Reviews For Breaking
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 02/26/08 18:43
Chapter: Breaking

I really liked this. Alot of Ginny's feelings make so much sense, you've captured them really well. Harry being not her first but her best, one line that speaks volumes. Ron even pulled her chair out, not typical Ron so this shows how much he cares and how much he hurts too. Having a dream so real you aren't sure if it actually happened, well I have many times and its so confusing. You've written this in a way that allows the reader to identify with Ginny and go through the process of grieving and coming out the other side where the sun starts to feel slightly warm. Wonderful fic.

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 04/15/05 19:26
Chapter: Breaking

That was very sad and well written! Was it a oneshot?

Author's Response: Kerian, I'm still not sure if I want to keep this a one-shot or not... but thank you for reading and giving your opinion!

Reviewer: phoenix_trills
Date: 04/15/05 17:06
Chapter: Breaking

omg, that was really good! and really sad! but mainly really good! im gonna go cry now, excuse me...

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