this was billant!!!! it was very orginal.. u should write more.....alot more...
This is most likely my favorite fan fic ever! I loved the creativity and thought that went in to this story. Keep up the excellent work!
good keep it up
Seren? Valen Virgas? Good story...Very original...
Author's Response: Yes... who are you? :)
Lovely little story. The quotes and the people and the scrapbook and oh! it was brilliant! You definately deserve to be the first featured on Mugglenet Fan-Fiction!
this is touching i love it! rock on
This is probably one of my favorite pices of literature, let alone favorite fanfic. I like the many other reviews here strongly urge you to write more. You look at things from just a new perspective and I don't think I could have ever written anything half as creative as this. In short, brilliant!
I loved that story! It was really touching and you have great perspective. It was really unique and I loved the way you put everyone in a new light! Kepp up the good work!
That was so cool! It must of taken ages to write, and i loved the whole hermione/dung thing. Really original!
That was a lovely fic. The character studies of both Hermione and those she was looking at were brilliant, and the way you phrase it is touching. You have a brilliant creative streak, and you really should write more - a lot more! Now I'm just gonna go read this again ^^
Yay! You showed Dung in a favourable light *waves Mundungus/Tonks flag* and you had a brilliant character sketch of Hermione. Not only was it her studying the others (and she has a brilliant unbiased view of them) but we studied her as well. She is kind, caring, thoughtful and insightful. Mantolwen and the Weasley kids.
First off, I have to say that I loved the various references you used throughout the story. I was most familiar with Schindler. You think of things in an abstract way. I've never seen a fic that showed Mundungus as anything more than a bum. You have a striking sense of creativity. I strongly urge you to continue writing.