Reviewer: MagicalMaddie331
Date: 08/23/06 19:38
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That was hilarious, and brilliant, and I loved it. 10/10
Reviewer: rache
Date: 08/14/06 16:07
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“Those gorgeous brown doe-eyes…”
“Pink pout-y lips…”
“That body--” Fred’s eyes traveled…south.
"Fred!” George cried out in mock outrage.
OMG I laughed SO hard at that! I was afraid my little bro would wake up. Hmm...perhaps this fred/hermione ship would work out okay...lol...mind you she shouldn't forget ron. Simply "spiffing" if you ask me...:D
Reviewer: HPgurl4eva
Date: 08/01/06 7:43
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I thought that was very funny and I LOVE the word 'spiffing.' Ha ha...
Great!
Reviewer: Jedi Jami
Date: 06/17/06 22:29
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haha i liked it :]]
Reviewer: BertieBotts
Date: 04/28/06 9:34
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whoa!!!!!!!!! fred kissed hermione on the NECK??? WHOA!!! shocking!!
but, all in all, very entertaining and fun!!
good work!!
Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/16/06 20:34
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I love this ficlet! I read it over and over because it is so funny!
Reviewer: gategirl324
Date: 01/01/06 16:16
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First: BIG LOL!!!!!!
second: lol!
third: i like!
Reviewer: DarkMarkGirl
Date: 12/29/05 19:13
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First of all: HAHAHA! this was seriusly laugh out loud funny but the kiss between one of the twins and Hermione, that was just...ewwww...Good Lord that grossed me out. i don't think that either of the twins would ever kiss her, especially on the neck, i also agree that it would have been nice had u included the kiss between hermione and ron at the end, but overall i liked it alot! very funny and creative
Reviewer: PigWithHair
Date: 11/09/05 23:07
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This was cute. I really liked bringing Fred and George into the picture. And yeah, I can see Ron saying "she's mine," like you him blurt it out. But would he have said the rest of it so quickly like that? Or would he have hesitated more? Not sure.
But yeah, I can see Fred & George doing that. The ending part could have lasted longer and including the kiss between R & H would have been nicer. The ending was a bit abrupt, but I liked the story overall.
Reviewer: Free_Phoenix
Date: 10/28/05 5:17
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This one left me laughing! Its very good, brilliant in fact! 10/10
Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 10/25/05 18:25
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Good story, but I love anythin with Fred and George
Reviewer: PheonixAnimagus
Date: 10/14/05 20:20
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sweet, though I don't think fred and george would do that to poor "mione". I think it would have embarrased her more than you wrote. anyway, really cute!
Reviewer: RMGHottie63
Date: 08/28/05 1:31
Chapter: A Shove in the Right Direction
Oooo...Very Naugthy indeed...lol...GREAT STORY...I love how you made Gred and Forge sooo....Manipulating...*grins*...It was cute..sweet and funny...!!!
Reviewer: granger333
Date: 08/09/05 18:09
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loved it hahahaha so cute and funny
Reviewer: TheGoldPhoenix
Date: 07/07/05 19:38
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wohoohoo! aw, ickle ronnikens is jealous! lol, i love fred and george and this fanfic had me laughing at their antics. eh, a smidge of the fic i disliked but i can't quite put a finger on why. Maybe it's Hermione..,or Ron...or the chess pieces. lol, i dunno but good job anyway. Keep writing!
Reviewer: ProfMcG
Date: 04/09/05 12:08
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lol that was really funny, go fred & george! good job!
Reviewer: vanillasweety
Date: 03/29/05 12:44
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ok fred and goerge can be scary sometimes but i must say that was a great plan seeing as jeolosy(sp) always seems to get at ron (great writing as well)
Reviewer: SnapeToBeKing
Date: 12/16/04 11:42
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WOOOOOHH GO FRED! GO GEORGE!! lol! this was really good!
Reviewer: RnHr4ever
Date: 12/07/04 0:28
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That is so what fred and george would do to push ron's buttons. I laughed so hard my family thought I went crazy!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: bingo
Date: 11/25/04 12:19
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I giggled until it hurt. Great job!
