really good job done, i really liked the ay u did this!!!
LOL!!!!! OMG this was hilarious!!! I was just laughing my head off. Sirius"ly sexy"-- the last line, everything. *grins* "He wasn't just my manly sex slave!" lmao!!
lol how cheeky you are!
that was the only bit of your work ive read, and it was great =)
cheers for your work.
lol aw i loved this, it was funny, made me alugh.
lol aw i loved this, it was funny, made me alugh.
It was funny. Actually parts were laugh out loud funny. But I'm not a R/S shipper but I felt like reading one and I'm glad I chose this one. :D
You wrote James' perspective perfectly: confident, intelligent, and amusing. My fave line was "To James, it looked like Remus was double chocolate cake, and Sirius was very, very hungry…"
I love Sirius! This fic made me laaugh enough to partially wake me up form my stupor. It's nearly 3 in the mornifng, but this was funn yenough to half wake me up. Which is saying something. I loe you S/R fics!
I like this story... it makes me smile.
I love your Remus/Sirius stories!!! (Actually, come to think of it, I love your Remus and your Sirius... damn *sees problem emerging*) ~ WRITE MORE NOW!!... er, pwetty pwease?
Your Remus/Sirius stories are one of the best I've read in ages! I'm a true RL/SB shipper and your stories prove why! Although I'm very jealous of Sirius right now! 10/10
really liked this, it was sweet. very humorously written, and I lovvvve James' attitude. Can't wait to read your other one! btw- will you r/r my story? It's lily/james, called Last Chance. I only have 2 reviews! Thanx, and thanx for the great short story!
Sirius/Remus RULES! No doubt! Love James's attitude.... And peter was sitting there, oblivious to it all! lol
It official i have kept count i am now Remus and Sirius's fag hag. YAY!!!
Good, but Sirius is a bit pathetic and OoC, I prefer Kiss Me to this. Keep writing S/L fics though because they RULE!!!!!!!!!
Pity it's one-shot, I really like this and hope you write more fics. Bring on the Remus/Sirius slash! You describe the characters well and their dialogue is also very believable. Nice job!
Oh this is just great! I'm sad to see it's a one shot so I hope you're going to write another. ^_^ Great fun and "Sirius' -ly Sexy Black" is awesome. Can't wait to read more of yours.
This story was really good, but i would love it if there would be more to it?? Or maybe you could write more stories, cause this was great... I think that its cute that sirius is so dense when it comes to his feelings for moony, so cute. and i love the interaction with james, taht was good
