Bien, good, except I didn't expect the 'rambling' as you put it. You know what, never mind, it's you're first fic, I really shouldn't criticize you...
Muy Bueno, very good!
Oh my! What trailer? YES! I love your story, it is BRILLIANT!
LuV the FLUFF!
wow. FINALLY! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Harry sounds evil at the end....
okay, I think I can forgive you now....
*evil laughs* and I cannot wait for next chapter! muahahahahaha!
uhhhhhhh.... I hope this is the last chapter, because I feel so bad for Harry!
Why did Mauricio and Ginny have to get engaged anywho?
oh, bother! why does harry let her do that to him?!?!?! disgusting... I had to fight to keep my food down as well..
What kind of a pet name is Phimie? It reminds me 2 much of Peanut! *sniff sniff*
I CAN'T BELIEVE GINNY DIED HER HAIR!!!!
oh, dear.... are you serious?????? nice cliffie, but ouch!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!
An excellent chapter indeed! At first I wasn't exactly sure what you meant by using a staff, but then you said something about over sized sticks and I got it.
...and by the way, that is super cool you have a black belt!!!!
...just one tiny thing, I thought Harry seemed a bit out of character when he was telling Ginny everything... how he was feeling and such, and that's just not a very guy-ish thing to do, at least not in those quantities.
Okay, I don't know what to say. But, why is Harry turning into Professor Trelawney?
I loved the previous chapters that were all about Harry and Ginny, but I suppose the story is starting to come into play and I couldn't stop reading this fanfic even if I wanted to.
I think the different POV's were great except I got a little confused when it started changing every other sentence.