Reviewer: isisspirit
Date: 08/30/06 2:04
Chapter: Something Wicked This Way Came

This is going really well, i am looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you've continued to enjoy the story :-)

Reviewer: isisspirit
Date: 08/30/06 1:51
Chapter: Prologue

BRILLIANT, this is flawless, it adhere's perfectly to rowlings style, spot on, great work, best fanfic i have ever read :)

Author's Response: Wow - thank you so much!

Reviewer: gollysandra
Date: 08/21/06 8:31
Chapter: The Art Of Making War

ARGGHHH.

Do hurry w/ the update, you're killing me here!

hahaha.


Author's Response: LOL - sorry to be so long between updates. I'm excited to hear that you're enjoying it so much, and I will try to be more conscientious about submitting chapters quickly. ~Ny

Reviewer: hogwartsduchess
Date: 08/11/06 12:10
Chapter: The Art Of Making War

Things Not To Be Thought About Hermione, Especially When She’s Right Bloody There

I've told you many times how much I love this, and it is still true. I look for it when I read this chapter! It's just so cute, clever, and so darn Oliver that I can't help but laugh.

Have I told you before how much I adore your characterisation of Hermione and Oliver in this fic? If not, I should have. Oliver is such an underdeveloped character in the books, nothing more than a Quidditch-obsessed freak, but you've turned him into a real person - and a damn handsome, intriguing and sexy hero!

And Hermione is wonderful. She's still clever, but I love how, despite her wonderful understanding of all Ron and Harry's relationship mishaps, she's so uncertain about her own feelings and confused about what things mean. It's wonderful to see her in that light. She's less a Know-It-All and more a person than I've ever seen her and it's beautiful. You've taken the hidden deapths of Hermione that have only been hinted at in the books and brought them to the forefront in such a way that she is still Hermione, but a softer, more lovable Hermione. Gorgeous.

Your dialogue is believable, not easy when you're writing in an accent (you should see the trouble I'm having with Viktor). Your characters truly jump off the page and your story has strayed from just a 'Marriage Law' fic into a clever mystery, from which the reader is left to wonder what will happen next - not just to Hermione, but to the community as a whole. Brilliantly done.

I adore this story, and I have to give it credit for being my inspiration for one of my stories. You're wonderful dear, and so is your story.

~Love, Kasey

Author's Response: Every time I begin to get distracted during the writing process, every time I start to feel discouraged and think about possibly shelving this, every time I begin to feel like I'm struggling to hold the grains of the plot in my fist I come back to read this review. You've kept me writing when I felt overwhelmed with all I had to do with RL, you kept me writing when I couldn't find a creative thought with both hands and a map, and you kept me writing when I could no longer see the merit it what I had started. This is as much your accomplishment as mine, and I love you for it.

Reviewer: hogwartsduchess
Date: 08/11/06 12:02
Chapter: All's Fair In Love And Cabbages

Wicked, wicked writer!!!!

Excellent ending point - though, I've told you that before. This was such a project for you, and I love how you kept your cool and grace through the whole thing. It's come out wonderfully, and I know it gets even better!

Author's Response: *huggles* Having you're ear to discuss to , your shoulder to lean on, and your patience to buffer mine went a long way to giving me cool grace under pressure ;-)

Reviewer: votehermione
Date: 08/10/06 2:31
Chapter: The Art Of Making War

beautiful chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: relichunter18
Date: 08/09/06 20:27
Chapter: The Art Of Making War

I love your story- I'd never thought of Hermione and Oliver before, and I like his accent. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! You wouldn't believe how many headaches his accent gave me ;-) ~Ny

Reviewer: dreamer0311
Date: 08/09/06 17:36
Chapter: The Art Of Making War

I'm loving this story! Can't wait to find out how it all ends...(hint hint!) :) Great job!

Author's Response: We're a ways from the end, but as the last chapter truly said, it's 'further back than in' at this point *lol* Thank you so much for your continued praise and encouragement ~Ny

Reviewer: ronnyc718
Date: 08/08/06 23:46
Chapter: The Art Of Making War

Yay!! I'm fairly new to your story, but I've fallen in love. I read all of it in one day up until the last chapter - yeah, the uber-cliffhanger. Yay for updates, good writing, and awesome character interactions!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It is a lot all in one sitting - that's awesome that I kept you that involved to the very last chapter :-) ~ Ny

Reviewer: dragon mystique
Date: 08/08/06 23:15
Chapter: The Art Of Making War

aww gotta love that goofy grin! I absolutly love the way you have this shy awkwardness between them. It's sweet... but there is also a tension that is hard to forget.. it makes it so..real. No relationship is perfect and I think you have done a wonderful job at showing the finer points of this. Keep up the good work! You've just gained a Hermione/Oliver shipper....**grins**

Author's Response: Thank you! I've enjoyed writing their interaction, and it's wonderful to hear that it's coming across to my readers the way I see it in my head. ~Ny

Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 08/08/06 21:30
Chapter: The Art Of Making War

Well you were wrong. You DO deserve all that praise. This story continues to get me excited. I loved this chapter so much. Once again, I must repeat that you are exceptionally talented. I'm very proud that you got this chapter out so quickly. Congratulations are in order for your wedding. Best of luck and keep up the amazing work.

