Reviews For Hey Girl
Reviewer: savannaharrington
Date: 10/31/09 20:38
Chapter: Hey Girl

haha that was funny. very well righten

Reviewer: ron lover
Date: 07/08/09 21:25
Chapter: Hey Girl

I like this story.

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 09/14/08 18:22
Chapter: Hey Girl

James rules ^_^ I lurrrv him.

Reviewer: potters angel
Date: 08/21/08 20:58
Chapter: Hey Girl

ahaha! nice ending.
great story! :)

Reviewer: ginnyrulz13
Date: 02/19/08 22:41
Chapter: Hey Girl

lol!!! i loved it!!! great story!!

Reviewer: pottergurl92
Date: 12/04/07 6:12
Chapter: Hey Girl

hahaha. love the ending. great wonderful short story:]

Reviewer: Tweak
Date: 08/07/07 14:55
Chapter: Hey Girl

funny!

Reviewer: hpfreak101
Date: 08/02/07 13:15
Chapter: Hey Girl

This was very enjoyable.

Reviewer: HarryPotterLover_01
Date: 07/04/07 23:47
Chapter: Hey Girl

hahaha....loved it!
James Potter is one of my favorite Harry potter charaters(even though he isnt mentioned much) you mad ehim come alive, the way he was desribed...great story... :D

Reviewer: midnight ink
Date: 05/30/07 11:59
Chapter: Hey Girl

loved it
"so, now that you've fallen in love with me..." SO James!
good work :-)

Reviewer: Soccer_rocks_likeHP
Date: 03/19/07 19:21
Chapter: Hey Girl

That was amazing! James's poem was kinda sad. I like how you had James pour his heart out to Lily. That was just and amazing fic! Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: spazticapple
Date: 02/04/07 18:55
Chapter: Hey Girl

hahahah, nice end
le Priya
~'Just Because' et 'Quit Haunting Me Will You?'

Reviewer: Dragon_Spirit
Date: 10/08/06 8:05
Chapter: Hey Girl

that was cute and i like it alot!

Reviewer: Dragon_Spirit
Date: 10/08/06 8:02
Chapter: Hey Girl

that was cute and i like it alot!

Reviewer: fodfiesta
Date: 09/07/06 16:35
Chapter: Hey Girl

BRILLIANT ONESHOT

Reviewer: brokenhearted
Date: 05/17/06 18:40
Chapter: Hey Girl

Gosh, I love James. Lily should have taken him up on that last offer there.

Reviewer: fairiesandcream
Date: 11/18/05 3:15
Chapter: Hey Girl

That was sweet! It would be really cool if you wrote a sequel. I loved the bit where Lily was confessing that he was sexy and I could just picture the look on her face when she found out that he heard. By the way I totally agree with Prongsroxmysox11, I thought the bit with Sirius and the unicorns was hilarious!

Reviewer: Free_Phoenix
Date: 10/28/05 5:26
Chapter: Hey Girl

Maybe you should do a story with Sirius as Minster of Magic, Wormtail an evil dark wizard and Remus in a pink tutu declaring his undying(sp?) love and devotion to dear old Snape! Dunno if there is plotline but maybe! If ya do, do tell me! Anyway LOVED the story, and the ending was perfect! 10/10

Reviewer: moonlit fire
Date: 02/05/05 15:53
Chapter: Hey Girl

that was great and the ending was a perfect touch.

Reviewer: Ella Norman
Date: 12/28/04 14:33
Chapter: Hey Girl

Awww ... this is cute. I'm glad you brought the real James back in at the end. That confession was so sweet, but I'm glad it wasn't natural for him, or you would be committing old-school OOC. That's not cool. But I love this. I love how Lily hates him, and then he pours sugar on it and she melts. So cute! Brilliant, m'dear, brilliant. Rating: 10!

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