Reviews For A Thousand Words
Reviewer: hermy460
Date: 05/26/07 6:33
Chapter: Epilogue Part Two: Passing Bells and Sculpted Angels

Just to say... I was dissapointed when Hermione left Draco, but I prefer the original epilogue... it's more like real life, much more credible, and more beautiful... and even it it's a pity, I like it this way!!

Reviewer: nikster
Date: 05/26/07 5:02
Chapter: Epilogue Part Two: Passing Bells and Sculpted Angels

Wow a good end!!
It is a really well written chapter and I enjoyed reading, the whole fic even the sad epilouge!
I think it is a good ending because not all endings are happy.
I can't wait to read some of ur new fics if you write anymore!

Reviewer: DarkHarryPotterGirl
Date: 05/26/07 0:20
Chapter: Epilogue Part Two: Passing Bells and Sculpted Angels

I must say that this is a really good chapter, made me cry. I'm even more sad that this wonderfull story reached its end. Keep writting.

Reviewer: houndog5383
Date: 05/25/07 23:32
Chapter: Epilogue Part Two: Passing Bells and Sculpted Angels

WHOA! It's great. I, my self, don't really like when people die ( but you can'r change me) , but I think your story was beautifully written. I loved it ever since I first started reading. I've been HOOKED! I love your work!!!

-Houndog

Reviewer: Alias_Tonks
Date: 05/25/07 15:29
Chapter: One Final Question

It's so beautifully sad. I love it!

Reviewer: Charli Harte
Date: 05/24/07 23:50
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

OMG...
that was one of the best fanfics i have ever read!!!
such a sad ending, but that is reality...

Reviewer: Seducer
Date: 05/20/07 12:19
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

noooooooooooooooooooooooooo i wanted thm to live happily ever after!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh well not everything's a fairy tale. way to go! amazing story!!

Reviewer: caruth
Date: 05/15/07 0:49
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

uhhmm..this chaoter is kinda sad..no it's really sad!! awwwwwww..i wish they could get back together..poor draco!! *sniff sniff* huhuhu..poor draco!! well please update soon.

Reviewer: drizzlelu
Date: 05/14/07 23:02
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

Annie,it's really a fantastic story and I'll wait for your updating no matter how long it may take. It's right for you not to consider too much about others' views for you are the one to handle this story.All I expect to see is that Hermione can react to her own heart and feelings, that's enough.And I'm sure she will.

Best wishes,

Levy

Reviewer: drizzlelu
Date: 05/14/07 22:58
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

Annie,it's really a fantastic story and I'll wait for your updating no matter how long it may take. It's right for you not to consider too much about others' views for you are the one to handle this story.All I expect to see is that Hermione can react to her own heart and feelings, that's enough.And I'm sure she will.

Best wishes,

Levy

Reviewer: gane
Date: 05/14/07 22:44
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

through time i ahve begun to feel, that draco hermione together would simply be a fairytale idea. it is time that this site has more mature writers and readers. i apologise for before and would like to read the next chapter soon

Reviewer: tuttifrutty
Date: 05/11/07 15:46
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

It wasn't as bad as i thought it would be :] mwahaha im glad Hermione ended so helpless... that's what happens when you left poor draco alone, so that means she went on with blunt ron and had a thousand redhead kids n__n it was nice, and i like it, thanks for such a great story

Reviewer: SpottedOwl
Date: 05/06/07 19:58
Chapter: One Final Question

love it! it (the part where hermione leaves) was based off the phantom of the opera, wasn't it? the movie? very good. i can't wait for the end!

Reviewer: Rowena_Lewis
Date: 05/06/07 19:48
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

(sighs happily) This was such an angsty ending....ahaha :D I loved this story! ^_^ I am going to spread word of this to all the people I know. (nods) Yup. That's for sure.

Reviewer: rndmprsnlily
Date: 05/05/07 22:25
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

Could you post up part 2 of the original epilogue as well? pretty please?

Reviewer: Vnzla_Mamii
Date: 05/03/07 14:49
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

Wow. i feel so bad for them. why cudnt they just b 2gether? yea people would probably neva xcept them but wat would it matter? they would hav each other. but not all stories have happy endings. also i love this ending. they're sposed 2 b 2gether. i think people shud just stop complaining n take this storie as it is.it is a beautiful story n by changing the whole plot would just ruin the whole thing. thats my opinion. well i hope u update soon. :D

Reviewer: 4TheSakeOfLife
Date: 05/02/07 1:50
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

-4TheSakeOfLife-

I just want you to know your amazing
This was better than the book I'm reading right now.
This is so amazing
I cried TWICE in this one chapter
I have recently lost someone I loved (He didn't die but were not together any more and we never talk) and I still love him and can't keep him out of my mind

this is amazing


-4TSOL-

Reviewer: TheTrioLivesOn
Date: 04/25/07 16:22
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

I really loved your story, and now I can't wait for the next/alternative part, not because I don't like this ending, but because I like this story and your writing.

Reviewer: pimpinglitter
Date: 04/23/07 23:46
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

Wow. I just want you to know that you write beautifully. :]
And while I'm one of those suckers for happy endings, and claim to hate sad endings, I still can't help but read all your stories with all their tragic endings.
Believe me, I usually stay clear from sad endings because I'm such an emotional wreck when I read them but...
You're just that good.
Good luck with your school, and I hope to see the alternate ending soon!

Reviewer: Leahr
Date: 04/23/07 21:49
Chapter: Epilogue Part One: A World With No More Night

I see how people might want Draco and Hermione together, but at the same time, to go in new directions as an author is much more Gryffindor. I personally think this ending is better, because Hermione was right- with Draco, she'll always be falling, but Ron will alwalys be there for her. If she married Draco, she'd be constantly afraid- not just of his former DE friends coming for revenge- but of the worst sides of Draco's own character overcoming him, like almost happened with Ron. She'd never be able to fully trust his judgement- even if she trusted him when it came to herself, he simply would be unpredictable with others. Was that Draco who used Crucio in the forest? Anyhow, she can love Ron without him being her intellectual equal, although you did rather underplay Ron's intelligence- he is much smarter than that in canon, the typical example being chess, but also in his skills in other areas. Many smart people just don't do well in a school setting, and I think Ron looks dumb simply because you often described him through Draco's eyes, or Hermione after she absorbed Draco's advice. So yes, this ending was just- good, and fitting with the characterisations you've made throughout.
That said, I do think it will be nice to read the alternate ending, simply because while Ron may be best for Hermione in many ways, Draco does complement her, as you said. And what is best for Draco is definitely not R/Hr. No. He's going to become a werewolf, isn't he. And that is so sad and wrong and destroys his last few years' attempt to redeem himself. Hermione brings out the best in him, and we'll never know- until the second epilogue that is. Hermione ought to still remain friends with Ron and the Weasleys, though (I do hope). Though perhaps Ron will be a bit colder? I hope not. Perhaps he will find someone else and realize things are better that way. Anyway, I look forward to your post, though as I said, i do like the current ending. Except for Draco's fate, of course.
And I'd just like to say before this review becomes interminably long and my homework goes undone- I dont usually read D/Hr, finding it unrealistic and totally ooc or pure cliche. This fic pleasantly surprised me, although of course not entirely avoiding ooc, impossible in D/Hr, but by having reasonable ways to explain the characters' changes (except Draco's one minute impetus, of saving Harry changing his worldview forevermore, which seemed more abrupt than the rest) in a gradual way, drawn out just long enough to seem feasible. Although if they are both as smart as they seem I dont know why neither guessed far earlier, some of the clues did seem to narrow it down an awful lot. But still, this was a job very well done.

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