Reviews For A Sirius Death
Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 06/03/06 10:22
Chapter: The Pain

I'm particulary fond of how you ended the poem. "I feel like I've just bled, bled my life away..." I thnk the ellipses added a nice touch to it. Also, you did a wonderful job of portraying Harry's emotion through-out the poem.

Reviewer: FeatherTrader
Date: 06/03/06 10:21
Chapter: The Pain

I'm particulary fond of how you ended the poem. "I feel like I've just bled, bled my life away..." I thnk the ellipses added a nice touch to it. Also, you did a wonderful job of portraying Harry's emotion through-out the poem.

Reviewer: Diamond Quill
Date: 04/17/05 5:28
Chapter: The Pain

How can this be? How can he die? I just don't understand, My heart feels so wry... My fave line!!! Rlly good, I like dis one. The rhyming worked on most of the verses and you captured emotion well (who says i don't use long words!) Vry Well Done

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I like hearing that my poems are good! Yes, this poem did take a little more thought than Sidekick and Fame, which probably makes it one of my favs. I'm so glad you like it! :D

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