Sauce

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you so much - it means a lot to hear that you find the story so well written, and to be given so much credit for talent :-) I realize that my updates have continued to be somewhat erratic, but I was married in December (and thank you so much for your congratulations and good wishes!) so I'm sure my update schedule will improve dramatically!

Reviewer: Meryl Montgomery
Date: 08/04/06 1:08
Chapter: The Art Of Making War

It's hard waiting for chapters to get validated. ;-;

Anyway, good work so far! C=

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, sometimes the hardest part is the waiting :-)

Reviewer: Harrys Best Girl
Date: 08/01/06 3:19
Chapter: The Importance of Being Oliver


“Gregory Goyle.”

I never saw it coming

Author's Response: *lol* Glad I managed to suprise you! Thanks for reading :-)

Reviewer: sydneybennett03
Date: 07/30/06 22:05
Chapter: All's Fair In Love And Cabbages

WHAT?????? HE LOST???? I read that whole story just to read at the end the HE LOST???? NO NO NO!!!! I'm pressing you to change the ending!!!!! I'm wondering if you like movies like Tristan and Isolde or something like that....Well, I'm just gonna pretend in my mind that he wins, and gets Hermione in the end...but still....i would like to read this story w/o crying my eyes out and screaming....good dialogue though. And way to develop the Wood's relationship with Hermione..even though they weren't gonna have a future one...please please please change it!!!

Author's Response: *lol* Glad to see I've got you emotionally involved... I won't say want's happening next, but I haven't finished the story here - don't worry, it won't end here. I don't think you'll mind the ending when I finally do get there. (around chapter 15). Thank you - I'm glad you liked the dialogue so far, and the development of Oliver and Hermione's relationship. I'll have chapter seven up soon, hope you find that resolves things for you :-) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sydneybennett03
Date: 07/30/06 19:22
Chapter: The Importance of Being Oliver

i like the plot...except i'm a little confused one thing...so Wood, is supposed to be like supervising this arrangement? right? he put goyle's and hermoine's name on the contract right?

Author's Response: Actually no - Oliver was drunk when he filled out his contract, and had to think back *very* carefully to make sure he didn't acidentally fill in Goyle's name instead, but Goyle filled his contract on his own. Oliver's owl was drunk (courtasy of George) so Goyle's contract actualy reached the Minsitry first, therefore, he get's 'first dibs' on Hermione. Oliver is supposed to 'lead by example', by Contracting a witch of his own.

Reviewer: midnight_mourner
Date: 07/30/06 3:36
Chapter: All's Fair In Love And Cabbages

All I can say is OH MY GOD, I absolutly LOVE your story! Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: midnight_mourner
Date: 07/30/06 3:35
Chapter: All's Fair In Love And Cabbages

All I can say is OH MY GOD, I absolutly LOVE your story! Please update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! Glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 07/29/06 21:10
Chapter: Prologue

Now that I have more time to review I wanna say you're a very good writer. Your plot is very organized and your material very well thought out. Most stories are thrown together, but not this one. You obviously take a lot of pride in your work. This is one of my favorite stories. The only criticism I can offer is to try and update faster. This story has a great deal of potential. But in order for the reader to remember what happened or to maintain their interest, the updates need to be just a bit quicker. I know that's hard sometimes believe me. Just take it into consideration. Anyways excellent work (as always) and best wishes.

Sauce

Author's Response: Wow - thank you so much. I'm not sure how worthy of such prais I am, but the Slytherin in me will take it and run *lol* I'm really amazed that you can glean so much from just my story - I'm really glad to know that my prep work and extra files of notes have made such a difference. I much prefer to read originized stories, too. I'm ashamed to acknowledge how slow I have been to update sometimes - You're very right, it is my biggest weakness. My only defence is that I'm currently planning my wedding, and it takes up alot of my time. I appreciate the commet though, because you're right, I do have to try and get chapters out alittle more frequently. Thank you so much for your review :-)

Reviewer: Appelsauce
Date: 07/29/06 19:59
Chapter: All's Fair In Love And Cabbages

Alright u just gotta update ASAP. That is one wicked cliffie and I can't take the suspense. PLEASE???

Sauce

Author's Response: The next chapter is actually going into queue in a few hours - I know, it was a mean cliffhanger, wasn't it? Thanks so much for reviewing - it means a lot!

Reviewer: ronnyc718
Date: 07/29/06 17:30
Chapter: All's Fair In Love And Cabbages

I just came across this story today and read the whole thing to here. Please update soon! I'm hopelessly addicted.

Author's Response: Wow - that must have taken a while *lol* Thank you so much for reveiwing - I'm really happy to know I've 'addicted' you!

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