Reviews For ~My Eternal Love~
Reviewer: popey2222
Date: 12/18/04 9:34
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

ha ha ha one of the funniest stories i have ever read! please write another i am still laughin just thinkin about snape drinkin the poison because he cant have hermione. well done, fabulous story

Author's Response: peeps commiting suicide isn't all that funny... but, whatever floats your boat... lol... Lurve, Cassandra

Reviewer: Gemmika
Date: 12/14/04 16:50
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

I have to say this was the most bizarre thing I have ever read. I usually like Hr/SS but this one was a little off the charts, still good, but very odd...

Reviewer: moon lovegood
Date: 12/07/04 16:40
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

Its brillant!

Reviewer: Bella
Date: 12/06/04 23:01
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

Very Romeo and Juliet. I like it, but do feel horrible for Snape. Poor poor Snape

Author's Response: I know, I cried when I came up with that ending for Snape... wow, I never thought about it, but yah, it IS Romeo and Juliet-ish... that's kinda cool... thanks for pointing that out... Lurve, Cassandra

Reviewer: MoonysMistress
Date: 12/04/04 20:51
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

*blinks* *twice* I never thought I'd ever feel this bad for Snape. Ever. *watery eyes* It was very nice...even if the pairing kind of odds me out...but there wasn't any severe (ha ha...a pun...severe...Severus...oh i'm funny...) HG/SS-ness, so it's all good. :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad I made you so sad... wait, that came out wrong... let's try that again... I'm so glad I evoked the emotions within you that I hoped to evoke... ok that was kinda book-ish, but w/e... you ARE very funny... *severe...* ha ha ha... *laughs oddly to herself...* the pairing odds many out, but that was another thing I tried to do... I'm thinking outside of the box... next thing you know, I'll be writing slash... but I write really crap slash, I'm much better at reading it... hahaha... that was supposed to be funny... *sniff* I think I'm funny... Lurve, Cassandra

Reviewer: psychofreak
Date: 12/03/04 3:41
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

Okay...I only have four letters. LMAO!! That was freaking funny! I'm sorry if its suppose to be depressing and sad and blah blah blah, but killing himself after kissing Hermione was freaking hilarious! lol. Okay...I'll stop laughing...hehehehe...okay I'll stop now. Straight face. Okay...though the ending seemed odd, being that he did kill himself! Well...that was unexpected and yet, I would have too if I was Severus, what if she told Professor Dumbledore, or what if she told Ron, would he kill him off anyway! lol. And then of course I would die of embarrassment, because Hermione could have told everyone in the whole school, and half would believe her while the other half would detest the thought! lol. Great short fic-let. Hope you write more...its very interesting. Peace Out!!

Author's Response: oookaaayyy... um, fyi, it wasn't supposed to be funny... but it doesn't matter, as long as you enjoyed it, I'm happy... and even if ppl don't enjoy it, I wrote this for me and for ppl who want to enjoy themselves, so there... jk, thx for your second long review... you write really long ones... that's not bad, you know... anyways, the end was supposed to be rather unexpected, but that's because he's sorta living on the edge, half-mad with love and whatnot... anyways, thx again for R&Ring (like I dais, my new word... lol) Lurve, Cassandra

Reviewer: psychofreak
Date: 12/03/04 3:34
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

Hey, thanks so much for reading my FF. It really means a lot. So I came here to return the favor! Wow, a SS/HG FF, I've only read one in my past life! lol. Though it was called, "The Light in the Dark" by Lyndsay Kaye. She started to write it on the WB site, and now she's finishing it on site. Its really good, like really really good. Because she doesn't jump into the love or relationship between them...she totally took her time, give hints and small scenes here and there...with her evil deception! lol. Well this isn't that bad, though I'm sad to see it finished! Oh, well. First thing you could have done...write more! Its very interesting, and it seemed you were hiding things or leaving them out. Like how the heck did Harry die, and the true background of Severus wanting to kill Ron, only because he's jealous. Well very interesting plot! Moving on to finish the story! Hope you continue to write more...I envy young writers! lol. Peace Out!!

Author's Response: thanks for R&Ring... I know that's not a word, but it is now... anyways, I made it happen quickly because this was actually written a couple of years ago, and I just got around to typing it up and posting it... I just didn't feel like writing a whole big one... but maybe I'll expand this... We'll see... anyways, I wonder why you envy us young'uns? ah well, "youth is but a state of mind", a quote by the omniscient me... I feel so... deep and wise... Lurve, Cassandra

Reviewer: Ashley Malfoy
Date: 11/23/04 22:11
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

so sad...

Reviewer: lucillaq
Date: 11/19/04 22:49
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

Oh , My god. No thats not the end is it?!!!!!! He dies. How sad!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes, I'm sorry, but that's the end... I wanted some way to end it, and he always felt to me like a suicidal kinda guy... maybe that's why I like him so much... anyways, yes, it is sad, but I hope you enjoyed it...

Reviewer: lucillaq
Date: 11/19/04 22:45
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

wow, Snape/Hermione = why do i feel funny? haha . Love it

Reviewer: dreamergirl5
Date: 11/19/04 17:29
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

ummmmmmm interesting.... not bad but its just one of the things that make you go baaahhh..... its written well... the story line is just..... weird.... ::tilts head to side and looks questioningly:: its good.... but weird.... please update

Author's Response: I know the story lines kinda wierd... I love thinking outside the box... I'm that kinda person... unfortunatly this is the end... but I'm hoping to submit some more of my work soon, so stick around!

Reviewer: Sad4Sirius
Date: 11/19/04 15:43
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

I really dont want to think about Harry dying, because it will make me cry.... interesting ship.... write more soon

Author's Response: I'm so sorry that I killed off Harry... but I really just like working with the more sub-characters... Anyways, I'm glad you like it... it's one of my favorite ships... I've already submitted the last chapter, so it *hopefully* should be coming soon... Lurve, Cassandra

Reviewer: snapefan1
Date: 11/18/04 16:50
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

I can't wait for the second one! Its great!

Reviewer: lucillaq
Date: 11/15/04 19:42
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

Wow, student-teacher relatinship. I like it sounds juicy. Please write more!!!!

Author's Response: Ive already finished the story and I'm about to submit the second chapter... I'm glad you like it, it's one of my favorite ships!!!!

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