This was short, but I love Remus. Even though this isn't finished, (well, it is, but it doesn't go on) I'm just going to imagine he gets the girl. Yay for a Remus fic!
i like where this is going i what to hear more
This catergory is romance.
There is no romance in here at all.
It does not state the pairing and this chapter was way to short to be called..well..a chapter.
i liked it but it was a little short i would have added like 4 more chapters but i did like it
What is the pairing here? Make that clear early on. Other than that its totally awesome!
It is a good story, and please add more chapters!!
um...and then? it was a good start but it didn't really have an ending. and why on earth had none of remus' old friends contacted him in 2 years?
That is so cool! No one ever writes about that time in the maurader's life! I can't wait to read more!
what happens next? but the story is good, its just a really bad cliff-hanger (in a good way, i guess)
A deeply downtrodden person sits at her desk surrounded by crumpled parchment. Deeply disturbed at the happenings of the last few days and anxiously awaiting the reply that must come. She worries about the great horned owl she has just sent will it return with aid? Or will it be shot down on sight.
If the message is coming through please help me
The Mentor was sitting at his/her desk, it had been a long day. The Fan fic writers had always had horrible grammar and there run on sentences would drive her batty. As she bent low to add another parchment to the to many corrections pile, which happened to sitat the bottom of her/his garbage can. She heard a flutter of wings as a great horned owl swooped down into her/his office. She unraveled the letter quickly and hopefully, casting her eyes at the first three words she new it was going to be a long day. She sat down at her desk and began to read.
I need your help on this most mentally fixating problem
I do not know how to contact any one from here
she/he read on
For the past 3 days I have been diligently working on a fic, My first fic ever. I have attempted about 5 hundred times to submit this fic when I realized it was my formatting at approximately 4 am I finally got it across but this morning it has disappeared from my archive.
I don't know how to get a hold of anyone in here and decided this was my best course of action. Please help me, It really is driving me quite and irreversibly crazy at the moment and I cannot rest until I have overcome this problem.
If you understand my predicament I would love your aid
anxiously awaiting your reply
The most frustrated Lobena
Good, but I feeel there is more story to be told. I also don't think James wouldn't contact remus for that long.
HUH??? that's all??? you left thee readers high and dry, a good start for a possible great story, but there should be at least, how he finds a date and maybe the wedding .
poor remus. he suffers from a lack of self-confidence. i like this story. maybe you can do a sequel in which remus finds a date?
it was good.:D
I like it but it should have another chapter!
And i actually really liked it and im not easy to please! in fact im not easy to please at all!
i like ur story a lot it is very goood
but wouldnt james keep up with his best friends -- a little confused about that otherwise very very good
Tell me you're not done! Keep at it, whether it's this one or an new fic!
I loved it. Marvelously written - James's letter was so very James-ish, it was perfect. I have Amy Grant's "So Good For Me" going through my head after this one.
Anyhow... Wonderful work. Keep writing! I look forward to seeing more.
~Juliet - 10/7/06
Short, sweet and slightly funny. What fic could be better?!
Write ore please!