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Name: sandybeaple (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 8:08 · For: One Final Question
Aagh! So heartbreaking!! Why did she have to choose Ron? Why did Draco have to be so complex? Why did Ron have to be so boooorring?

Why? Why? Why?

Sigh. I seriously doubt they're gonna end up with each other judging by the way things are going. Sniff, sniff


Name: MyDarkDraco (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 7:25 · For: One Final Question
I look forward to reading the two part epilouge but I just wanted to say one thing.

I never criticise an ending (even if it's not what I was hoping for) but I have to say that it seemed out of character for Draco to react in that jealous way and threaten to kill Ron.

Throughout your story Draco has shown that although he does have a dark side, he prefers to push everyone and everything away, not use force and threats to make sure he gets what he wants. Something about that section just didn't seem to ring as real.

I also wanted to say that I can't believe Hermione left with Ron! Would Ron's pride allow him to take her back? How could Hermione choose Ron after realising previously that she wasn't in love with him and that his jealous behaviour made her miserable? It would seem more likely that she would choose neither if she didn't want to choose Draco.

Anyway, the story's no finished yet and I eargerly await the rest of it.

And can I also say that I am a big fan of a lot of your fanfics - I think you are an extremely talented writer!


Name: Kiwi_Chick (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 4:40 · For: One Final Question
I never saw that coming!!! Its believable that Draco would act that way since he was soo worried that Ron would take Hermione away from him. I don't think Hermione would go back to ron properly as she would feel empty. Great chapter. I can't wait for your next.


Name: iryeth (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 4:31 · For: One Final Question
i love it, even though it's not a happy ending. that's probably the reason why i like it so much.i'm really a romantic, but sometimes i like reading something with a sad ending. i don't know why, but i thing those kind of endings are more out of the ordinary!


Name: AnnaMuggle (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 3:50 · For: One Final Question
Oh god... Poor Draco! I can't really say that this was unexpected. I was assured that this story would end somewhat like this, as in they wouldn't end up together. I know there are two chapters left (epilogues), but I can't say I'm optimistic for a relationship forming between them.

BUT, I'm not saying that this chapter was bad! Oh not at all! It was excellent! I simply couldn't stop reading and I got completely lost in it! ;) A perfect job. As always you're an excellent writer and I wish you would someday start another Hr/D fic. :) I've read all your others I believe.

I hope you can surprise me with the ending!

AnnaMuggle


Name: SK witch (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 3:27 · For: One Final Question
Aw I'm so disappointed it's ended up like this so far...! I really can't stand Draco's torture - he's really gone through enough, don't you think? The part I don't really get is Draco's shift in personality... had he become like this because of his 'obsessive love'? Oh well, I guess we'll all find out in the upcoming chapters... Please, please let this have a happy ending - for Draco's sake! I love the story though. No matter how heart wrenching it is...*smiles sadly*


Name: Krystal (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 1:28 · For: One Final Question
This may sound rude, but... for your sake, I hope they get together.
Although you are a fantastic writter etc. I cannot stand stories that end badly (eg. the movie The Breakup - If you haven't seen it, i suggest you never do)
Sooo... I'll just keep praying that you came to your senses and Ron dies or something and Hermione ends up with Draco, cause there is no way I'm going to stop reading this fic now - no matter that I don't like the way it's going.
I look forward to reading any new fics you are writting (eg. Some Kind of Miricle - that is excellent)


Name: suchi (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 1:17 · For: One Final Question
(weeps. howls.) what the hell were you thinking when you wrote this? its not like hermione to be so promiscuous. and how much more are you going to torture draco? he's already so screwed up. and do you think ron would accept her after all that she did???!!!!!! i ma going to kill. :-#


Name: viki hp nerd (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 1:05 · For: One Final Question
ummm..sorry to say but draco's character suddenly shift in this chapter..what happened to him just between this one chapter and the one previous? imean you did make this chapter like the "track down this murderer" scene from the phantom of the opera but i thought it was kinda disconnected from the previous time that draco and hermione was together in the forest. but no matter what, i still love your works!


Name: hermioneharry (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 0:33 · For: One Final Question
I have been a reader of this story the whole way through, and I had been very pleased with it as I went along. You're a very talented writer, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

I was, however, really disappointed with the pairing of Ron and Hermione. I just don't believe that after all that Hermione and Shadow went through combined with the lack of a true and meaningful relationship with Ron that she would end up picking him. It's not like her to lie to Draco and tell him that she's always going to be there and in the next moment choose Ron and walk out of his life.

