this needs a sequal
Great make another
loved it. plain and simple
I did not think this story could get any better. *It just did*. Loved it.
Brill! Are you going to continue it?
tear that was so cute awww i like happy endings
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! ikcle ronniekins is in love
AWWWW HOW CUUUTE!!!! Omg. That was an AWESOME one-shot story. I totally agree, I can also see them admitting a little something over an argument!! The fact that they also had an audience was absolutely hilarious. Keep writing!!!
I can definitely see them finally admitting their feelings during a fight. I love that you avoided the "they flew into each other's arms and began madly kissing" that many author's seem to do. Much more realistic the way you told it.
That was really good. It was realistic as well, cos I think there would be that awkwardness between them as oppose to just falling into each others arms. Keep up the good work.
that was very cute - i think I went several paragraphs without breathing...