Brilliant. Absolutely wonderful. It was so touching and beautifully written, I cansee why it's the featured story. I hope to see some more of your Fanfic in the future.
Whoa this is a very well written story and is very enjoyable to read, I hope you finish it soon. I'm gonna read the rest of the storys you've written, anyways I hope to read the rest and see more fanfics by you, keep up the good work. ~Emma
That was an amazing story. It sent shivers down my spine, very well done!
It was really good. (too tired to write a long review but it was really well written ) Fantasic Story!
Woderful, no more said... oh yeah, made me cry too
Incredibly well written! A well thought-out and well-written look into Hermione, showing her very in character by analysing everyone and everything in a sensible, unbiased way. I also liked how she sees Mundungus as more than just a drunkard and a bit of a bum. That is a first! I enjoyed the bit about Ron and Harry. It really seemed to fit her without leaning peticularly to either Hr/R or Hr/H. I congradulate you on the whole!
That was absolutely brilliant. The style of writing was great, and it was just so moving! Keep up the good work!
That was beautiful. I love how it was from Crookshanks point of veiw. That was a great fanfic, and definately deserving of the first Featured FanFic. You are very poetic, and need to write more.
Author's Response: Er... it wasn't from Crookshanks POV. Although looking back, I can see why some people thought so... ;)
Wow. That was an awsome read. The story is really moving and powerful. I hope you write more.
This is beautiful writing. A wonderful story, and it truly deserved to be the first featured fic. Keep up the good work!
made me cry!
this, as everyone has said, is amaziing, absoulutly, your work is really touching and I hope you keep writing!
Wow! I got goosebumps when I finished reading it. You are a truly gifted writer and the originality of this story is awesome. Hearing about various people from Hermione's perspective was very moving. This is my favorite fanfic so far. Keep on writing!
It's really wonderful. I love the way you tied all the quotes in with the character sketches, and the sketches themselves have a really unique insight to them. I've never seen Mundungus written from that perspective, and part with Harry and Ron is wonderful. You write beautifully.
moved me to tears.
wow, that was wonderfully written! you really got all the emotions across. keep up the good work
Wow.... I thought it was just beautiful... very emotional and original...keep on writing!!
Hello Mrs. Rowling :), thank you for explaining Hermione's feelings towards those Order members is such a beautiful way. You have given us something to tide us over till the HBP. You never cease to amazse.
Author's Response: *blinks* Mrs. Rowling? I'm not Mrs. Rowling.
I'll take her bank account, though. o_O
Wow.. I'm new to fanfic and all, but I liked this a lot! I always read so many theories about stuff that has actually been in the books, but it is so interesting to read theories of what characters (other than Harry) are thinking/doing on their own. I'm officially intrigued! More, more! :)