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Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/21/16 17:20 · For: An Unquenchable Fire
Bellatrix kind of went out with a sad little squeak. I guess that's what happens when you're so arrogant about your power. It was a very positive omen when Maeve and Remus found the vapor bottles.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/20/16 19:05 · For: Towards Deliverance
I can't decide if this is good or bad having all of these people in the basement corridor. Maybe they'll easily get rid of Niall at least.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/19/16 18:36 · For: A Detour
Harry is certainly taking chances. Who knows? Maybe he'll be of some use to Severus. Now if they can just find Maeve and Remus on time.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/19/16 17:02 · For: A Proposal
That was a big surprise, Maeve proposing to Severus. He's still awfully cranky but I guess you can't expect someone to change overnight especially someone like Severus.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/19/16 15:12 · For: Oh, What a Tangled Web We Weave.
I can't believe that Lucius left his son behind. Neville is turning into quite the hero. I think that's because he's a better wizard than anyone expects him to be. He's more dangerous that way. People expect someone weak and they get someone much stronger.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/19/16 13:29 · For: Is He or Isn't He?
Doesn't Dumbledore know that sometimes it's best to just keep your mouth shut? Even if someone begs you to tell them something, you still have to weigh the request against the consequences.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/19/16 12:25 · For: A Firm Hand
Now what's Roderick up to? You do a really good job of writing cliffhangers at the end of your chapters. It's a good story but with the cliffhangers I feel strongly about reading further.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/18/16 19:40 · For: Why Didn't They Ask Snape?
Wow! Good for Neville. I'm proud of him for standing up for Maeve. And good for both Severus and Maeve finally sleeping together.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/18/16 18:20 · For: Drooble's Best Blowing Gum
I never have trusted Roderick. He just doesn't seem like an Auror. Plus, his "friendship" with Bellatrix is a little suspicious. I can't wait until you explain a little more about him and Alice Longbottom.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/18/16 12:33 · For: Weaselling In and Out
I think Harry has to become less sensitive to what Maeve is doing. I do have the advantage, though, of knowing that Severus is a good guy and maybe Harry doesn't know that yet.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/17/16 18:35 · For: Alice
Wow, I wonder who was in Maeve's room. And who is with Alice Longbottom that she feels afraid? And where is Maeve? Things are getting interesting.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/17/16 17:17 · For: An Auror of Mystery
That was nice of you to have Severus kiss Maeve. I love Snape as a character but I think I love him even more now. I'm curious to see how the kiss will transform their relationship if it does.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/17/16 16:48 · For: Abbeylara.
Thank you for not killing Remus although he probably wishes he were dead at the moment. I didn't realize that Bella and Roderick were friends or should I say frenemies.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/14/16 18:45 · For: A Journey Home
That was kind of a good idea, to bring Ron instead of Harry. Although there is always the thought that Voldemort would try to get to Harry through Ron or Hermione or even Ginny. Maybe Voldemort hasn't thought of that yet. I wish Ron and Maeve luck. They have the advantage also of Harry knowing where they are.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/14/16 17:16 · For: Remus Removed
Did you really just kill Remus? So Hermione's potion did nothing?

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/13/16 17:33 · For: Hermione's Deception
I hope you explain what happened to Maeve's fingers. I hope it wasn't slightly connected to the potion Hermione had prepared. How could they take such a risk with Remus' life.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/13/16 12:47 · For: A Chance Discovery
It doesn't sound like Neville put an antidote in his paper. Hopefully Maeve or Severus will be able to find one.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/11/16 18:18 · For: Sleepers
The part about the plant trying to smoke Neville's pencil was pretty funny. Poor thing probably has withdrawal. Percy is such a loser.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/11/16 17:29 · For: Practical Pranksters
I always enjoy it when Percy is taken to task. He was so pompous. I'm interested in what happened to Niall. Was the Dark Mark for him? Poor Mr. Filch. I can't think of a worse charm to put him under.

Name: Fynnsmom (Signed) · Date: 10/11/16 15:59 · For: Experiments.
I don't think Niall is going to last very long. I wonder why he thought he could trust someone like the Dark Lord?

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