Reviewer: prongs123
Date: 06/06/05 16:07
Chapter: Dudley's Demons

what a sad chapter!! i almost cried myself. very well written though. good job!!

Author's Response: Thanks... more on the way!

Reviewer: Bexly48
Date: 06/06/05 12:22
Chapter: Dudley's Demons

well written, and makes so much more sense coming from chapter 4. so what happened to chapter 6, or is 7 just named wrong? anyway, i like the story, good job.

Author's Response: I've been having trouble getting my updates updated. I submitted chapter 6 and chapter 7 together, but they rejected chapter 6 due to some misspellings and capilization errors. Six is there, but it's not validated yet. Hopefully soon.

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 06/05/05 22:54
Chapter: Dudley's Demons

woooooohoooooooo! cant wait till next one!10/10

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 06/04/05 12:09
Chapter: A Mother and A Sister

Wheres chapter 5?

Author's Response: Sorry... a thousand apologies

Reviewer: padfootprongs4ever
Date: 06/04/05 11:23
Chapter: A Mother and A Sister

PLEASE get chapter 5 up ! PLEASE

Author's Response: Sorry :( It's finally there

Reviewer: buck_beak
Date: 06/04/05 7:10
Chapter: A Mother and A Sister

what happened to chapter 5. harry seems to be living in his house which is kind of strange

Author's Response: It's there now... I'm sorry.. chapter 5 and 6 got lost.

Reviewer: padfootprongs4ever
Date: 06/03/05 17:02
Chapter: A Mother and A Sister

Where are chapters 5 and 6? See, I,m lost. If you can't get the chapters up will you tell me what happened in those chapters? PLEASE!

Author's Response: Sorry... they were lost... 5 is back now... sorry

Reviewer: Bexly48
Date: 06/03/05 15:53
Chapter: A Mother and A Sister

I like the story, but it seems like I missed something. Why did chapters go from 4 to 7? and what happened when they got into harry's house? Maybe its just me, but I felt like something was off and that I was reading a different story, maybe I'll just go back and read the beginning again. Good style, I like the concept.

Author's Response: Yep, you are exactly right, when you read it went from chapter 4 to 7... sorry about that...

Reviewer: JOANYG
Date: 06/01/05 9:34
Chapter: Move and Countermove

I am enjoying your story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: cascarach
Date: 06/01/05 4:50
Chapter: Move and Countermove

I find your story rather good. Don't worry, I actually find it excellent I'm just being a pain. Really action packed and everything, with just the right quantity of action and emotion. Well done, I'm really impatient to find out how they are going to get out of this mess.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing... the mess gets much deeper.

Reviewer: mall_rat
Date: 06/01/05 2:24
Chapter: Move and Countermove

Yeah i know of two sites you might want to try... I found them for another story i was reading where the writer posted on there cuz it took so long to update lol.... Anyway first off there is Or if there will be a harry/ginny relationship you can post on Hopefully you can get the rest of the chapters up because i've been dying to read them :) keep up the good work

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 05/31/05 16:22
Chapter: Back to Privet Drive

omg!! This is my first fan fic I ever read and I LOVE IT!!!! Ohpleaseohpleaseohpleaseohpleasewritemore!!

Author's Response: Thanks... glad you like it. I have been trying to publish chapter 5 for about 3 weeks, so hopefully it will be there soon.

Reviewer: mall_rat
Date: 05/31/05 7:08
Chapter: Move and Countermove

hey great story.... I sware the mods are evil when it comes to you story, i really wish they'd just post your updates.... I think they need to have a few jynxes placed on them... Have you thought of posting on one of the other sites though?? they might actually update it

Author's Response: I have actually thought about posting it somewhere else. I've been trying to get chapter 5 posted for several weeks. The story itself is almost done, I've have 13 chapters written. Do you have any suggestions of where else to post?

Reviewer: Bexly48
Date: 05/25/05 2:39
Chapter: Move and Countermove

OMG! I just discovered your story and its freaking fantastic. I love everything about it. And I'm so happy that your one of the authors that update frequently. yay!

Author's Response: Thanks... hopefully more will be there soon.

Reviewer: allysonpotter
Date: 05/18/05 23:34
Chapter: Move and Countermove

omg that is so good write more write more. i cant wait to see what happenes next. 10/10. i just love it

Author's Response: Thanks. :)

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 05/17/05 23:22
Chapter: Move and Countermove

its been a while now i cant wait any longer i love your story

Author's Response: Hi... I'm really trying. I submitted Chapter 5 over a week ago and it's still in the queue. I submitted Chapter 6 tonight. Maybe they'll approve them both together. Chapter 7 is being Beta'd and 8,9, and 10 are waiting in the wings. I'm in process of writing Chapter 11. So don't worry, it's coming, I promise.

Reviewer: buck_beak
Date: 05/11/05 15:21
Chapter: Move and Countermove

i really like your story. hope u update soon

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, chapter 5 is loaded and pending approval. So hopefully anytime now.

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 05/08/05 11:47
Chapter: Move and Countermove

ahhh update! its been like 4 or 5 days or something like that. :);)

Author's Response: Sorry, I'm waiting on my Beta. My work is so filled with grammer errors that the site would reject them if he doesn't look at them first. But Chapter 5,6,7 are written, so they'll get loaded ASAP. Thanks for reading. :) :)

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 05/03/05 17:25
Chapter: Move and Countermove

no prob i love your writing!now update :)

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 05/01/05 12:11
Chapter: Move and Countermove

omg this was a cool chapter!!! hurry and update!10/10

Author's Response: Thanx... :) It's coming soon I promise. Thanks for reviewing, it means a lot to me.

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