Aww.. ): Ron is my hero. I would rather be saved by him any day. Good job with it.
Sure he doesn't have a scar,
sure he doesn't have the hair,
sure he doesn't have the skill,
sure he doesn't have his smart
That last line should be "smarts." Otherwise, I loved it!
....That was deep. It was so sad. I totally felt it. =} Love it. Rating? Let me think. 10! What else? lol
It was ok. I wouldn't go as far as call it deep.
Author's Response: Which one? I have three....
I read your author page, and I wanted to point out something. As the author of a same - sex fic, I just wanted to say that I don't actually think same - sex pairings will happen in the books just because I wrote one. I wrote it because it was different and I liked the challenge. (I'm not challenging your opinion, I just wanted to offer mine.)
Author's Response: I'm not trying to challenge YOUR opinion either, but just because you happened to write a fanfiction about same-sex-pairings doesn't mean J.K. Rowling is going to write about it. I don't believe it will happen in her books--she already has her books planned out. It's just my opinion though, and I get 83% of my objections from religion. Thanks for the opinion though, I really do enjoy reviews! :D
The first two stanzas are my favorites! Good rhythm! Just like you said.
Author's Response: Thank you! I really did try to get the rhythm in there. I really appreciate your review! :D
Awww, thats so sad. But you're right, it does has depth which unfortunately mine lack! :)
Author's Response: lol, your poems are awesome Quill! :D