I have a question. I don't know if I missed it or if it wasn't said but I'd really like to know... Is Draco the one that killed Hermione, and Ron?
Amazing story, though. I couldn't stop reading, it was beautifully written.
I really wanted Hermione and Draco to get together. I know what you're thinking, "Did you even rean the author's notes at the beginning?" Yes I did but I couldn't just leave and never know what originally happened! This was a good chapter. I'd really like to know what Draco and Greyback's deal was. It's too late to do it now but I'll read the alternate version tomorrow! Great work, I can't wait to read more of your writing!
I think this chapter is pretty good. (probably because Hermione isn't with Draco) This was very touching. I've been crying throughout this whole chapter! Just to picture Draco in the tea shop killed me!
I can't believe you did that!!!!!! I literally started crying! It was so beautiful and romantic at the begining! The stupid Ron had to come in and ruin EVERYTHING!!!! I really hope the epilogue is good!!!
I think I know what Ron is planning on doing and I really don't like him fo rloosing his temper. I liked this chapter though. Now I really want to get back to Hermione and Draco and see if she's okay!
Oh this chapter was AMAZINGLY BRILLIANT!!!!! This whole thing was great! I love that Draco was trying to protect Hermione! My, well her, Knight in shining armour! I now love him!
I loved it!!! Draco has such a way with words!!! I loved his letter to Hermione, it was so romantic! I'm totally falling for Draco! I love this fic! You've done an amazing job on it!
I can not even begin to say how much I LOVE this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! Finally their first kiss!! This was all so romantic!! I'm speechless!!! You made me cry along with the characters!
*wipes away the many tears*
I LOVE this chapter!!! I can't believe Draco's beong this way, although I think I know why. I especially loved the end! Poor Ron I sorta feel sorry for him for seeing that. And a huge Poor Hermione!!! You wrote this SO well I just can't think of how to say it!
I LOVED this chapter!!!!!!! Draco was a bit rude but the end was so sweet!!! I knew she'd sleep talk and say something about Shadow! I'm so happy Draco now knows! Alright enough babbling from me. I MUST get on with the fic!
I loved it! I really can't believe Ron proposed. I don't want her to marry him! The night with Shadow was amazing! She can't marry Ron!!!!
Oh how romantic!!! I loved this! (although I'm not happy that Ron is thinking about making up with Hermione) The whole part with Starlight and Shadow's meeting was so romantic, I loved it!!! I can't wait for more!!
I loved it! I loved the emotion and tention that was in the scene where Hermione helped Draco with the potion! You can definately tell they have feelings for each other! I can't wait to read on!
Amazing! I loved every bit of this chapter! I really liked how Draco is comfortable enough to share these secrets with Hermione!
Brilliant!!! I liked how you described the training. I loved that Draco spilled his secret to Hermione! I feel so sorry for him! I just want to, again, run up to him and kiss him! Great work!
I loved this chapter! You had me laughing at many parts in here. I liked the part where Hermione go trid of Anna, she really is getting on my nerves. I like that Hermione and Draco are finally getting somewhere on the case.
Amazing! I like how you've shown the fight going on inside Draco about the feelings he has towards Starlight. Also the mirror was a fantastic idea! I love how Hermione was questioning Draco and trying to figure out if Draco truely is Shadow! Nice job!
Finally Hermione figured it out!!! OH boy do I dispise (sp?) Ron!! He just has to be so rude! And he makes himself look even stupider.
I liked when Draco and Hermione walked together to the Leaky Cauldron. It was a really sweet moment to see them get along. Brilliant work!!!
Brilliant!!! I loved the mini duel!! Ron is such a prat!!! I'm really hating him right now. He needs to get over his jealousy and protectiveness if he really wants to keep Hermione.
I was wondering if Draco would catch what Hermione said about the snow. He just tried to make himself believe that it wasn't her. This is getting really fascinating! You just keep pulling me deeper and deeper. I just can't bring myself to leave the computer screen!
I loved it! It's interesting to know that she ended up in a memory of Shadow when she intended to remember Ron. Great job!