I also wish you hadn't made Draco so evil in this last chapter, I know that he's a complex character and everything, but I just hated how he was abusive towards Ron and especially Hermione.

I'm sorry if I sound like I'm whining in any way, I just wanted to say what I felt about this chapter, but in no way am I going to stop reading it. I look forward to the next chapter. :)


Name: Pepsi Gurl (Signed) · Date: 01/31/07 0:08 · For: One Final Question
~lays sharpened knifes down nice and orderly~ ok... i will not kill u... yet... it just seemed so.. sad and bad... wonderfully written tho... it was jsut so... out of the blueish(new word) and yeah....

i hope the epilohue sorta looks up for Draco, i never liked Ron, in anystory... actually, im gonna go kill him instead...~stalks off after Ron~

Laters


Name: pottermania (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 23:52 · For: One Final Question
whew!!!!! not what i expected..but i guess more in character with both hermione n draco.... just hope that draco doesnt really do anything stupid... n also hermione's feelings of getting both ron n draco out of the messy situaiton is actually working.......

just looking forward to the epilogues


Name: sadako (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 22:24 · For: One Final Question
Aw, wow that was really not what I had expected. I'm glad that there's more, because if that were the end, it would kind of suck. But of course it doesn't. Now, the thing this chapter make me thing of, is whether Draco will end up a werewolf. Poor Draco, it's so sad. : ( . Now, if he ends up killing people, that's sad but not entirely surprising. Anyway, I guess I be sad when it's all over because it'll be another great story that'll be over. But still, good job.


Name: emoprincess26 (Anonymous) · Date: 01/30/07 22:09 · For: One Final Question
Wow. Just wow. That was not how I imagined this going. I hope the next chapter comes soon, because I know I can't live with it ending like this!

~emoprincess26


Name: PeevesThePoltergeist (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 22:08 · For: One Final Question
OH MY GOD. OHHHHH! NOOOOOOOOOO! AHHH! THE PAIN! THE TORTURE! THE AGONY! I LOVE THIS STORY! BUT, WHY? This is too much!! I thought it was going to be Hr/ D in the end! OH, why, Andrew Lloyd Weber, did you have Raoul win?


Name: silverstrand1 (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 21:45 · For: One Final Question
Wow. Tha was um, interesting. When he started to get angry I wanted to scream at him but my mom was in the room so I sot of wispered instead and I was so shocked I probably couldn't of yelled any way. I kind of knew somthing like that was gonna happen. :{ It's kind of sad. I f it end badly I won't scream bloody murder at the computer screen but if it ends good I will blow it kisses! While I was reading it it sounded so real like I know that Draco and Hermione can not be together it's just sad that jealousey had to get in the way of the love that Shadow and starlight built.
Now on the other matter. Oh my goodness Draco is going to become a warewolf! The bad people that change their ways always seem to die. Huh. Oh well, hurry with the chapter we are all anticapating in the wait. Wow this lang. I kinda ran away with myself> :}


Name: padfoot_returns (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 21:42 · For: One Final Question
ill try to refrain from marching up to ur house and screaming at you. i cant say that i didnt see this coming; knowing ur other stories. great chapter. i was listening to "cold" while i was reading this and the combination between the two arent a good thing. i almost cried. i cant wait until the epilogue.


Name: Tori2010 (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 21:40 · For: One Final Question
I love it but yet this chapter dipressed me............ :(


Name: Dill (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 21:28 · For: One Final Question
Ahh! I cried. (I can relate somewhat. BAD MEMORIES)

HURRY UP AND UPDATE!


Name: timestep (Signed) · Date: 01/30/07 21:18 · For: One Final Question
I'm not sure I could improve on it. I would have loved for Starlight to be with Shadow. But, part way through this chapter I started thinking how wrong it felt for Hermione to be with Draco. I couldn't quite see Draco changing so drastically.

Then, you met every expectation by having Draco try to hold too tightly to Hermione.

I thought it was right. I'm not sure I think she should end up married to Ron - probably an OMC - but Ron and Harry will always be a part of her life and I can't imagine her ever chosing someone who gives an either/or challenge.

Not everything is life is happy endings. Sometimes there is heartbreak. It takes a bit of courage to write this way.


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