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Name: HALF_BLOODHERO (Signed) · Date: 05/07/05 3:29 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
At this point it is hard not to be repetitive, but what I must say every time is this is brilliant! I must also say that i would be honored to recieve a copy of your first publication and copies of the many more that I am sure will follow. Thanks for giving me something to do that I can truly enjoy. Once again my dear you get a 10!!!

Name: Severus Snape (Signed) · Date: 05/07/05 0:24 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
The tension mounts! I was so pleased to see Bellatrix finally get what she deserves, shame she wasn't tortured into the bargain, although she would have probably enjoyed that. Another great chapter.10/10

Author's Response: Yes, Bella needed to get her just desserts!

Name: Kerian (Signed) · Date: 05/06/05 16:48 · For: Scorched Souls
Oh I will be completely devastated if Roderick is really dead! Aww... I loved his two-timing, lying, charismatic ways! Hmm so the necklace is most definetly a twist. And who could this visitor be?!?! Aww there must be a lot on poor Harry's mind. Nothing seems to work out for the kid...

Author's Response: I loved his two-timing, lying, charismatic ways too! Bless him. ;-)

Name: nveelover (Signed) · Date: 05/06/05 16:27 · For: Scorched Souls
Your chapters are always nice and long but they never seem long enough. I hope that you get the next one out soon because I'm really looking foward to it.

Author's Response: I'm working on it! Should be up by the end of the week. Thanks for the review!

Name: SusannaC (Signed) · Date: 05/05/05 5:34 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
Another great cliffhanger.Are they going to get out alive or not????Where's dumbledore got to? loads of questions, brilliant plot twists.Can't wait for the update.

Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews, Susanna!

Name: Harriet Evans (Anonymous) · Date: 05/04/05 10:44 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
A really good chapter with some great moments. Loved how they kept the vapour under the kitchen table - where else? There was a real sense of tension throughout the chapter. I'm looking forward to the next, naturally.

Author's Response: I know... it seemed so silly and yet so obvious that they would just shove the most dangerous and effective weapon they had under the table. :-)

Name: Kerian (Signed) · Date: 05/02/05 15:50 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
I'm so glad for the update! The story is going great. I'm so interested to see how you're going to play out the prophecy with Maeve and Harry working together. And I thought your idea of all three becoming pyschically ill was very good. I have to say that Roderick is definetly my favorite character and I love how we never know what he's going to do next. Great update as always!

Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews, Kerian. I thought it would be interesting to play with the notion that some magic is interconnected and draws people together. As we will see, there is good reason for them all to feel the power of the magic.

Name: Fantasium (Signed) · Date: 05/02/05 13:02 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
It's difficult now, not to get repetitive, but this is just so good! A chapter well worth waiting for. I really liked Harry in it, a bit childish in his wondering about the ravens, clearly very scared when he addressed Severus as "Sir" and also cheeky with his "But it sodding hurts." I have always liked Harry, of course, we all like him don't we? But your story obviously takes him out of the spotlight and shows him in other circumstances where he's still himself but... different... Not very clear of me, but the story still makes me like him more. :) I would really like if Remus could step in and do something, lately he's been a bit useless, frankly, mostly because of his emotions I suppose. But I want him to be someone, something, so badly - what if he could do something heroic? Something that doesn't involve him suffering too much, mind. If you do that, I volunteer to kick his butt to make him notice Tonks. Anyway, I don't think Abbeylara burning will be much of a problem, maybe it will serve to set Maeve free even more than before. Also, I'm so curious about the contents of the necklace. This story is never dull, and I shall enjoy it to the very last word. Wonderful!

Author's Response: I've really tried to beef up Remus' part but he's being so soppy at the moment that it's proving impossible. he seems to be just along fro the ride in these later chapters. We'll give him a kick and get him into shape for the next story. :-) And as you can see from the next chapter... Maeve does indeed feel set free by the demise of Abbeylara. But she's not entirely free just yet.

Name: MADJH (Signed) · Date: 05/02/05 9:41 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
Oh you are a cruel woman! That was an amazing bit of action there. I can see where you might have had some difficulty getting it all sorted out, but your hard work paid off because it reads beautifully. It's the sort of writing that has the reader glued in rapt attention speeding from paragraph to paragraph to see what happens next. The various plotlines were woven expertly and were not at all confusing. Very well done! But you left Harry and Remus and Severus and Maeve in a burning building... I'm glad to know that the next chapter isn't far behind as this is your most nerve wracking cliffhanger yet!

Author's Response: I know I'm a cruel woman... I'll be cruel right up until the very end of this story! LOL *Blushes at the compliments*

Name: The Half Blood Prince (Signed) · Date: 05/02/05 7:54 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
I forgot to say: 'you are the best author on this site'

Name: ellidiot (Signed) · Date: 05/02/05 6:40 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
amazing chapter. can't wait to find out what happens. major suspense.

