mmm...nice images. Vivid.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like to keep the details on high as you can tell from this and my other poems. Thanks for reviewing! :D
Well, I don't really like poems that don't rhyme, but I won't let that prejudice me.. I thought that was a good idea, although I got the impression that it was only entered into poems because it was too short to be taken in the stories part. I didn't really see much of a rhythm, but you are welcome to read mine and say that there is no rhythm there either.
Author's Response: I understand where you're getting at about not rhyming, but usually I don't. I also never did intend on making a fan fic about it, though i am starting a fanfic right now that i hope you'll enjoy! Thanks for the reveiw! :D