Reviewer: obsessedwithron
Date: 04/16/06 15:16
Chapter: Just Do It!

OMG!!!!! I love this story, but I just wish he had gotten to tell her!!!!!!!!!!!!! 100000/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I felt so bad but I had to make it so he couldn't tell her- it's supposed to follow canon ;(

Reviewer: hpgirl_91
Date: 04/15/06 16:38
Chapter: Just Do It!

NOOO! So close! Great symbolisim with the chess game. I can't wait to read more of your work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I felt so bad when his knight fell next to her queen!

Reviewer: DoxieQueen
Date: 04/05/06 21:10
Chapter: Just Do It!

WOOT! Great job! I think I've read this before, but I don't know... anyway, 10/10! And no, it's not cheating! LOL

Author's Response: Thanks! This was probably my favorite out of all my stories.

Reviewer: 9fawkes9
Date: 03/24/06 9:14
Chapter: Just Do It!

Aargh! Stupid! Stupid! Stupid! Ron is so stupid!

Author's Response: haha! I know, I felt SO bad for him! I couldn't make them kiss though, it's just not following how the actual story plays out.

Reviewer: bratface0201
Date: 12/28/05 16:44
Chapter: Just Do It!

Is it cheating if I give myself a 10/10?? oh well!

Reviewer: Helluin
Date: 12/17/05 4:09
Chapter: Just Do It!

Great ending. I was surprised, but glad that you kept it true to cannon. I especially liked your chronology, matching it up with Harry's chronology in OotP. Poor Ron...can't wait till we do get to see him confess to Hermione (and hopefully Jo will let us witness it).

Reviewer: Helluin
Date: 12/17/05 3:37
Chapter: An Interesting Arrival

I have only read the first part so far; it's good. But since Dumbledore is secret-keeper, Molly couldn't tell them to go to Number 12, Grimmauld Place, only Dumbledore could. Other than that, I like it; good job with characterization.

Author's Response: haha you're right, i didn't even think of dumbledore only knowing about it. oh well, it works for the story, right?

Reviewer: _Hermione Granger_
Date: 12/15/05 9:55
Chapter: Just Do It!

Love it!! So close... so close I can't wait until they finally get together!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review... 3 times LOL

Reviewer: _Hermione Granger_
Date: 12/15/05 9:55
Chapter: Just Do It!

Love it!! So close... so close I can't wait until they finally get together!!

Reviewer: _Hermione Granger_
Date: 12/15/05 9:55
Chapter: Just Do It!

Love it!! So close... so close I can't wait until they finally get together!!

Reviewer: rita_skeeter
Date: 10/29/05 17:09
Chapter: Just Do It!

Really good story, fanstastic ending - well done. If only...if only...ah well...I know they'll get together in Book 7! 10/10

Reviewer: Imaya
Date: 10/28/05 10:43
Chapter: Just Do It!

Great chapter. The chess board coins just said it! just set to Rons mind really. A good finish. Keep updating soon

Author's Response: Thanks, but the story is finished.

Reviewer: Auror81692
Date: 10/27/05 18:53
Chapter: The Explanation and the House Elf

Yeah this storys cool...i kno this is mean but i think ron will like kill kreacher...i have a strange feelin that in the 7th book that there are gonna go back to sirius's house

Reviewer: nymph_magic
Date: 10/25/05 23:30
Chapter: Just Do It!

great story, but the chapter name sounds like a nike advirtisment. haha. jokes.

Author's Response: lol your right, i didnt even think about that! oh well, nike's good.

Reviewer: Ronandchicken
Date: 10/23/05 20:48
Chapter: Just Do It!

Aw... that was a good way to end the story. Poor Ron, though.

Reviewer: hermioneweasleyness
Date: 10/22/05 21:00
Chapter: Just Do It!

oh. bloody brillant ending, though.

Reviewer: hermioneweasleyness
Date: 10/22/05 20:59
Chapter: Just Do It!

ohmygosh. YOU'RE TORTURING USSSS. =(

Reviewer: mariami
Date: 10/21/05 21:21
Chapter: Just Do It!

Ahhh you're torturing me! Ahh why did harry have to arrive at that moment? ahh! awesome! great! =) please update soon! 10/10!!

Reviewer: willow_wand
Date: 10/21/05 19:51
Chapter: An Interesting Arrival

"Only Hermione’s Queen was left standing… next to his fallen Knight." Aww, poor Ron.

Reviewer: hermioneweasleyness
Date: 10/21/05 16:49
Chapter: So Close, But Yet...

AGHHHHHHH. FSSDGDSFJ. SO CLOSE. (;

Author's Response: haha i know! i almost drove MYSELF crazy with that!

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