Reviewer: hermionelove
Date: 11/16/06 12:23
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

I love the alternate ending ALOT more, lol. Great job, I loooove this story!!

Reviewer: SupremeMugwump
Date: 11/07/06 17:30
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

I like this ending WAY more than the other. Sad endings ruin my day too much lol =) Please write more!!

Reviewer: SupremeMugwump
Date: 11/07/06 17:21
Chapter: So Close, But Yet...

I love how you merge your story and the start of OotP together. =)

Reviewer: SupremeMugwump
Date: 11/07/06 17:15
Chapter: The Explanation and the House Elf

Awww.... teenage emotions...... Great story so far!

Reviewer: SupremeMugwump
Date: 11/07/06 17:06
Chapter: Headquarters

Ron is so pig-headed! You portray him perfectly lol. You have a great style of writing and a strong voice. I hope Ron and 'Mione make up soon.

Reviewer: Moony 62442
Date: 10/29/06 8:56
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

Great! I always wondered what happened when Harry wasn't there (pun very intended)... now I know I'm not the only one! Great job.

Reviewer: DracoLuva4684
Date: 09/24/06 13:46
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

OMG! That was the sweetest thing I have ever read! Loved it! The first ending was really depressing and I was mad, so thanks for fixing it!

Reviewer: GinnyPotter808
Date: 09/05/06 15:56
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

omg! i LUV this ending... not the other one.
Wen i read this one i sang, "ahhhh!" in an angelic voice.

Reviewer: EmmaWeasley
Date: 09/01/06 17:06
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

All I can say is. Yay! ^^

Reviewer: HPFreak723
Date: 08/21/06 22:58
Chapter: Just Do It!

Good story...but I dont like all the hostility Ron has for Harry...I think he'd be eager to have his best friend back rather than wanting him to stay where he had just been attacked longer

Reviewer: phoenix_lullaby
Date: 08/20/06 11:15
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

I like the alternate ending. It's cute. It's kinda like how i would picture Hermione & Ron's first kiss. Awesome! Very cute!

Reviewer: HP1FAN
Date: 08/16/06 14:59
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

Loved your story. It was soooo cute. Hopefully it will go that way in book seven.

Reviewer: x_GryffinGal_x
Date: 08/12/06 9:58
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

Just my opinion, but the alternet(spelling) ending was much better than the origanal(spelling). Sorry I can't spell today. The 3 cups of coffee haven't kicking in yet.

Author's Response: alternate* original* sorry, lol. i like the alternate ending cuz of the sweetness of it, but i like the original more cuz it's unexpected and sad. plus i think it could have really happened in the books. we all know they'll hook up eventually, lol ;)

Reviewer: RedheadObsession
Date: 08/09/06 21:18
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

Very cute!!
I loved it!
I also really liked how you did two endings, because it supports two different theories. Loved them both!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: Inny
Date: 08/03/06 15:23
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)

^^ Wow, I like the other ending better only because it's bitter sweet. XD But awesome job on the entire fic. I love it.

Author's Response: i liked the other ending too for the same reason, but i wanted to write this one too lol

Reviewer: dominoharvey
Date: 08/02/06 23:54
Chapter: Just Do It! (Alternate Ending)


Author's Response: ha ha thanks

Reviewer: dominoharvey
Date: 08/02/06 23:49
Chapter: Just Do It!


Reviewer: dominoharvey
Date: 08/02/06 23:37
Chapter: So Close, But Yet...


Author's Response: haha i know! i cringe everytime i read when sirius bangs open the door

Reviewer: dominoharvey
Date: 08/02/06 23:19
Chapter: The Explanation and the House Elf


Reviewer: ronsgrl06
Date: 08/02/06 23:10
Chapter: Just Do It!

sooooo close

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