Aw man, this made tears come into my eyes. This is one of my mom's favorite songs. Wow, this was incredible. Great job.
I love that song, it applies really to everyone whos ever lost anyone. Nice fiction
I love that song, it applies really to everyone whos ever lost anyone. Nice fiction
i cried. i cried like a little baby.
Okay I balled my eyes out. It kinda reminded me of my dad. Beautifully written
This story reduced me to tears
Its really good!
*sigh*! I really enjoyed that! It was nicely written, definitley something that James would do for Lily *gets dreamy-eyed*. Awesome job!!
-harry_victoria
That was simply............... beautiful. I cried. I lost my grandfather 3 years ago. My parents didn't understand why I was crying, so I told them that I'd got something in my eyes. I closed the door and cried so much that my Pillow was wet. Good job. I wonder, where did you get such a beautifully sad and sadly beautiful concept.
*sob* that was so SAD! I lost my dad 5 1/2 years ago. That song always makes me cry and so does this story! but in a good way.
i agree with you it is sad but i did love it
I almost cried...almost. My eyes got teary eyed. Very sad...I wish Harry didn't die
oh my gosh this is so sad. I'm literally crying :-( but it's so, so good. great job.
~Lizey
brilliant job. i got all teary eyed but that may have just been because i got apple in the eye, but anyway, i really liked this. i've got it going now for sad fics, and yours was great!
This is my absolute FAVORITE song. i love this story. it's so cute
So....so.......sad!
James and Lily Potter? That's cute.
That was really sad :'( But a very nice story!! :)
It is not often that a fanfic makes me cry. This was a very notable exception. Great job!
I've never heard to song before, but it's a very good fit. I don't understand the last line of Ron and Hermione though -- it seems really random.
If I could offer any sugguestions it'd be to use a variety of words to start of paragraphs (I noticed you started them with "she" or "he" a lot).
Very good fic. Great job. :)
Reading your story brought tears to my eyes. Great job. 10/10
