What a wonderful story. It's really powerful and leaves an impact. It's great!
Whoa, definitely worried me with that. I was convinced he was going to jump. IT was very mysterious.
Loved it! Such a smooth, mysterious tone.
i really like your style. wonderfully sad! love it!!!
I love your stories, this one was good, but i liked the story in the grave yard better than this. I love the way we have to guess who your talking about, it makes the story more interesting. Have you though about writing longer fics? Your stories are over too quickly. :)
Author's Response: hehe, i actually have written longer stories, they're just not up here on this site yet... but i thought i might start posting one of them here now...
Fantastisk historie... jeg blev lidt træt af at skrive på engelsk, håber ikke det gør noget??...hehe...jeg har også læst din anden historie, du får virkelig nogle fede detajler med!!! det er lige før man kan mærke følelserne og stemningen, som ville være på stedet... Fortsæt endelig det gode arbejde ^_^
Author's Response: tackar tackar :)
This is interesting, i love the style though it is rather unnerving thinking of Harry in this light. It shows a lot though and it really kept me hooked, there was a lot of meaning hidden between the lines and i really liked it...
Author's Response: glad i could get everything across :)
I really liked this a lot. It's very descriptive and the only thing was when you said "raven-haired said" it sort of didnt make sense. I hope to read more of your stuff though.
Author's Response: it didn't? hm... i'll have a look at it