Name: The Half Blood Prince (Signed) · Date: 05/02/05 5:43 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
I give you a brilliant 10!!!! Your story is the best! Really funny how HArry and Snape must stick together, and they are both in-charcter. Just, what do you think of when you describes the scenes? And the twists, do they just pop up, or do you plan it to the finest details? And, what did you mean when i had to much details, you have as much as I. Do I use to much adjectives? A 10 to you. I take my hat off. PLEASE ANSWER

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Half Blood Prince. I have a general plot and ideas that need to be woven into the story but often ideas just pop up with the writing. When I'm describing the scenes i'm seeing them in my head, a bit like a director plotting scenes in a movie. If the author can't see them then the reader doesn't have a hope. I answered your query about your excerpt in the forums. I really can't add anything to what I said to you there. :-)

Name: CCCC (Signed) · Date: 05/01/05 18:59 · For: Divided Loyalties
Okay, The numerical system again. 1. Percy, I felt, was ever so slightly over-egged, not much, but just slightly over-done, he's pompous, but not stupid. 2.Comparing Harry with Snape, an unusual idea, but one with merit, very interesting. 3.I don't think Snape says Voldemort, he might have changed but up until the end of OotP he says "The Dark Lord". 4.I'm running out of points and it's getting late. So I'll just say that Snape et al are completely IC and I am on tenterhooks as to what happened in the past and what will happen.

Author's Response: You're right, of course, about Snape and Voldemort. It's something i realised and changed in the latter chapters and it's something that will have to be changed on edit in the earlier ones.

Name: CCCC (Signed) · Date: 05/01/05 18:09 · For: The Truth Will Out
Maeve, I am really most annoyed with you. First of all you write really long chapters, and then you make them really good ones, it's a right b**ger to con crit ;) OK, I'll get all the minute con-crit I can fit in out of the way first, then I'll wax lyrical about it's excellencies. 1."still alive to consult but she wasn’t so" needs a comma before but (I did say minute) 2."accept with that." Either lose the "with" or change it to "come to terms with that". 3."as the calm before the storm." I think you need quotation marks around the-storm. Yes, I know I'm being picky, but if I only tried to crit characterisation and plot I wouldn't have a review other than "Great". 4. When you say "when she'd left Hogwarts" I think you meant when she left school (I am remembering right that she went to a private school am I? Or is it a part-time job) 5. I don't think Draco would say Voldemort outright, I think he says "The Dark Lord" at the end of OotP. 6. Hmmm, 6 is my iffy one, but I'm not sure that Narcissa would be so openly prejudiced in a bookstore, but that's an iffy matter of opinion, and I'll trust yours. 7. If Remus thinks it's Harry under an invisibility cloak, I'm sure he could think of a way to find out, he might not bother, but I'm sure he'd have a way. 8, I don't have an 8. Look it was Great, you hear me, Bloomin, soddin, great. Quite possibly the best chapter I've read,(but you've got a lot more chapters, haven't you.)

Author's Response: Awww...don't be annoyed, Tom! LOL Scribbles on her ever growing list of things to changes on edit! Thanks again for such comprehensive reviews....they really do help.

Name: Harriet Evans (Anonymous) · Date: 04/29/05 11:18 · For: Abbeylara.
I was absolutely transfixed!

Name: Harriet Evans (Anonymous) · Date: 04/29/05 7:06 · For: The Daughter of Light
Quite magnificent - you made the transition from writing that had me laughing out loud (very rare!) to gasping with surprise and anxiety. A wonderful twist to this tale. You are such a talented story teller.

Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you!

Name: Harriet Evans (Anonymous) · Date: 04/28/05 12:38 · For: Wizards about Town.
Oh, Oh! I was just thinking that what this magnificent story needed to make it 130% perfect was a bit of humour and then . . . you delivered . . . in spades. Roderick Rampton - where did he come from! The man's a masterpiece! Nice to see Harry at last and everyone brilliantly in character. And yes - I think the Chudley Cannons do need a new motto - although the old one made me chuckle! well done!

Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews, Harriet! I’ve just gone back to chapter two and I quite agree about the ‘hang on’ comment. That will be changed. And keep your eye out for Roderick; you haven’t seen the last of him yet. I have tried to weave some humour in; I think you can’t have a decent story without a bit of humour. *Blushes from all the compliments*

Name: MADJH (Signed) · Date: 04/27/05 13:35 · For: Towards Deliverance
I know I've told you a million times how addicted I am to HPDL. You know how much I love Snape and Maeve! And I'm so very thankful that I'm not your beta b/c all I ever want to do when reading your chapters is gush! And rail at you for leaving us with such cliffhangers (and you yell at me...) I loved the interaction between Hary and Snape, their being stuck together is very funny! I'm much happier with Lucius in this chapter, he seemed less like a bumbling fool and more like he was carelessly ambitious. I had a brief moment of concern over Maeve's wandless magic, but you sold me on it. The way she got the door open was very cool! Now that I've got my chapter in the queue, I just want to kick you out of the chat and make you start writing! I've got to know what happens! I think I may have picked up my habit for cliffies from you! *points finger* An excellent chapter and a beautiful fic!

Author's Response: Harry and Snape are a great double-act. They love each other really, you know. LOL Cliffies…Moi! Your cliffies are your own, love…don’t be blaming me…..*snorts* I did drop you a clue about the wandless magic in the previous chapter… she’s also Irish and we know very little about their magic in the HP world…indeed in my original fic there will be no wands for magic, not in Ireland anyway…. Wands are so last year! That was just a way to get them out of the room but it’s actually become quite important… as you will see….and there will be little chatting for me today…I have to finish!

Name: Harriet Evans (Anonymous) · Date: 04/27/05 13:18 · For: A Discordant Note
Fabulous. Sorry, words fail me. This is the most amazing thing I've read on MNFF.

Name: Harriet Evans (Anonymous) · Date: 04/27/05 13:02 · For: A Stormy Passage
Loved this chapter - the whole description of the journey by boat had me in awe. I agree - Dumbledore is excellent. Also how you are gradually letting us in on Maeve's character and what has gone before. Just one little gripe - I just don't see Snape saying "Hang on" - ever! - Sorry! Otherwise, brilliant.

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