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Name: qwert417 (Signed) · Date: 06/26/08 21:43 · For: Reconnections
The plot is looking better now and I think you pulled off the time-skip rather well. However, an ongoing problem with your story is the lack of contractions in the dialogue. You make their dialogue sound a bit formal which doesn't fit at all with the story. Plus, the in the real HP books none of the characters talk so uncontracted. Still for the most part it's good, but it would flow a lot better if you worked on their dialogue.

Name: misshogwarts95 (Signed) · Date: 06/20/08 19:01 · For: Contemplations
ooooh, i wasnt expecting that!!! nice idea, i must venture on!

its 2am my time, yes im crazy right now. not to mention starving

heehee, i still loved the twist!

Name: reader_alex13 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 9:57 · For: Homes
The end was the best, it was really funny and from i've read in other chapters i know that you will make harry and ginny's time in paris unforgetable.

Name: reader_alex13 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 9:29 · For: Weddings
this one was a bit sad, but i'm expecting harry to almost kill mauricio for hitting ginny.

Name: reader_alex13 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 9:08 · For: Musings
i only have one thing to say, harry, i think, deserved it for not asking her out sooner and now he might have to live with it the rest of his life. And I don't think this was a sad chapter.

Name: reader_alex13 (Signed) · Date: 06/05/08 8:48 · For: Holidays Part 1
Wow, i don't think i've ever seen hermione ever say something like that, but i'm glad someone finally said it.

Name: alisonann807 (Signed) · Date: 06/04/08 20:24 · For: Confessions
WOW!! I loved this chapter with all my heart! The letter was so powerful I almost cried!

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:15 · For: Bathrooms Part 1
Great story

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:14 · For: Gifts

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:14 · For: Approvals
Loved her since he was 15...

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:13 · For: Announcements
A baby! Are you serious?!

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:12 · For: Moments
What a lovely couple.

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:11 · For: Conversations

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:10 · For: Confessions
They are together! *HI-5!*

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:06 · For: Homes
It must be horribble constantly being in the nespapwrers.

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:04 · For: Break-Ups
What good friends.

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:03 · For: Weddings
What happened?

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:01 · For: Lessons
I LOVE swing dancing!

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:00 · For: Musings

Name: ChaChia (Signed) · Date: 05/26/08 0:00 · For: Holidays Part 2
Ginny and Harry are both making horrible mistakes.

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