"Even his unruly hair which was usually sticking up in a million different directions seemed to be lying flat in defeat."
Genius, sheer genius. I love this story.
I think I am getting a bit obsessed. It's getting harder and harder to direct my thoughts into writing a review as opposed to eagerly searching for the next chapter.
AMAZING!!! I LOVE how you introduced the relationship between Harry and Ginny!
...And the idea of Ginny writing to Harry from a tree was genius, and super cute! I really enjoyed this chapter, no wonder it's on the top ten most favorite stories! Nice job!
omg! this story is AMAZING!!!
Excellent story. Believeable changes made to characters, but not enough to spoil the enjoyment. Thank you.
Oh, please, please, PLEASE! Hurry up and finish the story, i am DIEING TO KNOW WHAT HARRY'S CHRISTMAS GIFT FROM GINNY IS!!! Please,hurry up, you are such a great writer and this is a wonderful story!
oh, please hurry up and continue writing, i adore thie story!! You have an easy knack for writing and i quite enjoy the way the characters flow with their original personals but you added your own view on them!!! Keep writing anf finish the story, oh and PLEASE HURRY UP!!!! PLEASE!
..........(giggles like a school girl even though is a guy)hehehehehehe ok im happy now........kinda still upset over a sentence a few pages ago though......eh the "I can make you scream it" phrase kinda made up for it though. tehe ^-^
much better but urge to hurt mauricio still intact more to follow
thought i forgot the dots didnt you
......urge to destroy lessening.
................................................... i;m still reading but im grinding my teeth......................
i have some home but this is still a good story...........more dots to follow later.
hahaha this was great.
hahahaha. it gets better and better.
hahahaha the ending was great hahahaha.
this is such a good fic. i'm hooked.
hahahaha i love it so far.
The plot is looking better now and I think you pulled off the time-skip rather well. However, an ongoing problem with your story is the lack of contractions in the dialogue. You make their dialogue sound a bit formal which doesn't fit at all with the story. Plus, the in the real HP books none of the characters talk so uncontracted. Still for the most part it's good, but it would flow a lot better if you worked on their dialogue.
ooooh, i wasnt expecting that!!! nice idea, i must venture on!
its 2am my time, yes im crazy right now. not to mention starving
heehee, i still loved the twist!
The end was the best, it was really funny and from i've read in other chapters i know that you will make harry and ginny's time in paris unforgetable.
this one was a bit sad, but i'm expecting harry to almost kill mauricio for hitting ginny.