Reviews For Taking Control...
Reviewer: harrypottergurl
Date: 05/27/10 21:55
Chapter: Taking Control...

That was really good. The way you described the boy it was Harry because of the Scar on his forehead. I never thought of Draco having a scar like that.

Reviewer: gracierochelle
Date: 08/10/09 5:28
Chapter: Taking Control...

i really love this, cos i was totally expecting the boy who killed himself to be harry. i'm curious to whom the other student was though, was it harry? because draco was talking about how they hated each other in life, it seemed fitting.
really well done

Reviewer: nancypotatoes
Date: 07/03/08 19:11
Chapter: Taking Control...

omg.I thought it was Harry!

Reviewer: Keri Potter
Date: 02/29/08 17:13
Chapter: Taking Control...

That was a GREAT story Bravo, Bavo, Ancore, Ancore!

Reviewer: Belinda
Date: 10/02/07 20:06
Chapter: Taking Control...

This is really well written. I'm tempted to say awesome, but awesome isn't quite the right word.. because cutting isn't awesome, nor is depression. I always loved Draco and this captures his personality really well for me. I get the pain of depression.. and how badly you can want to just end it, but you wonder, if Draco'd had something more to live for, if he'd have found the will to live.... All over, great job! Long time fan of your stories :)

Reviewer: danielsgirl
Date: 08/20/07 20:13
Chapter: Taking Control...

Wow..... Much diferent than the rest of your stories. Different, but good.

Reviewer: Antonio
Date: 08/17/07 14:10
Chapter: Taking Control...

Oh my God, here I was thinking, that this guy was Harry, turns out it was Malfoy. This is dark, really dark, it would be a good horror movie like that "#23" where he went insane. Wow... I never did like dark fics, but I wanted to read this one.

When it said 'slice', I felt like I was actually sliced... words - so powerful, so dangerous... AMAZING!

Reviewer: lialy_black
Date: 08/09/07 10:20
Chapter: Taking Control...

Excellent. Sad. Surprising. You're a very talented writer, and this was a powerful story. Great work.

Reviewer: CLL042
Date: 07/27/07 23:44
Chapter: Taking Control...

Completely shocked.
That story was sad but great

Reviewer: emLILY EVANS
Date: 06/04/07 19:11
Chapter: Taking Control...

wow i thought it was harry

Reviewer: nikki93
Date: 05/08/07 5:01
Chapter: Taking Control...

Nice....I just read all yuor stories....did you HAVE to kill Harry???? I mean really??? But great series anyway...Some chapters brought tears to my eyes...You are going to be a great author one day...right up there next to jk rowling in my book.

Reviewer: s3cr3tk33p3r
Date: 04/14/07 2:08
Chapter: Taking Control...

DAMN! I scrolled down to the bottom just to see how long it was.. and saw the last line and gave it all away. You ever wish you could go back in time and prevent yourself from doing something?? Yeah, I'm feeling that now. That aside, I really like this story. I've been there, done that.. and you basically, how do you say... "hit the nail on the head".. or something. You're right... it does always seem to be the person you least expect. You never know who is suffering behind a mask of (fake) smiles.

Reviewer: black_retribution
Date: 03/26/07 21:08
Chapter: Taking Control...

...interesting. I enjoyed it. And I've never read anything quite like it. Very good.

Reviewer: april_weasley
Date: 01/21/07 11:32
Chapter: Taking Control...

Oh my gosh! I thought that the boy who killed himself was Harry! It was hard for me to read this, but it was very well written. I hope that everyone who reads this knows that it's not good to hurt yourself, it's not worth it.

Reviewer: BeatleManiac
Date: 01/05/07 18:27
Chapter: Taking Control...

Very well written. I am quite interested in this kind of psychological behavior myself. I wasn't really sure who it was until the end, but who was the other boy, Harry? Very good ending. Thanks for the fic.

Reviewer: JusticeForMedea
Date: 12/13/06 21:59
Chapter: Taking Control...

Wow, I can't believe my guess was right? That happens very,very rarely for me. :p. I think it was your refusal to describe "the boy."

Anyway, amazing job with your characterization. Without any physical descriptions you captured exactly what Draco was thinking. I really like how you made him at peace at the end, it was a good ending for the story. People should understand, however, that death does not always mean that kind of happiness. No one should take their life in the hope that the next one, or whatever your beliefs tell you comes after death, will be better.
But i'm just talking on. My pont was, good job!!! Keep writing. -Ananya

Reviewer: PeevesThePoltergeist
Date: 12/11/06 18:58
Chapter: Taking Control...

Whoa, excellent. I thought it must be Draco!

Reviewer: Bookwolf
Date: 10/31/06 15:31
Chapter: Taking Control...

Wow. THat was beautifully written and deeply disturbing. Ilove the way you explain malfoy's need to self-harm, its brilliant. I thought it was harry until he called voldemort Dark Lord, but its true that it could be either, which is a really interestiing comparison. Really good story.

Reviewer: Adelfore Flamell
Date: 10/12/06 9:43
Chapter: Taking Control...

... wow... I had to stop halfwy though to read it again. I wasnt sure who it was youw ere talking about. Honestly, from the beginning i though you were talking about Draco, but when you talked about going to get dumbledore, i had to start over again... I suppose thats what makes this such a fantastic story! It is because you can interchange both Harry and Draco throughouth the entire thing. For a while there i though it was Harry!
Really amazing idea, and not to far fetched actually. I would never want to be in the position that Draco was in. It does seem in the books that he is just supposed to follow in his fathers footsteps, but he never seemed to have a chioce... until the end of book 6...
Very well written. I look forward to reading your other fics!

Author's Response: Hey! Great hearing from you again, and I'm so glad that you liked it- all while seeing it for what it is. Draco really IS in a tough situation, and I cannot WAIT to see how JK works it out! Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: St Jimmy the Sheep
Date: 08/16/06 13:57
Chapter: Taking Control...

Woah... That was shocking. The whole time I thought it was Harry, but then BAM! It turned out to be Malfoy! You did a really good job of disguising it. Great fic!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! i"m glad you noticed the point of it!

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