way Came

Yay, finally another chapter! But I guess it was the moderators' fault, not yours. Anyway, this story is great! Got a bit confused there in the middle, but all in all, I liked it a lot! Can't wait to read about Hermione's reaction, and if Oliver's going to try and take it back!

Author's Response: See, an update and everything ;P The middle is slightly confusing, but I'm glad to hear that you've enjoyed it! I hope Hermione's reaction was worth the wait.

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