Reviews For ~My Eternal Love~
Reviewer: spoipitnels
Date: 02/01/13 18:46
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

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Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/22/12 4:40
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

Hmm... I like the premise, but this story is very short. Perhaps you can extend it? It felt very rushed, especially at the end. Still, I find it funny that Snape was so quick to give up when Hermione said she didn't love him...

Reviewer: no_potter_haters
Date: 12/20/10 9:21
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

oh my gosh right now im tearing up

Reviewer: naddie
Date: 07/21/08 7:51
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

Okay...that was couldnt of developed the story a bit more could you?? I was away to say sorry but i dont think i should, you are a crap writer, and your story sucks like wasnt even worth all..ever.

It could of been something had you written more than two lousy chapters and gave snape a better dying scene...POINTLESS.

Reviewer: Ariana
Date: 09/23/07 16:41
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

wow that was really uhmmm random.... it actually made me laugh =/

Reviewer: Ariana
Date: 09/23/07 16:41
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

wow that was really uhmmm random.... it actually made me laugh =/

Reviewer: Slytherin_Bad_Girl
Date: 01/19/07 5:56
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

This is really really sad. Poor Severus!

Reviewer: phoenix_tears13
Date: 09/08/06 16:03
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds


Reviewer: Cynthia_Snape
Date: 04/16/06 1:40
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

wow..........thats weird!!! good ,but weird

Reviewer: SexY_LydZ
Date: 08/13/05 18:45
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

Love it! Love the casual yet meaningful "You don't love me?" thrown out there. Sort of makes you think maybe there was something going on with them? Lol there it goes, you've set off my hyperactive imagination! Congrats! (loved it!) .:LyDz:.

Reviewer: DracosPunkGirl
Date: 07/24/05 16:23
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

So sad.*smirks* Sorry, this story was good, id love it, but after reading hp6, hbp, I think Snape diseves it. Good story though. Snape was highly twisted! Yay Im glad u mad him die!*Claps hands* (The story did make me a little sad.) Still hate Snape, though. I give you a 10!

Reviewer: Kestrel
Date: 06/25/05 16:38
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

Hi! Ms. Meriadoc Brandybuck (me) recently changed her username to Kestrel. You recently reviewed my story called The Course of True Love Never Did Run Smooth. I just wanted to let you know that it is now on the new username, and I'll update there. I'd love it if you'd re-review!

Oh, and I just wanted to show you the old review you wrote- it was so funny!: "omg I heart this story like whoa... I am a HHHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGEEEEEEEEEEEE Shakespeare fan, and seeing a fic using stuff like this makes me swoon... plus the fact that its the marauders, who are my almost most favouritest (its a word now...) characters... I frolic forth to read other fics penned by you, and I hope you continue this one... woot... P.S. 10000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 OUT OF 10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

You made my day with that one!

Reviewer: SilenceSSlytherin
Date: 06/16/05 21:37
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

*is tearing up* *sniffles* that was so sad.....i didn't think he'd kill himself!!! how's hermione gonna deal with that guilt. kind of surprising to just have "you don't love me?" thrown out was good though. a shocker but...perhaps it was meant to be?

Reviewer: Starmaiden
Date: 06/09/05 19:59
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

Um....that was...odd? A little more character development might help. Snape's "You don't love me?" was kind of weird, coming out of the blue like that.

Reviewer: Ms Meriadoc Brandybuck
Date: 04/22/05 8:19
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

Hmm... I hate it when Snape dies! Well written, but a bit confusing to follow. 7/10. (I really, really care for Snape!) P.S. Might you review my stories? Thanks!

Reviewer: slytheringal
Date: 03/14/05 11:32
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

So...Snape committed suicide, and also killed Hermione? I'm slightly confused, though strangely happy and self-satisfied.

Reviewer: nightstar723
Date: 12/28/04 1:20
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

wow dark sinister i wish you hadent put such a quick end on it i usually save those kinds of endings for hopeless storys that are impossable to continue (i havent posted any storys yet i am trying to get atleast 20 chapters before i post to keep people happy while i write the next ones) great story and congradulations on makeing your first story its better then allot Ive read *no offence intended to anybody*

Author's Response: thx... I guess I just didn't know where to go with it, so I ended it quickly... I always figgered he'd be the suicidal type, tho... I hope you do well with your story, but 20 chapters is alot to have done before you post... of course, I shouldn't be talking, as I try to have it all written by the time I post, but then again, most of my stuff is like one or two chapters... first stories are hard... Lurve, Cassandra

Reviewer: weasleygurl
Date: 12/26/04 14:49
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

ok that whole story confused the hell out of me

Reviewer: weasleygurl
Date: 12/26/04 14:48
Chapter: A fateful ten seconds

ok that whole story confused the hell out of me

Author's Response: sorry that was so confusing, it was sorta supposed to be... i guess, not really... oh well... Lurve, Cassandra

Reviewer: Dana Marie
Date: 12/22/04 14:10
Chapter: An unfortunate, yet fortunate meeting

I will admit, the whole Hermione/Snape thing is not for me - HOWEVER, as a person who lusts after Snape/Rickman, I totally dug the whole angst thing he had going on. The whole "Stupid! Stupid! Stupid!" inner-monologue whenever he was around her gave me the giggles, and I admire your ability to write a short story and do it well! (I've never written anything *short* in my life!) Two French-manicured thumbs up!!! Love, Dana (aka Gaenora Gwennan - I always put myself in my stories *tee hee!*)

Author's Response: hey, thanx for the sweet review... sorry I didn't reply earlier, the rents dragged me off to see old people (i think they're related to me...) who don't have an internet connection... it was torture... anyways, I liked his inner monologue too, but I never thought of my ficlet as funny... hmm... I guess... cause lotsa peeps have been saying that it was funny... oh well... the hermy/snape thing isn't for most... 'tis not really for me, either, but it was in my head, and I went with it... lol... Lurve, Cassandra

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