And indeed, she had done just that. After giving Sirius’s friend the key and seeing them off, in rather good spirits, she reckoned, to their flat, several days passed in which ordinary duties precluded her time for anything else. The chores of the flatkeeper were plentiful and never-ending, and it seemed she’d somehow let them pile up.
That paragraph was a little confusing. But I love the way it was told from the land lady's perspective. rather intruiging. Will it be a different perspective every chapter?
I'm thinking this is reallly nice so far, what are you talking about not well writen?
Keep writing and I promise to keep reading!
This was really good =] I love your writing style. Really realistic, and I like how it's kind of in Mrs. McKinnon's point of view. Really great; definitely keep going =]
hey whn is next ch coming?im waiting
I just read this again and I'm reviewing it now that I'm more awake. I really liked this! It was cute. There's nothing that really needs improving.
I also want to say that I was reading the other reviews for this and everyone seems really upset that you ended it there. I get it. I understand why you ended it there. But now that they bring it up, it would be nice if you added more chapters. Please?
I like the way it was told from another character's point of view. She's funny. I can't realy write a better reiew than that because I'm really tired. Good fic. You should write more
This story is starting to go somewhere. plez, don't stop writing.
wait--you mean that was IT???? Um, I'm sorry but that simply doesn't make any sense-- do you think that there was any finality to that chapter? Because I didn't! If I am correct in my assumptions, and that is what it is--then I'm sorry, but this story--well--sucked. I'm sorry, like I've said. It only makes sense to continue this--for your own well being if not anyone else who is a fan because this is an incredible theme and it is inredibly written. But if you don't update, then the story is a waste. A waste of my time, your time, of energy and the like. . . I STRONGLY recommend, for the sake of the reviews and reads of this story, that you continue--don't just consider this--take this as a given. . . its a given--you start a story, you finish it--and THAT wasn't finished my friend. I'm sorry.
I really want to see where this is going, so this has to be short so I can go and read the next chapter thingy. I want to say that you switched the tenses from present to past--which was confusing, and I'm not sure if you noticed that! Well--this is nice, really--Like I said, I have to go read so--obviously there was nothing horrible about it! ahahahahaha good I actually give it a 10. N I C E . . .
WHEN ARE YOU POSTING THE NEXT CHAPTER?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Author's Response: NEVER! I'M SO SORRY!
Ooh this was very good and origanal. Are you ever going to update because it says your last post was Nov. 2004? Anyway, if you ever do update you may want to consider putting in some of Remus' andor Sirius' point of view. Good job!!!
Truly, i cant belive you say that this fic is not well-written. It is wonderfully written - love the style and perspective - and very, very intresting. UPDATE (hey no pressure)
Author's Response: Perhaps one day...In the meantime, thank you for all the lovely things you said, and please check out my other fics!
I like this story too!!! you are a very good writer. Update soon!!!
Author's Response: That means so much. Really. I'll try very hard to update!
Hehe, dear Mrs. McKinnon seems a little naive about what those strange noises coming from Sirius' room are *snorts* A cat indeed...Well I'm loving the story so far, but I think it would be better if you gave a bit more detail with what's happening between Remus and Sirius, instead of just giving hints ^.^
Author's Response: Heh, a cat...*wallows in brilliance* JUST KIDDING! Sorry I said "gratzi mile" twice in your last review...eh, whatever. I'm glad you love it! I was thinking about doing a chapter from Sirius and Remus' point of view, but I haven't been inspired yet. THANKS FOR READING!
Well written, I really like it so far :)
Author's Response: Gratzi mile.
Author's Response: Gratzi mile.
I really love this story and i hope you continue it. personally, i'd love to read it from james' perspective. but, either way, well done! :)
Author's Response: Thank you kindly, ma'am. I'll certainly consider it!
Did you quit?? Hope not!
Author's Response: No, I didn't! In fact, I submitted yet another fic yesterday, only the Mugglenet admins haven't okay'd it yet.
like it lots. Is there going to be anything from james point of view or even peters or something or is that it
Author's Response: That's it, for now. Thanks!
Absolutely wonderful, I love your writing style.
Author's Response: Thanks! Please check back for more!
Hey this was good, but it would be great to get some of the details abot what is going on with remus and sirius, cause atm its just from the point of view of the landlady, but its fantastic...
Author's Response: I'll consider it--Thanks!