Reviewer: invisiblenudnik
Date: 06/14/05 22:37
Chapter: Mental Attack

Another intresting chapter...very nice. Keep going, I'm still reading.

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 06/14/05 19:42
Chapter: Attack at Privet Drive

erm....ninjas?? ok, coolio! very good chapter....em, again....only problem was some gramatical errors here and there. otherwise, great job, off to read more!!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I love reviews :)

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 06/14/05 19:23
Chapter: Dudley's Demons

wowee.....very awesome job! heart-to-hearts are so fun!!!!!! sorry, my mind is going off track a bit today, so i cant really remember what i was going to say, but it had something to do with this story being super excellent!!! great job.

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 06/14/05 6:18
Chapter: Move and Countermove

that was very good.....they are in it deep now! this is a very good idea for a story, i would have never come up with it, and you're writing it brilliantly. great job, off to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing... I appreciate the feedback!

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 06/14/05 6:02
Chapter: Question of Guardianship

a little sad, but very intriguing. you're doing a great job with the plot line, i am impressed. i really hope umbridge gets what's coming to her! nice work.

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 06/14/05 5:47
Chapter: Questions and Answers

the plot didnt advance much here, but explanations never do, and it was very interesting nonetheless. cant wait to see how they get him out of this one, so......i dont think i will! great job, off to read more.

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 06/14/05 5:35
Chapter: Back to Privet Drive

wow! this looks like it has some really great potential. only unbelievable thing is that vernon would care about dudley's grades, as he always blamed the teachers before. other than that, very good--never seen a plot like this. i wonder if the man is who he said he is, or a death eater, as he fired at harry first? i dont know, i guess i'll have to read and find out! great job.

Reviewer: invisiblenudnik
Date: 06/13/05 22:29
Chapter: Conversations

Good chapter, very true to character, very good!!! :-)

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 06/13/05 21:00
Chapter: Conversations

yes i loved this one. Poor Harry i feel sad for him haha i liked the pillow fight. Update soon as always u probably will :):)

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 06/10/05 22:28
Chapter: Revelations

yes yes yes!!!!Iloved it of course! 10/10 update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! as always. Next chapter is in, and the story is pretty much complete, so it's coming.

Reviewer: prongs123
Date: 06/10/05 17:09
Chapter: Revelations

how did lupin shoot a hole in harry's picture perfect family??? i don't get it. anyway, this was a great chapter!!

Author's Response: Lupin was in love with Lily. It would be unnerving to find out that your father's friend was in love with your mother. Also, it's been my experience that people who grew up without one of their parents around always fanitise about how great their life would be if things were more "normal" (whatever that is). So Harry is fanicising about his parents realitionship and how much they love each other, how great they were together, and then Lupin comes in and says that he was in love with his mother. Which then Harry thinks, was my mom in love with him? So it shoots a hole in the prefect picture. Okay, it's a bit of stretch. It's not a huge plot point anyway. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Miss_Hermione_Granger
Date: 06/10/05 0:16
Chapter: Revelations

Lupin was in love with Lily??? o.k. well that does make sense but I'm a little connfused about why James would be so mad I mean Lupin didn't do anything to put her on (did he??)I loved it still even though I'm a little connfused.10/10

Author's Response: No, Lupin didn't do anything inappropriate. James wasn't really mad at Lupin, but he distanced himself from him. At some point in the books, it was mentioned that someone in the Order was a spy for Voldemort. It turned out to be Pettigrew. I think that Pettrigrew used people's mistrust of werewolves to poison James's opinion of Lupin. Peter used Lupin's love for Lily as a starting point so that people would begin to think it was Lupin who was working for Voldemort, instead of him. He in essence broke the group from within, using Lupin's feelings for Lily as the start. James was duped by Peter and pushed Lupin away. Lupin, who was used to being pushed away, went away without much fight and there you go, friendship completely shot.

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 06/09/05 14:28
Chapter: Revelations

This is amazing!! Lupin and Lily... oh that would have been great i hope i get to read more about that twist!! 100/10

Author's Response: I actually think that there was a Lupin, Lily, James triangle at some point. I don't go into much detail here, but someday I might write something about it.

Reviewer: buck_beak
Date: 06/09/05 11:37
Chapter: Attack at Privet Drive

yay the missing chapter 6

Author's Response: Thanks... I really liked that chapter myself.

Reviewer: vigal
Date: 06/08/05 10:49
Chapter: Back to Privet Drive

good story... so did I miss anything important by not reading chapter 6?? I didn't even pay attention to the chapters I just read them...

Author's Response: Chapter 6 is a good chapter, I beat up the Weasley's again. As soon as it's up, I'd go back and read it.

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 06/07/05 13:14
Chapter: Dudley's Demons

Oh yeah this actually should go with chappie 7 but I keep getting logged out trying to submit a reveiw for that chapter.

Reviewer: Luna_Lover
Date: 06/07/05 13:12
Chapter: Dudley's Demons

I love this!! So that's what happened to chappie six no wonder i'm so confused!! Anyway this is great 10/10!! That is a really neat side of Dudley and i think Mr. Davis or whatever is just SO MEAN!!! Waiting for chappie 6!!

Reviewer: Miss_Hermione_Granger
Date: 06/07/05 1:02
Chapter: A Mother and A Sister

sorry I ment but not... well bye

Author's Response: hehehe... thanks.

Reviewer: Miss_Hermione_Granger
Date: 06/07/05 1:01
Chapter: A Mother and A Sister

I Loved it chapter 6 is missing butt other then that every things good: plot no ones OOC still 10/10 (100,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000)

Reviewer: zobothewitch
Date: 06/06/05 18:14
Chapter: A Mother and A Sister

noooo not a cliffie!!! Bravo 10/10 cant wait till next chap.

Author's Response: :) I'm an evil writer... :)

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