aww that's so cute ^.^ GO *insert the name of all the couples here* xD
a bit on the hokey side, but amusing enough. It held my attention.
I LOVE your story!It has all my fave ships in it:RL/NT,R/Hr, and last but not least,H/G!Update soon!
hey! i really like it! 10/10 i have a real weakness for fluff... please update!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I don't know if the story is going to continue in this direction, but I am enjoying writing it.
Hi! I read your story, and I love how everybody is all happy and together, Lupin and Tonks, Harry and Ginny, Ron and Hermione, etc. I've always like the parts of the HP books where everyone is just happy and having a good time the best, like Harry getting his first birthday cards in book three and them having thier first classes with Lupin. Your relationships seem to be progressing. Are they going to get into any danger in later chapters? (I might suggest a little less "making out", even if they are teenagers most of them...) It's nice to have a summer story about all the characters being happy and having a nice time. Hopefully Molly and Arthur get some time off as well. Anyhow, nice, sweet story, and you are a good writer. :) (If you're interested in a wierd/funny Snape fan fic try Snape's last stand. The startings kind of slow, (I had to make it 800 words at least) and I may be a little biased toward it (hem, hem,) considering who the author is, but if you're bored, I'd love for you to read it. Of course, you have no obligation. Have a nice day!)
Author's Response: Thank you for the critisism. I'm looking forward to taking this story in a different direction at some point, but I don't expect it to be terribly long. I hope you'll be pleased with the result.
Wow. I like it a lot already. Please update soon, I want to hear the story!
Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 2 is in queue, and 3 is nearly finished!