Reviewer: dominoharvey
Date: 08/02/06 23:06
Chapter: Headquarters

JEALOUS GIT!

Reviewer: dominoharvey
Date: 08/02/06 22:58
Chapter: An Interesting Arrival

AWW THEY ARE SOO CUTE!! THEY SHOULD GET MARRIED

Reviewer: ronsgrl06
Date: 08/02/06 22:50
Chapter: Headquarters

ooooooooo

Reviewer: ronsgrl06
Date: 08/02/06 22:45
Chapter: An Interesting Arrival

sweet very sweet yet alarming, i cant wait to see wut happens next

Reviewer: featheredpheonix
Date: 08/02/06 8:50
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

pleas writ more or i will be devistateeed

Reviewer: featheredpheonix
Date: 08/02/06 7:48
Chapter: Headquarters

WOW! very intense and exciting!

Reviewer: featheredpheonix
Date: 08/02/06 7:41
Chapter: An Interesting Arrival

a great start to a great story i'm hoping!!!

Reviewer: theeldesttwin
Date: 08/01/06 10:31
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

hmmm, i like the alternate ending

Reviewer: hpfreak519
Date: 08/01/06 6:47
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

Really sweet. I think i liked that other ending better, but this one was still really good.

Reviewer: hpfreak519
Date: 08/01/06 6:43
Chapter: Just Do It!

loved the end. It was really good. Loved the last sentence, symbolism.yay ! lol

Reviewer: hpfreak519
Date: 08/01/06 6:31
Chapter: The Explanation and the House Elf

awww the 3rd chapter was really cute :)

Reviewer: hpfreak519
Date: 08/01/06 6:23
Chapter: Headquarters

SIRIUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :) i always enjoy stories before the end on OotP, then sirius is still alive :). I loved your story, can't wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: wonwon_hermy
Date: 07/31/06 21:58
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

awwwwwwww that was so cute i love the last chapter YAY!!! great job

Reviewer: Liadian Weasley
Date: 07/31/06 20:43
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

i like the alternate ending much better

Reviewer: hpfreak519
Date: 07/31/06 20:01
Chapter: An Interesting Arrival

awww so cute. can't stop smiling lol :D

Reviewer: Fauna
Date: 07/31/06 18:21
Chapter: An Interesting Arrival

OOOOOO! Very good!

Reviewer: moonys_mate_356
Date: 07/31/06 2:08
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

*chuckles* Very clever story...just the right amount of tension to keep everything intersting. None of the characters are OOC; you have their personalities written well, and you stuck to the plot, in Order of the Pheonix, as well. A perfect R/Hr fic, excellent job!!! 1,000/10 :-)
~Holly

Author's Response: thanks! i really appreciate it!

Reviewer: SiriusPotterFan1
Date: 07/21/06 15:26
Chapter: Just Do It!

Awww, Poor Ron. That's so SAD! Will you update? Please? Soon? Well, think about it, this is really good.

Author's Response: I cant, the story is over! but thanks anyway

Reviewer: FreetheElves
Date: 07/20/06 15:03
Chapter: Just Do It!

Oh, poor Ron. This was a really well-written story. It was amazing how you wrote it from their point of view, so the readers knew what was going on with Harry simotaneously. Good Job!

Author's Response: thanks! i tried my best to keep them at the same pace.

Reviewer: FreetheElves
Date: 07/20/06 12:59
Chapter: Headquarters

You nailed Ron's personality perfectly! Good Job!

*goes back to reading the rest of the chapters*

Author's Response: haha thanks, i hope you like the rest of them too.

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